View Full Version : Upcoming Bleach Forum RPG game.
SheWr
06-20-2005, 04:27 PM
Greetings, you probably dont know me, but just to introduce myself - il be leding the BleachPortal.net Forum RPG game. For now the adress of the game wont be revealed, but i am in need of some assitants - GM's. The highest requierment - u have to be a normal storyteller. And to find that out, im making here a small contest - Post here a small fanfiction story about Bleach. Write anything you want - just related to bleach. The people with the best stories will become GM's in the upcoming Forum RPG game.
Also - all players will get their own picture and original zanpaktou - heres a small pic of the basic big-male-body il be using:
http://otaku.lv/uploads/20050620_751_fat-male-body.jpg
dancingcrane
06-21-2005, 08:38 AM
I may not have the time to GM, but i'd love to participate...if you need canon characters, I'd love to be hanatarou, or if not, anyone from the 4th division.
For your enjoyment, I hope, an excerpt, my own post, from a currently running bleach rp.
Here, a gathering of shinigami and others, meet to discuss an upcoming mission. Attending are Jonoteo, a human empath who is learning to see spirits, and Hige, a 4th division shinigami, who has a case of hero-worship for a kind and noble vice-captain, and a total crush on the lovely spirit that that vice-captain is about to do a soul burial on:
Jono went in, manuevering around the emotional signatures of the people he could not quite see or hear, and found a place on the other side of the room, away from the main action. He could see the White Lady conversing with several someones...and then another arrived at the door.
Hige had taken up the rear, before the new arrival had come, and glanced around, feeling somewhat embarrassed, but did not speak, as he joined the human, kneeling on the floor.
Jono was tempted to ask what had Hige feeling both amused and embarrassed, but Hige, out of respect, said nothing about Kira's situation, only remarking wonderingly at the number of Vice-captains, and something vague about the general flow of conversation. It was not his place to meddle in the affairs of Captains, and Sanae-sama must have had her reasons...
Then, the new arrival came, and Hige had to struggle to keep his composure.
It was Sakuraski-dono...hero-worship only began to describe it...Jono turned, surprised, at the sudden spike of emotion in his new friend, who seemed happy beyond happy, and terrified at the same time.
He had been the only Shinigami warrior that Hige knew of, who had hated the war against the Quincy as much as he had, and Hige loved him desperately for that. Through the entire tragedy, and the Hollow War after, his only consolation, that another had felt the same as he did. And...he played with the children in the Rukongai, as he did, visiting even Hige's old home, the poorest slum, the 78th district...
"Why are you so upset?" Jono whispered. "Who has come?"
But Hige could not answer. It would be too long a story for now, and would reveal his shame.
He had not known Ryusuke before the purge, other divisions seldom mingled with the 4th. But after, Hige had avoided him. He knew that the young warrior must have heard the rumors of the traitorous coward Medetai Hige. The one who had been seen aiding wounded Quincies and crying over their dead bodies. Only allowed to remain because he was one of the very last of the 4th alive. Those who knew the truth - that he was neither traitor nor coward - all dead. Save for Okuni Sanae. Okuni the mad.
Hige had heard rumours, too. The 4th have the largest ears, they said...and he knew, that when talk of the purge arose, Ryusuke would never brag of kills...
Insults, whispered or shouted, the unspoken shunning, he could bear from anyone else. Even these other vice-captains, who had not even acknowledged his presence.
That was normal. That, he could accept.
But he could not have borne it from Ryusuke. Better to keep his distance, pretend he could be a friend, than to face him and be shunned. Or, worse yet, be befriended, and see his hero's chances of captaincy threatened....
...It is what he wants more than anything...I will not stand in his way....surely, with all the vice-captains here, he will not notice me...
"and look, we have someone from the 4th to help us..."
He froze, his eyes downcast.
"As...as my taicho permits, Fuku-taicho-sama..."
It was Jono's turn, to place a hand on his shoulder, looking concerned. Hige startled, looking confused. " Forgive me, I have been remiss in the help I promised. I have pulled you into this. You have a right to see for yourself. Let go of your staff."
"My staff?"
