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I'm looking for some help on killing/maiming/destroying a villian but I don't want it to be to relistic but not too weird either. I don't have that much time at varsity to think. Someone give me a slight hand please.
RyuuKiba
08-02-2006, 03:51 AM
ok... not too real... lets see...
An old warlord, who saw the end of his days in a graveyard ended having his corpse involved in a satanic-like ceremony, he then absorved varius lesser demons and, after massacaring everyone there channeled his demonic powers into a beast-like form. With two huge demon wings and another two smaller ones right below the first ones. An armour covered his body, not completely, half of his head could still be seen. His eyes are glowing red and inside his mouth there's another mouth. Two huge demon horns grow on his forehead and his hair is actually a bunch of spines groing from his head. His feet have three razor sharp talons and his hands have two thumbs. He carries a demonic sword that can transform into a spear.
you can take the whole thing or only parts, I gave deas XD
if you need a name: Orienth,Oreion, Wyrev, Xeruan, Carsel...
Creepy but I like! You should read my thing on 'To a Fallen World" It'll be right up your ally.
...And the (insert name here, ill use villian for now) rose from the dead with mud falling from his face. Such that he looked like the undead that had been terrorising the villagers the past few days. The hero who was waiting for this time for a long while, was hiding in the shadows behind the gravestone and took out his most trustworthy silver dagger and prepared himself. She knew that when the time was right she would have to rush out and stab him in the right place. The villian started to move around after regaining the feeling in his legs and was about to run when she jumped off the gravestone did a back flip while in the air, kicked the villian in the nose, pulled out a sword and managed to distract it. The villian was tending its nose when she ran towards it and swiped at it. The villian ducked and easily managed to dodge the sword's blade. But he did not manage to dodge the dagger's blade which caught him in the femur!
'AAAAAGGGGGHHHHHHHHH!' The villian screamed with pain as he started to disintergrate bit by bit. Random bits of him started to disappear until he was gone.
There you go. U can use it if you want or not.
Stunninng, I'll use it soon enough. I have to use it, you're a DBZ fan, thanks!
Lol, thanks man. Like I said only use it if you need to unless you want to just chuck it in there for the sake of. lol.
I could use some more villians for my latest book, come read it some time. It's called Rising World, it's the second book, the first is To A Fallen World, both are pretty good, not blowing my own horn. Found in the same place as all the other fan fics! It's fun. :toocool:
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