1st

[Ai]

In the depths of myself
my souls true heart waits
Patiently waiting for it's chance
The chance to shine

To shine out of the darkness
The darkness that covers all
The darkness that has no name
The darkness of the facade of my youth

At the heights of my achievments
my souls true heart shines
bursting out with energy
Siezing the moment

To leap at the chance
Lighting the flame
Lighting the darkness
Lighting the dark past


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Mhmmm something i thought of quickly ..My first submission here...But you have to start someplace. eh...

[Isis]

Pretty good for a quick one and a first! Well done Ai. Its a good poem, loving the imagery behind it. Keep on writing!

[emmasu]

i like it, i felt weird when i read it, i do not know how to explain it................................................ .., i do not know

[yumisan]

nice one and a good one for a quick thought.really loves the meaning of the poem.very good.:)

[SoundWave]

Me likes... Nice one Ai.. :D

[Sanzora]

It sort of speaks to me... If this is the first, I would like to read more. You have a good way with words