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emmasu
07-16-2006, 04:55 PM
My heart is loaded with memories
Its full with sadness and miseries
My tears are just keep falling
I wish I can find away to stop them from falling

Am so weak right now, I feel like am going to fall
My legs, my hands, can not feel, am like a doll
My heart is going to stop bumping
My blood will stop running

My vision is blurry
Feeling numb in all the parts of my body
My body is trembling, soon will fall
Soon my body is going to roll

That’s all I can say
All the things that I can ray
It seems that am faking
If you think so, why do not you be in my hating?

To stop this pain, death is the only call
Do not say no, cuz you do not know whats like to fall
This is so painful, I can not take it anymore
Please let me die, just to be pain no more

Isis
07-17-2006, 01:48 AM
Althought the last circumstance is completely different, you have inspired me to write a poem relating to this. All around us, people try to say things to get to you and sometimes you feel like no one understands what you're going through but some do. Though situations may be slightly different, there are people who can relate and whom you can talk to, Em. It pains me that you think this way but I'll keep on being there for you until everything's ok because the one thing I never want is to lose a friend ever again.

SoundWave
07-17-2006, 02:01 AM
I find that darker poems have a greater Impact on me, it''s easier to "feel" them.. You know what, you really reached me with this one.. I can only say that it's really something very good. To say that some1 is faking when they're hurt is cruel... Pain is a part of our lives... I can't say that I've felt great pain ever, but life goes on and so must you.. ^^

emmasu
07-17-2006, 06:51 PM
@iladys: as always you are there, thanx
@N0s: again you are the best and you really touched me with your words

SHiKaMaRi
07-19-2006, 11:47 AM
This poetry is very inspiring. Its one of the best i read so far, great work.