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Sanzora
07-21-2006, 12:49 PM
An old one of mine... I was kinda going through a rough patch and this was the result... Thought I'd post it.

How?

Why do you chase me away?
You say I’m meant to be your protector…
How can I protect you when you run away from me?

You fear I judge you weak,
So you fear your own weakness
In the fear of my opinion…

Why should I judge you?
Why should I look down on the person
That has been my strength?

You defend shadows with your life.
You assume you can read a person’s mind.
You fight with enemies who reside within your own…

Because your imaginary foes take the forms of those you love
You push the realities away in fear,
Fear that your illusions might hurt you.

How can I help you when you push me away?
How can I comfort you when all you hear is lies?
How can I show my love to you when all you see is:

Judgment…

Betrayal…

Failure…

An Illusion…

I only wish I knew how…

Isis
07-21-2006, 12:55 PM
Sanzy! *is proud* finally, you post one of your poems! I've missed them so much. Anyway, this poem is lovely. I like the imagery behind it. Great job Sanz and i hope you post another poem soon :)

Sanzora
07-21-2006, 01:05 PM
Lol, will do ;) Just need to scrounge around to find them and dust off the old pen. Thanks for the compliment

SoundWave
07-21-2006, 01:28 PM
Lol... I got a little mysterious feeling from this poem... Gotta say I love it though.. Keep 'em coming.. ^.~

Icestorm
07-21-2006, 02:34 PM
very nicely written, it potrays your feelings and emotions well in series of questions, directed to yourself yet the reader too. The reader finds himself asking the same question, the answers slip between the cracks of my fingers. well done.

Lolable
07-21-2006, 03:15 PM
yay another of your poems sanzy <3
lovely and mysterious
you are agenius in poems xD
I WANT MORE go dust more plz :p

*Hollow*Ichigo
07-23-2006, 07:57 AM
lol sounds like my friend!