My Manga!

[neostar8710]

http://groups.msn.com/SuperSpoon/chapter1.msnw

please go and join and give it a read. and please comment on the message board giving me your opinions. i'd greatly appreciate it..^___^

[Uzichida Cantameru]

you draw all those ur self (and its a good story)?! wow @_@ *speechless*

[Pipp-ORK]

Wow...This is great! Did you come up with this all on your own? Awesome job!

[MooL]

Wow, that's very interesting. I hope you're looking for criticsm, though.

I'd have to say that your art is lacking, and there isn't much depth, meaning that the art doesn't seem to be complete. It seems that you need to add layers with shading and light sources and direction to pull a reader in.

I know there are plenty of tutorials out there, if you'd like to check something like that out.

[edit: here we go - http://www.eclipseunleashed.com/ ]

[neostar8710]

i do appreciate critism..andi do know that it lacks depth and stuff..i'm trying t work on that..i always have a hard time with that...weekly releases start may 1st..so please join and keep reading..i promise to get better!!..^___^

[Tsinsanato]

not bad, not bad at all
i, too, have my own manga
http:\www.freewebs.com\bokutashiwakamio
please note, it's been, like, half a yr since i updated, so it's a snich better

[Doe]

Very impressive, Neostar!

I guess I have to agree that definition needs some tweaking, but, you really have a good eye for composition. The angles, layout and perspective are great. You'd be a fantastic storyboard artist as well.

Keep it up!

[neostar8710]

ah well thank you..then please keep reading and wait for the weekly releases which begin may 1st!..^___^

[Doe]

ah well thank you..then please keep reading and wait for the weekly releases which begin may 1st!..^___^


Will do. ~___~