View Full Version : My Manga..chapter 2
neostar8710
05-01-2005, 08:05 PM
http://groups.msn.com/SuperSpoon/chapter2.msnw
today is may 1st..and as i promised..the weekly releases begin today..so every sunday!..please comment and join..and tell me what you think..it'd be greatly appreciiated!..^___^
kinonai
05-01-2005, 08:52 PM
Great job :LOL: . (You might want to try working on proportions a bit more though ;).)
Vlado
05-02-2005, 08:30 AM
Cool , but Kinonai is right the proportions suck :)
But the story is good and it's drawn very well
kinonai
05-02-2005, 09:49 PM
Shh, shh, that's a bit harsh, Vlado! I certainly couldn't even do that good...then again, I'm not making my stuff float around on the internet...but still...
mel-mel-chan
05-03-2005, 04:35 AM
the proportion isn't necessarily that horrible at all. looks a lot better my old piece of crap works and my works i still consider a piece of crap. as an artist i'm also aware that sometimes people intentionally draw things malproportionate, so I can't really start in bashing much on proportion unless someone draws something, shows it to me, and asks if their proportions look right or that they think the proportions look messed up. I still sometimes make a few proportion flubs myself, but personally if what i do looks half decently appealing to me i say screw anyone who wants to gripe about my proportions.
kinonai
05-03-2005, 09:43 PM
Well, the only thing that I know is that proportions are hard. I will sit there and draw something down to the last detail and be completely satisfied, yet when I look at it again two minutes later, I can tell that I got the nose about a foot too far to the right. It makes me mad...
Kiechi
05-07-2005, 03:44 PM
Wouldn't it be easier to post all your manga releases in one thread? Makes it easier if people want to read up on it.
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