A cry left in the dark

[Helikaon]

Oh pity those fools
that fall on there face
when all they do
is take life as a race

Who can die quicker?
i wonder to my heart
Will it be me and myself
or my soul that is ripped apart?

Oh pity those fools
who trap themselves away
they pull themselves in
"I'll deal with it another day"

I dont know about you
but i am dead
In the sense that
my emotions stay locked in my head

Express your feelings
for that is why they are there
do not fear the thoughts
that you may share

For in the end
you just might ride
this journey called life
left on the side

[Sanzora]

Damn... That's a powerful one... And it makes me think quite a bit. And what actually scares me is how many people I see daily that do just that, live their own lives in the sidelines. Beautiful poem Ice, just beautiful :)

[BeeCrest]

That's really good ice, I really really liked this part:

Express your feelings
for that is why they are there
do not fear the thoughts
that you may share

It's nice how you gave a view and also advice.

[iladys]

Ive bothered you about this before but I never really posted anything. This poem is beautiful in the way it has powerful imagery. We're both worriers, that's why we make a great pair,neh? =P

[emmasu]

"pitty fools" you said
"living on the left side" you calimed
thats what you think
others people lives, you only saw ablink

never judge people, never say judges
never say fools, never feel pitty

if you want, give your hand
if you really care, step in and give your help

never say fools, never say pitty