Rage

[Sanzora]

I don't like it when people make me mad...

Rage

Rage, Fury, Battle lust…
I long to grasp a sword,
To wield it with might, vigor and strength
That will help to conquer worlds!

How I long to taste sweet blood
Spilt through the battles of war;
To fight for causes each within their own right;
But on the field who the hell cares what for!

I wish for battle, yearn to fight
To bring my enemies, broken, to their knees.
I feel the heat coursing through my veins
Giving me the strength and the means.

Power surging, heart racing,
Armour solid and battle ready.
Anger giving me demons’ wings
To simply make my weapons all the more deadly.

Staring at me now all you see
Is the mask showing the calm outside.
But glance into my eyes and be afraid…
For they have nothing to hide!

[Katen Kyoukotsu]

Someones ANGRY XD. But I liked it, the flow seemed a bit off but overall a good poem

[Lex]

Hey Aneki haven't you let me read this one before, it sounds so familur to me...

[The_Supervisor]

Nice poem, flow could be better like Katen said, but overall a good poem :)
hope u've cooled down a bit by now :P

[iladys]

Sanzy! *hugs* Hope you're alright. I like the poem. A bit off but it still brings out a lot of emotion :headbang:

[yumisan]

wow..lots of angry emotions in it.well it is good to express it out.it makes you better and the poem is great.hope you are fine now.

[Sanzora]

/me blushes...

Thanks for all the concern guys. Yeah I'm a little better ;) After re-reading it I see what you guys mean about the flow and that, but in all honesty at that particular time, it didn't mean much to get the flow right :p

I'm fine now though... I doubt you guys should see too many more unexpected outbursts like this again :) lol. Thanks for the support!