Time

[VampyreLord]

Post your poetry here under the theme of "time"...feel free to post comments and critiques but please do not post any poetry here that is not of the correct theme.

Here is one of my poems. I hardly ever choose to make them ryme.

Time

Eternal, immutable, invisible, inexorable
More subtle than a shadow's sweeping silence
Always present, yet always moving
Leaving cruel wounds in it's wake
The scars on a weary face
Reminding us of our fate

[MaskedDrifter]

(First one I ever wrote on here was this one)

Time

Always There
But Nowhere
Never See It
Always Feel It

Chops Life
Adds Trife
Hard To Cope
Where Is Hope?

Kills Hill
Eternal Will
Kills Man
Always Can

Impossible To Stop
Or Get on Top
Live Life
Without Trife

[Rising Phoenix]

Time

Time's a weard thing my friend.
It connects us in strange ways
And binds us together like vanes.

Telling us that there’s no return.
And that all our descisions are absurd.
‘Cause if we fake our lives.
There’s plenty of time.

And as the wheels turn.
Our lives seem to burn.
Into the void they smoke.
And out, into the world they walk.

Time’s a weard thing my friend.
It separates us in strange ways.
And blows as away like vines.

And as the river flows.
Our lives seem blow.
Into space they shout.
And out, onto the earth they mute.

Telling us that there’s always a way.
And that all our decisions are true.
‘Cause if one follows his heart.
There’s plenty of time.

R.P. 26/6/06.

It feels good to be able to write again after a 4 month gap. :). Nice topic Vapyre lord!