Memories Cloud the Soul

[Helikaon]

Time flows around us,
Memories coming and going.
Ages never stay,
You're mind should never stray.

Take me back to those places,
where memories were given birth.
The times worth remembering,
When all we felt was mirth.

Crying in the moonlight,
Memories take a turn.
find your inner peace,
Or all you will do is burn.

Memories cause suffering,
can you ease the pain?
Memories leave a taint,
that may forever stain.

Memories cause happiness,
will they always remain?
Like those times we sat,
talking in the rain.

Never forget your memories,
hope they never die.
Replaced by the emptiness,
that makes you want to cry.

Memories are always with us,
tears will ever remain.
Good to the bad,
but time is still the same.

[summer_faerie]

Hey Ice this one is really good! Gosh I swear I have read it somewhere... lol .... No but truely, it is well done. And nice to see it in one piece as well!

[Daifuku]

wow!~~~
I like this one... well this is the first to read it so yeah haha I really love this one :p specially this part:

Never forget your memories,
hope they never die.
Replaced by the emptiness,
that makes you want to cry.

nice and deep :)

[Katen Kyoukotsu]

Nicely done Ice. Way to help break in the new poetry section :P

[emmasu]

i think this is the second one that you wrote about memories, right?

[Helikaon]

yeah it is, though i like the theme.. and this one is better

[iladys]

Ice, this one I like. Its pretty simple but it flows well. :doindadom

[Lolable]

YAY first one in new section ownage man i<3 it deep :D