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Helikaon
07-26-2006, 11:23 AM
Good
Evil
A struggle in the balance
yet man created this concept
was it man that bred it?

If the case was so
we are the ultimate evil
we are the ultimate good
yet the line blurs in society

times change
good replaces bad
bad replaces good
who decides?

Nature was never either
surival is the highest place
morally animals know there place
it is humans that lost it

Water in the grand scheme
is just a cycle
pure but polluted
forever flowing

forever seeking that ocean

yumisan
07-26-2006, 03:13 PM
hey a good one icey.it really true that the concept of evil and good is created although it has difficulties to overcome it.a very nice poem.it looks like the best one to me.:)

Helikaon
07-26-2006, 09:55 PM
ah i would have to very much disagree that this is my best.. this could probably quite possibly be my worst poem, but thanks anyway

Sanzora
07-27-2006, 12:46 PM
I like it... It has many a truth in what you said. Yet another masterpiece from the great Ice ^_^

Helikaon
07-28-2006, 06:03 AM
why thankyou very much, haha never been called great before! :D