Crab vs. Cricket

[BeeCrest]

This was a joke a looong time ago. It's one of my very early poems so it isn't spectacular, but as long as you laugh a little I accomplished something. XD
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Crab vs. Cricket

It was a grand war
between the crabs and the crickets
The outcome was unpredictable
and the bloodlust in the air was the thickest

The mighty and courageous crabs
were like clawed giants
Blazing red and ready to fight
Surely they were at their finest

The brave and strong crickets
were pint-sized compared to the crabs
But nonetheless the swarm of chirping madness
held great and magnificant valor

The sun began to set
as the battle came to an end
The crabs came out victorious
And all the crickets were left dead
oh yes
>: )

[The_Supervisor]

Why the sudden revival of the crickety wars?? What's behind all this, it's a conspiracy right??

>.>

<.<

oh yeh, about the poem . . it's nice, but only the witnesses of that massacre will see it's true beauty I'm afraid

[SoundWave]

Such beauty, such bravery... All hail the crabs... Anyway, cool poem Bee.. ^^

[BeeCrest]

Why the sudden revival of the crickety wars?? What's behind all this, it's a conspiracy right??
>.>
<.<
oh yeh, about the poem . . it's nice, but only the witnesses of that massacre will see it's true beauty I'm afraid

I was going to post this poem eventually, I just suddenly remembered. Thanks for the compliment though, before you said it was crap, but I understand ^^ I have a new and better poem coming up soon, I'm typing it up right now.

[Sanzora]

Lol, it's cute. I'll give you that much Bee ^_^ Sweet

[yumisan]

lol...a nice and funny one,Bee...battle of the Crab and the Cricket.it looks like a grand battle to me.:D