3rd

[aI]

Popping over the wall of reality
I stumbled across a problematic person
This person watned to block and turn me around
To keep me from the haven over the inner wall

Dejected i slumped and turned about
Only to spin back around and with a wave of my hand
I sprinted past the annoyance
Racing to the inner wall ahead

Once at the wall i leaped it like a frog on steroids
To land on the other side on all fours
Standing up i noticed the garden
Perfect in all of creation except for one thing, Myself

Having fought my way into perfection
I finally beheld that i myself could not stay
Because of my twisted and ugly views on the world it'self
I myself was less the perfect

[Helikaon]

wow very nice view on life itself, indeed no-one is perfect.

[BeeCrest]

Once at the wall i leaped it like a frog on steroids
To land on the other side on all fours
Standing up i noticed the garden
Perfect in all of creation except for one thing, Myself

Having fought my way into perfection
I finally beheld that i myself could not stay
Because of my twisted and ugly views on the world it'self
I myself was less the perfect
I love this part. To me it's telling you not to seek perfection so much because once you obtain it you still won't be satisfied. Am I right? :|

Nonetheless, the poem is excellent. :).

[aI]

Its not so much as don't seek perfection..

It's more once you find what your looking for it will always be flawed because of your mind set..