Listen

[BeeCrest]

If I give blood
And pause time
Will you shut up?

Can you listen to me
I'm not messing around
Just pay attention
For one stupid second
Look me in the eye.

I realy don't care
If you enjoy seeing me
at the edge
I don't see the cliff's fall
that won't scare me
So for once in your life
Listen.


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This one, IMO

[Isis]

*hugs* There there Bee, I see you have a lot on your mind. If you ever need to talk,Im there for you :winking56 Btw, is it ok for me to add you on MSN?

[BeeCrest]

Of course you can add me, that'd be great ^^ Thanks for saying you'll be there for me as well, someone to talk to is always nice, especially because 90%+ of my contacts are guys >< But I'm okay, this time. Ehe...

[yumisan]

okay..bee...i saw it.like you mention it of course..this time your really letting out your anger.i can see that.

[sherenetms]

oO......Sarcasm. Anger.

It's short but has alot of feelings to it....hmmm...I LIKE IT!! :D
U certainly do know how to convert feelings into creativity. If only...if only i can write this well....

[BeeCrest]

oO......Sarcasm. Anger.
It's short but has alot of feelings to it....hmmm...I LIKE IT!! :D
U certainly do know how to convert feelings into creativity. If only...if only i can write this well....

Sarcasm.....in the poem? If I managed to express sarcasm through a poem, then I really have improved :doindadom
Anyways, thank you for the compliment sherenetms. I'm sure you can write something like this, my work isn't all that great. I've also been writing for around 6 months. It just takes time and practice. I've even been surprising myself lately, and I usually hate my work, but that's just my way of thinking XP