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Rising Phoenix
06-27-2006, 09:51 PM
just wrote this:

The piano.


The girl with the piano.
The one who danced away.
In the garden of red roses.
She lies there motionless.

A small bird shall sing.
Not of joy, not for love.
But for sorrow.

For her eyes are cold.
Her hair filled with leaves.
And her heart cold.

And the piano’s silent.
Her ghost haunting me.
Telling me that there’s hope.

For were there’s death.
There’s life.
Were there’s sorrow.
There’s joy...

by R.P.

iladys
06-28-2006, 04:27 AM
Woah,R.P...this poem is great. I can imagine it happening, and it sends shivers down my spine. I love all your poems, R.P and twas wondering if you put all of them on a site or keep them in one document because I would like to read your past work :)

yumisan
06-28-2006, 10:09 AM
yo Rising...what a great poem you wrote.i didn't know you were such a great person in writing poem.i guess i should check out more of your works.:D
write more please.:)

Rising Phoenix
06-28-2006, 07:14 PM
@Iladys. Thanks for your kind words. I'm afraid I don't have a website dedicated to my writting and I usualy don't post my poems in any forum. Glad you liked it.

@Yumi. I'm glad that you liked. I've been writting for 3-4 years and have quite a colection. I'll post some of my old stuff later on. ^_^

Cheers,

R.P.