My Trina

[Icestorm]

Critic this and ill kill you..




My Trina

One day you find that someone
that captures that place in your heart
gives you the world back
life without her would be nothing

She is my love
i have never known what it is
Until i found my one and only
My Trina

Why does this world feel empty?
when I cant hear her voice
Why doesnt the sun shine?
when I hang up the phone

My Trina is my world
and in this world noone else exists
but for me and her
This world will last forever

I live this life for you
id leave this life before Id leave you
If forget myself
before i forgot you

I will continue to love her
even if she forgets me
Because no-one in this world
could ever mean as much to me

As my Trina

I love you Trina with everything I possess ..

[Sanzora]

What's there to criticize? Awesome Poem Ice! I'd love to meet Trina, she sounds wanderful ;)

[Isis]

Well done Ice,splendid poem. Emotional pieces are the best and to be able to feel something when reading it, even if there is little relation is good :)

[MasterWordSmith]

A pleasent read, I won't critique because I value my life too much xD

Nice job, seems like a lot of emotion went into this piece.

[Icestorm]

haha thats good word :D yeah truely.. it isnt that structured or anything.. its purely emotional

[Pink_Paper_Heart]

yeah awesome piece...so who's this girl u are talking about?! *hides* Dun kill me..

[Icestorm]

Its this girl called Trina and she is the most amazing person ever to walk into my life .. I thank god that i ever met her.. and treasure every day in her presence.. I love her so much, aka the above user :biggrinlo

[kaede822]

~wooot~

nice ice!!! hmm.. nice poem for PPH :D