My Smile

[emmasu]

Dedicated to the dutch boy:biggrinlo

Smiling, something I forget long time ago
Laughing, has been forgotten along with that flow
My cheeks, never looked that way since I was a child
My teeth, no body saw them, only me, just to be a slide

You made that smile on my face
You erase that sad face
Laughing, is all I do when I talk to you
Happy, I would not know, but I do because of you

You asked me what is wrong.
You did that with such a sweet song.
You did not know who I am, but you care
My sourness was not your business, but you bear.

We met; we were in the same pain
We talked; we were struggling in our own rain
Both of us are afraid
Both of us are dread

You opened your arms for me
My face, no matter how do I look, you still love me
With your language, you said
With my poems am saying

Now am writing this, my hands are shacking
Now am thinking, my heart is jumping.
“Honey”, you were the first one to tell
“I love you”, you were the first one to tell

Hold me in your arms forever
All I want is just to be with you forever
Sweet, sensitive that’s me
Please, be gentle and hug me

Emma

[iladys]

In a technical sense, there would be things you need to work out but understanding the meaning behind the words, this poem is based on your emotions and I have no right in saying what is wrong and what is right in this. However,em well done because I can picture this poem quite clearly.

[emmasu]

In a technical sense, there would be things you need to work out but understanding the meaning behind the words, this poem is based on your emotions and I have no right in saying what is wrong and what is right in this. However,em well done because I can picture this poem quite clearly.
even though i did not understand what you meant with that " this poem is based on your emotions and I have no right in saying what is wrong and what is right in this."
but thanx