Fly High Angel

[BeeCrest]

Fly High Angel

Things don't get in the way
With your attitude of fire
Eyes of strength and determination
Mask gentleness dormant in your heart
To reach above the storm clouds of the damare
You Fly High Angel
Flames of Hell beat the pace of wings
Hold close those you love to the warmth
The burning embers reflects the part of you that protects
There's nothing to lose when wielding fury
You don't let things get in your way
Cast aside hesitation in the wake of unleashed crime
When it happens there is only what you want
Fly High Angel


thoughts? :/

[Isis]

Woah Bee, excellent poem. Imagery is there and the words flow so well :doindadom Im inspired to write a new poem which also has to do with wings, and as well as Emmasu's latest poem. Btw, could you check out my new song 'In the eye of the storm'? I want some comments and criticism :p:

[BeeCrest]

No problem, i'd be happy to :)

More comments appreciated!

[SoundWave]

Wow... short and quite catchy.. sounds like something from a song... Love it!.. :D

[Sanzora]

Very powerful... the words you chose certainly paint a picture! Bravo!

[SHiKaMaRi]

.. I don't know why i'm always posting under Sanzora.. but anyways...
Like everyone said from above, the poetry is very catchy and interesting. Good work