Contradiction

[Isis]

Are you there?
Are you listening?
Your presence is felt,
Yet I barely hear your voice.

I know my feelings are true,
The constant dreams tell me so.
You share the same view,
Yet why are these thoughts here.

You tell me never forget,
And stop hearing that voice in my head,
With you, I don’t remember it at all,
Yet it creeps back up to me.

Do I contradict?
Do I lie?
Do you contradict?
Do you lie?

I want to hold on to you,
Yet that song says “let you go”;
You want to hold on to me,
Yet that song says “let me go”.

You whisper in my ear,
Those three words I know so well,
A smile forms on my face,
Yet instantly I hear your distant laughter.

You whisper in my ear,
Those three words I want to hear,
I turn around to face you,
Yet all I see is air.

Silent affection,
Or maybe silent fears,
This heart contends to know,
The difference between reality and fiction.

But you were right there next to me,
Your hands were just covering my ears;
When I turned back around again,
I was lost in the depth of your eyes.

Though different we may be,
With these notions and views,
Our feelings shall remain,
Through the thick and thin.

Though similar we may be,
With our passions and choice of friends,
Our feelings shall remain,
Through the thick and thin.

Love is expressed through actions,
Or maybe is just more than words,
This heart is contented to know,
The difference between reality and fiction.

[yumisan]

good one nee-san.^^
the best part i like was the tenth stanza and the last stanza..
you should write more..i want to read it:D

[Ai]

You tell me never forget,
And stop hearing that voice in my head,
With you, I don’t remember it at all,
Yet it creeps back up to me.

^ Best....:p....8/10

[Rising Phoenix]

Another lovely creation of words and pictures Iladys! :)

Thanks for sharing

[Sacred-kun]

Just awesome. Have you ever thought of becoming a professional poet? :P
This Peom is really deep, I like it. I see no errors or mistakes either.
I'll be looking forward to your next peom, thanks for sharing.

[Lenne]

nicely done, the emotions in this were very well portrayed. great job

keep writing!

[Isis]

;___; Thanks minna, I really appreciate your comments and encouragement ^__^