"It blinds the Hollows to your presence, protecting you. But I suspect that it blinds you, as well...release it, and we shall see..."
Jono removed his hand from the familiar, beloved waxwood...and Saw. Just in time to see and hear a tall white-haired young man unsheath his sword and advance towards Kimiko.
It won't hurt a bit
He stood without the staff, and limped to stand between them, his expression solemn, and unafraid.
"No. You will not take her yet. I promised that I would help her, and I will. She needs to find something - "
SheWr
06-21-2005, 09:32 AM
oke. thats a good story. If u accept then you could be a good GM' = 4th division captain. IF you are interested then send me a PM and we'll make you your picture and Zanpaktou.
btw - about the RPG - it is thought so that it happens in a wery long time after the current things in the Episodes. the GM's will be the captains, but all others will start as academy students.
remember - u will be a original character! So no need to say that u want to be Hanatarou or something.
Ryudell
06-21-2005, 12:17 PM
never wrote a bleach fic yet, but here goes nothing...
It was close to midnight when he came in through the window, left open by Kon. Grunting, he jumped to the floor, briefly wondering how the mod-soul was coping with his eccentric family -
"ICHI - oooommf!!!!!"
"Shut up you moron!!!" Ichigo hissed frantically with one hand clamped over Kon's - er - his mouth. The mod-soul was shedding tears of relief, one hand clutching his limp plushie body. Kon nodded and Ichigo released his hold, wincing. Ew, saliva.
"Ichigo I'm so glad you're back," Kon blurbled. "It's been such a nightmare having to be you for so long... my eyebrows are sore everyday and I can't even flirt with girls cause you don't do it at you sister keeps looking at me wierdly and your dad kicks me awake everyday and I can't kick him back cause I'll break - "
"Alright i get it! You've been to hell and back but so did I, so quit *****ing!!!" Ichigo snarled and reached up to grasp Zangetsu. "Get out of my body, Kon."
"Wh - how am I supposed to - "
WHAM!!! Ichigo hit Kon over the head with the hilt of his Zangetsu and a green pill popped out to the floor. Muttering sagely about idiotic mod-souls, he quickly merged back with his body and got up from the floor. After making sure he didn't wake anyone, he picked up the pill and shoved it into the mouth of the lion plushie.
Instantly it came to life, screaming bloody murder. This time Ichigo didn't hesitate to slam it against the wall. "Didn't I tell you to shut up?!"
"Well you can do it in a much nicer way, moron!!!!"
"Hmph," Ichigo dropped Kon onto the floor and flopped back on the bed. That didn't put off the plushie. It determinedly climbed back up, curiosity glittering in its beady eyes. "Hey, where's Rukia-neechan???"
His hearbeat skipped.
"I wanted you to know... I'm... staying here."
Dammit... Ichigo closed his eyes and turned on his side, away from Kon. That certainly didn't help things. Kon stiffened and kicked Ichigo. "Oi, where is she?! Why didn't she come back? Did something happen?" Kon clapped his paws together in horror. "You failed, didn't you? You bastard!!! You let Rukia-neecha die - Waaaaa!!!"
THUMP, a second time. Ichigo had really developed his aim. "Shut up, baka," Ichigo growled, unable to keep his voice steady. "She wanted to stay there, so I left her. Nuff said."
Her smile, telling me she would be alright. I didn't need to turn around to know she wasn't crying when I left. She had made her decision, just as I made mine.
"Awww, and I saved all her drawings for nothing," Kon muttered, crawling to the foot of the bed.
That got Ichigo's attention. Sitting bolt upright, he grabbed the plushie, ignoring its yowls of outrage. "Where?"
"Ow -Lemme go you idiot!!!! In the third drawer so Let.Go!!"
For once Ichigo obliged without throwing it against the wall. The drawer was pulled open, and after throwing out several porn magazines (Isshin's - he'll have to pound Kon later) his eyes lit up as he carefully took out a small sheaf of papers.
Seeing these made him chuckle. Rukia had absolutely no eye for art. Even Yuzu's stick drawings were better, but he still felt his throat constrict. Suddenly her missing presence became too obvious to ignore.
Any questions?
Yeah, why do you drawings suck?
