Some comments for improvement, please.

[tornarchon]

Here's a painting of a page I did recently. Took me a few hours to do it, and I just want to know which areas can be improved on so I can do a better piece next time.

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/17780189/

[Corgeta]

o pretty :)

[Ryudell]

I like the swirly clouds^^ It's nice!

[tornarchon]

Thanks a lot!