Lenne
06-24-2006, 07:38 PM
One Word
If a single poem
describing the lush tender young grass
with the tingling scent of morning dew drops
drifting upon the wind as it blows past
out into the cerulean skies and beyond,
The birds now soaring ever so free
amidst the warmth of sunlight in a dream
gliding with the gentle sway of trees
leaving shadows upon the flowing stream,
The gentle sigh of twilight resounds
while the dim sky reveals a faint crescent
hidden covertly behind disappearing clouds
with the hot sun’s gradual descent,
Then into the veil of night settling soon
a duet by the stars that twinkle shyly
melodious to the incandescent moon
a lullaby to the world slumbering quietly,
Can be written with one word,
then why not just
‘Spring’?
~
this poem was written last year in response to some attack on my writing style, this person said that i used to much imagery and description, and thus he portrayed my poetry as weak and without meaning. For those of you out there who believe that poetry must be of a certain form in order to be acceptable, dont use your own personal bias to judge what people write. thats not the point of reading, nor is it the point of writing. I thank you for taking the time to consider my poetry.
:pangel3:
If a single poem
describing the lush tender young grass
with the tingling scent of morning dew drops
drifting upon the wind as it blows past
out into the cerulean skies and beyond,
The birds now soaring ever so free
amidst the warmth of sunlight in a dream
gliding with the gentle sway of trees
leaving shadows upon the flowing stream,
The gentle sigh of twilight resounds
while the dim sky reveals a faint crescent
hidden covertly behind disappearing clouds
with the hot sun’s gradual descent,
Then into the veil of night settling soon
a duet by the stars that twinkle shyly
melodious to the incandescent moon
a lullaby to the world slumbering quietly,
Can be written with one word,
then why not just
‘Spring’?
~
this poem was written last year in response to some attack on my writing style, this person said that i used to much imagery and description, and thus he portrayed my poetry as weak and without meaning. For those of you out there who believe that poetry must be of a certain form in order to be acceptable, dont use your own personal bias to judge what people write. thats not the point of reading, nor is it the point of writing. I thank you for taking the time to consider my poetry.
:pangel3: