humans

[the purifier]

human traitors

slowly it continues,
the biting.
pain consumes fear,
feeling consumes pain.
life lies still,
nothing is moving.
except the humans,
doing what they do best.
the ever unknown humans,
the destoyer of worlds.

slowly my world comes to an end

[재]

is this a poem or something? if it is, then nic job

[the purifier]

yeah its a poem created after being hurt many times.....

[emmasu]

i totally agree with you, even though that we are consumed by pain and hate, we still keep doing all of these things, people nevr learn from all of this, they keep hurting each other

[Byakuya7]

very realistic poem, I like it. A bit depressing though, but I think that's what you were going for.

[the purifier]

yeah i was really down at the moment so......at least something good came out of it...

[Sanzora]

Short yet to the point, and oh so true! Nice one

[Endess Wings]

WOW! tells we sowly made the world we live come to end in the ways we act as humans!

[MatsumotoRangiku]

The poem is great it is also true I have had friends that sudenly turned int enimys as a kid so it also shows what real life is like so I respect it alot.

[Lolable]

yeah realistic and true
though i hope u never hurt in this way again