She was quick to reply to that. He couldn't even protest when she drew a curly moustache on his face, also badly. He had hated her then; this pint-sized shinigami who acted so high-and-mighty with him. But that changed soon enough, didn't it? Her impromptu sacrifice to save him, and her willingness to share her powers with him changed his view of her.
He turned to another one. Also from their early days; the time when he had to chase after Chad. She had tried not to make him worry, but she had been overestimating herself. Seeing her all bloodied up made him irritated, but she still tried to show she was alright.
She was brave.
Ichigo rested his elbows against the edge of the table. Pint-sized she was, bunny lover she was but Rukia was brave. Foolishly brave. Accepting her sentence, accepting death...
Gone, thought Ichigo as he put the drawings back in the drawer, alongside her crayons. The closet was strangely empty, the folded blankets patiently awaiting their owner who would never come. Just looking at the closet reminded him how small she was, yet she had made such a big impact in his life.
The moon outside was full, just like the night when she first crashed into his world. The night was clear, not a cloud in sight. And as he slowly drifted off to sleep, he smiled.
Thank you. Because of you... the rain can finally go away.
Note: Made up the way Ichigo forced Kon out, and took some dialogues from the manga. Sorry for any spelling mistakes.
SheWr
06-21-2005, 05:24 PM
you made Ichigo a little too rude... but that wouldnt figure anyhow - becuase there wont be a Ichigo in the Forum RPG. Well - the story itself is good. Il wait for some more to write and then il tell those who will be captains in the Forum RPG.
kinonai
06-22-2005, 03:35 AM
I will write one, although I am wondering if there is a word count limit.
SheWr
06-22-2005, 08:38 AM
uuuum...dont make it TOO long, so ppl dont get boored reading it =.=
kinonai
06-22-2005, 11:36 PM
Excuse me, but no good piece of writing is boring no matter what the length is. At any rate, I was more asking for a minimum, but I suppose I didn't word it correctly...ah, nevermind.
Sunfire249
06-23-2005, 12:13 AM
Wow, these are such good fanfics ^_^ I'm a writer myself but...I'm not feeling very creative today. So, you can make anybody in Bleach a main character right? Hmm... I'm looking forward to all the other fanfics that peopleare gonna write!!!
dancingcrane
06-23-2005, 01:53 AM
Actually, SheWr's looking for all original characters...no characters from the actual manga/anime will be included. From what I understand, the GMs chosen for this will be Gotei captains, and all others will be Shinreitei Academy students. Sounds fun, I'm looking forward to seing it unfold...
kinonai
06-23-2005, 06:36 AM
What? All new characters for the fanfic too? Feh, it looks like I'm starting over then...
dancingcrane
06-23-2005, 08:19 AM
Oh, sorry for any misunderstanding! The fanfic can include anyone from Bleach...
The rpg itself, will have pnly origial characters...
SheWr
06-23-2005, 11:15 AM
The fanfic can contain any current bleach character. But the RPG will have your original characters. also - you will start from the academy, later on you will have to finish it (by taking a real test ^.^ ) and then u can become a Shinigami.
kinonai
06-25-2005, 06:12 PM
Ok, sorry it took me so long (actually I forgot about it for awhile...heh...). I didn't finish it, and it's a little short, but you should be able to decide if you like my writing or not from it:
A grin snuck over his face as she foolishly ventured toward him. The night had nearly masked his presence, although enough of his flaring hair could be seen to reveal his identity. With obvious annoyance flowing through her, she marched heavily toward him with her hands clenched.
“Hey, Ichigo! You coming in?! Yuzu’s had dinner ready for an hour and we’ve been looking for you! Come in now, or I’ll—,” Karin’s baseball cap slipped through her fingers as she gaped at his attire.
“So, you went off to a costume party without saying a word?! Idiot! We were worried! Pfeh, won’t make that mistake again, that’s for sure,” absent mindedly, she scooped up a small pebble and flung it toward his head, “What’s up with you lately? Say something!” A tiny chuckle escaped from his lips as he pivoted to face her.
