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RumpskA
03-12-2006, 06:35 PM
Which one is the best? Any help appreciated.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v238/scomo13/Art/RenjiSketch.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v238/scomo13/Art/Ichimaru.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v238/scomo13/Art/Kenpachi.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v238/scomo13/Art/Byakuya-BAD.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v238/scomo13/Art/Renji2.jpg


Thank you
UrbanRevolution
03-12-2006, 06:41 PM
there all good but i would have to say
Kenpachi is on the top of my list.....

nice work!
SLVR
03-12-2006, 07:52 PM
I like the very top one of Renji. I think that one looks the best IMO.
ZangetsuTensaTensaZangets
03-12-2006, 07:52 PM
i like the sketch of renji in the funny hat
it is very nice
thank you
fuoheru
03-12-2006, 07:57 PM
Its between renji 1 and ichimaru. However it's probably ichimaru because in renjis pic, his right arm is out of proportion. Everything is good, just the arm throws it off. The ichimaru one looks good though because it looks similar to kubo's version ^^
ZangetsuTensaTensaZangets
03-12-2006, 07:58 PM
no no ichimaru looks too skinny
i will let my mother feed him so he will be strong and big like me
RumpskA
03-12-2006, 09:07 PM
Well Ichimaru is supposed to look skinny and froglike...- he's Ichimaru...



his right arm is out of proportion. Everything is good, just the arm throws it off


His right arm, or the arm to the right of the page?
fuoheru
03-12-2006, 09:24 PM
his right arm, the one thats up.
Byakuya7
03-12-2006, 10:08 PM
The first Renji sketch is the best, I think. Ichimaru's arms do look a little skinny, so if you fix that, then it should look great.
RumpskA
03-12-2006, 10:24 PM
The first Renji sketch is the best, I think. Ichimaru's arms do look a little skinny, so if you fix that, then it should look great.


Unfortunately, I can't erase ballpoint pen :P


Although I like them skinny and exaggerated, I think it makes him look cooler.
RukiaYuza
03-12-2006, 10:34 PM
Hello! :)
I believe that my favorites are the first Renji, Ichimaru, and Kenpachi. I think that the drawing the first Renji has the most life in it and the proportions are very good. Renji looks happy in the drawing. I really like the Ichimaru drawing. It really looks great I think that the arms are a bit thin. I wonder if you are trying to show that maybe he is not as happy at the moment as he should be. If he is thinner it might make him seem sad somehow. I might be reading something in that. Now to Kenpachi I really like his expression on his face. I like that you have Yachiru with him.
On the last two I would love to see you work on Byakuya again. I think that you should work on the proportions of the second Renji but the colors are great.
In short a lot of great drawings. Keep up the good work.
RumpskA
03-12-2006, 10:43 PM
Thanks all.


Yea on that Byakuya I messed up the eyes, I have yet to fix that.
Kabane
03-12-2006, 10:52 PM
I'd say first renji one. Looks very close to the original imo.
Cheryl
03-13-2006, 06:44 AM
The best one...is the very first Renji! XDD <3
Zanga
03-13-2006, 08:23 PM
Zaraki looks good, and the last Renji one could use a little work, but it's still good.
M_Ghey
03-13-2006, 10:14 PM
I like the Renji sketch, Zaraki and Gin. Good work.
RumpskA
03-22-2006, 02:55 AM
I got one more to throw at ya, another ballpoint (as you can see from the sloppy pen marks in the big black areas... stupid Uniball...)
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v238/scomo13/Art/HollowIch.jpg


hmmm, it is a little small, but yea.



Thanks again for the input.
RukiaYuza
03-22-2006, 04:34 AM
Hello! :)
I really like the Ichigo drawing. It is intense and I don't think that the ink looks bad at all. I believe that you did a great job especially with the face. Keep up the good work.
Vlad
03-22-2006, 06:04 AM
I think Renji first drawing is the best.
Cheryl
03-22-2006, 02:09 PM
Whoa, your latest Ichigo drawing looks exactly like the manga!! It's very good!
adorkable
03-22-2006, 03:02 PM
Wow, the Ichigo one is very impressive - and you've done it with a gunk pen (lol, that's what my maths teacher calls ballpoints, and I still use them).

Very nice artwork. The Ichigo one and the Zaraki one are my faves. :winking56
chin
03-22-2006, 06:33 PM
Kenpachi is most natural among the sketches...
Endess Wings
03-22-2006, 06:49 PM
Hey! Hey!
there all so good!
I don`t know!
your very good!
:musak:
RumpskA
03-22-2006, 10:11 PM
Thanks. Yea it was cut off on the sides, so about 1 cm (in real life) on both sides wasn't part of the picture. And if his pants look kinda weird it's cause the pic cut off pretty much under his cloth/belt loop.
chin
03-23-2006, 01:44 AM
I got one more to throw at ya, another ballpoint (as you can see from the sloppy pen marks in the big black areas... stupid Uniball...)
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v238/scomo13/Art/HollowIch.jpg


hmmm, it is a little small, but yea.



Thanks again for the input.
hey...only saw this one... it's great too!! your drawing got soul ... if you know wat i try to express... :LOL:
Avenged Sevenfold
03-23-2006, 02:07 AM
Your latest Ichigo is by far the best, very immpressive.

A7X
Pipp-ORK
03-23-2006, 02:25 AM
The first Renji pic is a little unproportional, his arm should be longer (reaching a little past his ass). :D


Other than that, though, they're all really good (I like the Zaraki one the best, by the way).
RumpskA
03-23-2006, 04:06 AM
The first Renji pic is a little unproportional, his arm should be longer (reaching a little past his ass). :D




I think someone spends a little too long studying the... non important parts of the characters? :winking56
Momo
03-23-2006, 04:31 AM
hehe I like the first 3 yeah of Renji, Ichimaru and ken/ Yachiru byakuya... I dont know... seems kinda different in the part of the face and the last one of Renji looks cute hehe
grimm_fans
03-23-2006, 05:01 AM
I love all of them
Shinji
03-26-2006, 05:05 PM
Gin is the best! He's suppose to be a little skinny, that makes him look more sneaky and fox-like. But they're all very nice.
RumpskA
04-03-2006, 03:54 AM
Yea I totally agree with you on that.
Alright I made another ball point one, except I guess it's kinda a spoiler. It's from the manga chapter 201, so..... yea... I don't think it's actually that bad of a spoiler, but don't go by me.
Here's the URL (not the pic, so if you click on it your hopes and dreams and computer wont be crushed, whatever.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v238/scomo13/Art/Rukia.jpg


I realize that her eyes look strange. That's because I completely messed up on the left one, accidentally making the pupil very big, so I had to scrape off the pen ink with an ink pen (the one where you actually dip in in the bottle of ink). In real life, it looks much better- the left eye doesn't seem all blackish gray- there's more white in it. So when I scanned it, the light did somehting weird and it made the black more defined. If you hold it normal, it looks normal, and if you hold it in front of a light, the eyes look white.
RumpskA
04-07-2006, 03:07 AM
Haha... depressing... maybe I should post it in the manga section.
Reefern86
04-07-2006, 03:33 AM
hmmm it's getween the first and the third