Regret

[BeeCrest]

Fighting to meet what the foreboding wind brings,
we are lost in the switch from dark to light.
Destiny refuses to reveal itself on the beaten path,
so I'm held up waiting in the blood-choked night.

The sword is burdened by the warrior's sorrow,
blade is stained by more than just a passing death.
Sin and regret mask the courage in the strength,
You never know what to expect until the last breath.

Separating evil from the intended good deed,
the trained mind is broken to see differently.
Beyond the surface a view unknown is seen,
yet the mist from the rain covers the road quietly.

Fighting to free myself from the inner guilt,
A light is shining upon the journey to guide the way.
No one wants to carry regret that forms pain,
forver the path continues until the break of day.

[Lolable]

i wanted the other part but then is cool too
anyways it is soooooooooo awesome and colorful
The sword is burdened by the warrior's sorrow,
blade is stained by more than just a passing death.
Sin and regret mask the courage in the strength,
You never know what to expect until the last breath.

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fav part

[Icestorm]

very good bee! imagery is strong and powerful, and i liked the theme haha its like some of mine. Beautiful once again!

[BeeCrest]

Thanks, i'm glad you guys really liked it because it's one of my personal favorites.

I tried to express darkness, but also hope, did I do that?

[Icestorm]

Yeah, it had a very dark setting but u gave small hope in parts.