Nation

[azusa_the_warrior]

This is a nation of

crooked Judges

crooked Cops

this is a nation

were wars don't stop

we are a nation that can't fix itself

we let our people die

but we still help others.

this is a nation of

crooked Judges

crooked Cops

sooner or later

this nation will pop
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Letter to my great-grandmother


I miss you so much I miss your bright smile. I miss the way me and you would watch TV together. I was your company and you were mine. I remember when I would come home form school and you would give me a hug and tell me to sit down and feed me you good soul food. You always liked to see me full, for me to never go with out and I loved you for that.

When you got sick I got scared I never seen you like this you were always smiling now that smile is gone. Why were you hooked up to all those machines?

The doctor told me you passed away I couldn't believe it, until I came home from school and you were not their. When I went to your funeral it still didn't hit me I just couldn't believe it, I could not even cry even when I saw you lying in that casket.

Its been six years and I haven't cried yet, I don't know if I ever will. I still have that quilt you made I sleep with it every night it keeps your memory alive in me.

I miss you and I will see you soon

I love you

Quentin

[iladys]

That's so sad, sorry to hear about that. It's a really emotional piece and t'was about to cry. As for your poem, I really enjoyed reading it. There was a constant beat and through simple words, expresses what needed to be said. Well done.

[azusa_the_warrior]

thanks man, i used the poem "letter to my grandma" in my english class, like all the girls in my class were about to cry and my teacher, that poem was the only way i could let my feelings out towards her.

and nation was a weird one for me I was thinking of like a nursery rhyme(spelling?) but i wanted to make a political poem so i came up with that one.

but thanks for the comments, i will try to keep them comming as much as i can