Drown

[layla]

Drown (silent reprise)

So they tried to fill the holes
And yet,
alone she was still crying,
Shedding tears unnoticed,
quietly...

But they wondered why,
and desperately searched
for a reason (just one)
while she continued
to drown,
silently...

Even from afar,
they try to grab hold,
but still lost to
forlorn darkness,
wishing and praying,
She disappears
without a trace...

And left, with those teardrops
a damp stain on black.

July 7, 2006

[emmasu]

well, i do not know what to say.....................

[unwaken]

the way its structured, reminds me of a song. =)

very raw and touching.
its kinda painful in a nice kinda way. =\

[layla]

lol, yea, it wasXD was inspired^^

[iladys]

Sometimes hearing a song can evoke feelings and inspire people to write poems based on the song, or what they felt when that song was played. Its beautiful Shiz, I loved reading it and picturing it in my head. Lovely..

[SoundWave]

Sweet.. me likes.. At first it feels a bit dark, the way I like it.. hah.. But the more I read it, it feels more and more comfortable. argh.. it's hard to explain but I tried.