Kevin Klarowski
10-11-2006, 01:06 AM
Hello again! I wrote this about 3 years ago during social studies. My teacher told us to write a sentance about "something that roars" and I spent a whole 45 minutes coming up with this. It's rather short, but it's one of the best things I've ever written. I just wanted to know what y'all thought about it.
It's about a WW2 style submarine.
The roar of the engines drowned out the navigator’s warnings of how their ship would be crushed if they went below their current depth. The bow planes tilted down and the propellers began to spin faster. If the Captain had heard the navigator's warning he would have retracted his order, but his ever faithful crew followed his orders to the letter…and their own under sea grave.
It's about a WW2 style submarine.
The roar of the engines drowned out the navigator’s warnings of how their ship would be crushed if they went below their current depth. The bow planes tilted down and the propellers began to spin faster. If the Captain had heard the navigator's warning he would have retracted his order, but his ever faithful crew followed his orders to the letter…and their own under sea grave.