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Isis
07-17-2006, 04:16 AM
In her reign of glory,
She was resplendent,
Such pure light radiated from her,
Her wings and self showed the signs of innocence.

Yet who would have thought,
She would be tainted with tears,
Tainted with blood,sorrow,
For which only the heavens could see.

Her fate oh so chosen,
This curse cannot be undone.
Hitherto, she lives on,
Her pain and memories keep her going.

She has known many,
Learnt valuable lessons of love,
Friendship,family,independence,
From these people who have long passed.

Her vision of the right path,
Draws near, or fades away,
Yet she continues this journey,
To search for her calling.

On the way, there were those who,
Tortured,abused,loved,cherished,
Gave meaning to the word 'hope',
Filling up only a small part of her.

Tragedy takes up her heart.
Yet she can smile,enjoy simple things,
For that time when she needed it,
It took her away from that easy path known as death.

She has risen and fallen,
That is her destiny,
After all she's been through,
Her broken wings lay limply on the ground.

But those broken wings heal themselves,

And she flies again into the sky.

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A poem I felt, brought on a lot of meaning. This poem was influenced by Emmasu's poem 'My Heart', BeeCrest's poem 'Fly High Angel' and the song 'Broken Wings' by Tomoko Tane.

yumisan
07-17-2006, 10:23 AM
great one nee-san...the song Broken Wings by Tomoko Tane was great too.i like the third stanza very much it means alot to me.the sixth stanza was great to.the means of 'hope' was deep enough.great job.

SoundWave
07-17-2006, 02:00 PM
In her reign of glory,
She was resplendent,
Such pure light radiated from her,
Her wings and self showed the signs of innocence.

Yet who would have thought,
She would be tainted with tears,
Tainted with blood,sorrow,
For which only the heavens could see.

Her fate oh so chosen,
This curse cannot be undone.
Hitherto, she lives on,
Her pain and memories keep her going.

She has known many,
Learnt valuable lessons of love,
Friendship,family,independence,
From these people who have long passed.

Her vision of the right path,
Draws near, or fades away,
Yet she continues this journey,
To search for her calling.

On the way, there were those who,
Tortured,abused,loved,cherished,
Gave meaning to the word 'hope',
Filling up only a small part of her.

Tragedy takes up her heart.
Yet she can smile,enjoy simple things,
For that time when she needed it,
It took her away from that easy path known as death.

She has risen and fallen,
That is her destiny,
After all she's been through,
Her broken wings lay limply on the ground.

But those broken wings heal themselves,

And she flies again into the sky.
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A poem I felt, brought on a lot of meaning. This poem was influenced by Emmasu's poem 'My Heart', BeeCrest's poem 'Fly High Angel' and the song 'Broken Wings' by Tomoko Tane.
Well the ending was quite surprising... Nice.. :D I put some words that I didn't understand in bold...

Isis
07-17-2006, 02:13 PM
thanks N0s! Those words are advanced english words but I liked their meanings. Anyway, resplendent means having great beauty and splendour while hitherto means until this time.

SoundWave
07-17-2006, 02:19 PM
I c... thanks! I always wanna learn more english words...

Btw I almost forgot..

"She has risen and fallen,
That is her destiny,
After all she's been through,
Her broken wings lay limply on the ground."

That part was awsome..

Isis
07-17-2006, 02:22 PM
Its ok n0s. Thank you! And thank you nechan for your comment :)

BeeCrest
07-17-2006, 02:57 PM
I wrote maybe five poems on this subject, and you have one that sums it up perfectly, AWESOME! It's really good, I can't wait for more :)

emmasu
07-17-2006, 06:35 PM
I c... thanks! I always wanna learn more english words...
Btw I almost forgot..
"She has risen and fallen,
That is her destiny,
After all she's been through,
Her broken wings lay limply on the ground."
That part was awsome..
me too N0s, i love that part, iladys, its amazing, it gives hope to anyone who reads it, it just amazing
on thing, thank you for this peom, really thank you

Sanzora
07-19-2006, 09:10 AM
This sounds all too familiar... as if from a dream. Beutifully written Iladys. ^_^

Lolable
07-20-2006, 11:44 AM
just as i told you
its so beautiful i wish i can write something so beautiful <33333