Forest Heart

[Katen Kyoukotsu]

Lost in deepest dark
I turn my head towards the forest
The savior of my soul
The one place I can turn

Few can hear the call
Of the darkest deepest places
Even fewer learn to live
In this prideful, scorning world

But I have heard the call
And my body defies my mind
Trekking towards the place
That is most like myself

I enter and its quiet
Not scary but serene
Peace in life ive found
But much more their is to see

Dreams of ancient towers
Kings and dragons in the sky
Only serve to taunt me
And make me love it more

For if the silence calls you
Where anything can be
Come to my abode
And visit your real home




WHAT CHA ALL THINK. Katen ish so sad.......no comments:(

[Isis]

Interesting choice of words and concept Katen. I liked the imagery that i saw and the last stanza. Well done!

[Icestorm]

yes i love the concept, its like the "If a tree falls in a forest, who will hear it?" thing.. you know.. its like an adventure of imagery taking u to places that you would never think of

[emmasu]

you are good writer, what can i say?

*cheer up man:doindadom *

[yumisan]

ahh...a great one....scary yet serene...that was a nice poem.i can clearly imagine the fifth stanza.it was a great one.