kiss of death

[RevRuby]

broken promises lie like petals blown in the wind
the floor of my heart littered with withered hopes
the flower bearing trees stand silent and condescending
how dare i hope? how dare i love?
my dreams play back, a broken silent movie
tear stained and streaked with blood
i cannot stand to watch, but i lie
broken on the floor, cold stones press my face
dead hands carress my hair
dead words meander into my ears
and like the death that seeks to steal my breath
you offer a kiss
your pity pales my heart
i prefer death

[odanion]

*cries* I love this poem a lot...I don't know how hard you tried on it...but if it was 2 seconds or 2 years...it is simply perfect...

[RevRuby]

was very impromptu, proll about 5 min of typing time. and maybe only 1 or 2 trying to find the right words.

[odanion]

*bows down* then you must be a godess at this :p because I loved it

[RevRuby]

nah, just emotive! lol. when i need to express i either draw or write. explaining never coems out right

[odanion]

nah you just rule at this... *sticks up sign* COME one COME all!!! and read rev's awesome Poem...it is a must read for all poem lovers

[iladys]

Ruby,that was just amazing. I can picture it in my head. You're a really great poet and I would love to see more of your poetry if you have any to share :)

[yumisan]

very touching....can feel the poem in me.a very good work.*sob* just kidding :D
very nice one.

[RevRuby]

thank you muchly everyone ;) i will try to dig up some more of my recent stuff.

[aI]

*Applaudes*

You certainly do have a way of making the words jump off the page an into my subconsious Ruby...

Nice one...

[RevRuby]

thank you muchly ai ^_^ allt hese great ocmplements, it's hard to believe

[odanion]

yay I hear more poem coming! bring them on...I want to read :)

[Rising Phoenix]

broken promises lie like petals blown in the wind
the floor of my heart littered with withered hopes
the flower bearing trees stand silent and condescending
how dare i hope? how dare i love?
my dreams play back, a broken silent movie
tear stained and streaked with blood
i cannot stand to watch, but i lie
broken on the floor, cold stones press my face
dead hands carress my hair
dead words meander into my ears
and like the death that seeks to steal my breath
you offer a kiss
your pity pales my heart
i prefer death

That was lovely, very touching and very sad. So I:

I hope that the withered tree within you shall bloom.
And that the lark shall nest again within you soon.
So that its song,your song, shall echo across your heart...

And thus your valley shall bloom again.
With hope, with joy, with love.

Just remember, when death comes knocking on your door.
Don't open straight away. Think of the lark within you.
It's waiting to sing again and your valleys green again.

Hope I cheered you up.

Take care and take time to heal.

R.P.

[odanion]

That was sweet of you RP I really like it, and I agree with it too

[SoundWave]

WOw.. one word, fantastic... Very good job on this one ruby.. I like it a lot.

[RevRuby]

thank you muchly all. reminds me i need to go ahead and post some more here. thank yous o much all.

as far as my heart healing, that poem was written as i decided to stop loving him, and stop being hurt by his actions ^_^ that decision was very freeing.