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iladys
07-07-2006, 04:20 PM
The title is in Japanese and you'll have to figure it out. I'm not sure whether you will understand it but the poem speaks for itself.
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Connections of the divine spark,
Runs through our veins;
Flowing through the blood of affinity,
Circulating through the path of life.

Surrounding the never knowing,
The ones who walk this path;
Its lifeline never slowing,
For all that brings is death.

Arising through our birth,
It grows throughout the years;
Anticipating a bond,
As we keep on searching...

It may be found right there,
Or never found at all;
May be found through distance,
Or found through time.

What is found may be taken,
Or left there in the ground;
Eternally bringing happiness,
Or damned through this path.

Decisions representing the ending,
Representing how we end this life;
Walking through life contented,
Or walking through life with regrets...

layla
07-07-2006, 04:25 PM
lol, nice poem! its kind of spoiled for me since i can read the titleXD (its written the same as in mandarin :p) but yea, i like how you wrote this, describes how i feel all the time^^ great work

keep writing!

iladys
07-07-2006, 04:32 PM
Lol, I know I'm learning chinese =P Thanks shiz *hugs*

Lolable
07-07-2006, 05:25 PM
xD the truth is that the title intrigued me :p
but its cool and as shaz said it describes what i am feeling xD

Helikaon
07-08-2006, 06:52 AM
very nice shaz :D i liked it, it was very deep and woved and flowed well to a good ending

sto67
07-08-2006, 07:59 AM
chinese is the same, and the japs copied the chinese to gain kanji:P
interesting poem though, a slightly different perspective on the topic at hand.