“That’s a pretty cool mask, where’d you—,” her eyes grew as she noticed the absurdly oversized weapon he was lifting from his back. Retreating slightly, she began again, “Stop joking around, Bro, that looks dangerous. Heheh, you’ve really got to hook me up with this costume shop of yours, though! Great stuff…” His pace quickened as he grew nearer and uttered something nearly inaudible.
“Wha—”
“I said,” he lifted the zanbaktou over his head and sprang toward her, “STAY OUT OF IT!”
“Out? Why—” The words instantaneously slid from her mind as she helplessly watched the colossal blade rush down toward her. Instantaneously, the scene dissolved and wind whipped past her limp body. While falling through eternal darkness, she futilely raised her arms above her. With the last ounce of energy in her, she screamed the only word that was racing through mind, “ICHIGO!”
As I said up there, it's not finished. I was going to make it so that the next scene would have Ichigo waking Karin up from a nightmare because he had heard her screaming his name. From there, I'm sure you could imagine the odd questions she might ask him and his reactions...
asian
06-26-2005, 04:22 AM
er...excuse my asian ignorance...but what's an rpg?
SheWr
06-26-2005, 09:50 AM
rpg = role playing game
btw -
someone who knows japaneese would be really good (since im european, i dont know it...)
dancingcrane
06-26-2005, 09:20 PM
In this rpg, you create an original bleach character (no chars from the series). Each player takes on the role of his character, like an actor. It's like acting on paper, or, rather, on your comp screen. All of us together, create a story.
An example of a current bleach rpg, is "Bleach | Advent Soul"; Here's a thread (one continuous storyline), for an example: btw, posts don't have to be long, some of us just like writing long ones...
http://bleachadventsou.6.forumer.com/viewtopic.php?t=167
SheWr is head guy here, his word rules. He will pick some to be GMs (game masters). They will be Gotei 13 captains, who help the story along. The others who join will be Seireitei Academy students, that is, shinigami-in-training.
If you want to incorporate japanese into your dialogue, but don't know any, there are sources, like below, that will help: there are japanese glossaries, some anime-related, all over the net.
http://poets.notredame.ac.jp/cgi-bin/jedi-inon
http://www.flame.org/~calger/animedict.html
Kuri_Shinigami
06-27-2005, 12:37 AM
Or either that actually take Japanese lessons. It helps you understand what people are saying in conversations.
SheWr
06-27-2005, 10:39 AM
Well...i needed japaneese to make names for your zanpaktous...
Kuri_Shinigami
06-27-2005, 05:47 PM
Shouldn't the invidual be responsible for the name of Zanpaktou?
kinonai
06-27-2005, 07:02 PM
I agree that we should each decide it for ourselves...there are TONS of online Japanese<-->English dictionaries out there.
added:
Actually, on the other hand, I agree that we need help. Sure, it's fine when you're just looking up one word, but when you are looking up more than one for a phrase, things could get tricky.
JAPPO
06-29-2005, 01:57 AM
EWWWWWWWW rpgs are just..... ewwwww
dancingcrane
06-29-2005, 05:00 AM
why eww? just curious...
Uzichida Cantameru
06-29-2005, 05:04 AM
he wass drunk b4,
anyway how is the rpg coming? and i missed why jap was needed anyone want to brush that over to me?
dancingcrane
06-29-2005, 05:05 PM
Japanese not needed...just adds more realism for those who want to use it, and so all the zanpakutou can have japanese names.
SheWr
06-29-2005, 06:22 PM
Oke, we still need atleast 2 moderators, so if u had in mind to write a small story, then please make it now.
Uzichida Cantameru
06-29-2005, 10:35 PM
Sorry to do a bit of a double post but sheWR, is the mod for this forum or the game only? Cause i can make a story but im curious on what mod i could become on.
SheWr
06-30-2005, 12:16 AM
hehe XD Well, youll be a mod in the game (its on a different forum)
yukino_silvermaine
07-02-2005, 12:48 PM
wahehehe... nice fics. i wanna see more of them.
SheWr
07-03-2005, 09:48 PM
oke, il ask again - please people, if you want to write anything, then please do it now! I need the GMs now..
Ryoji
07-04-2005, 08:43 AM
This is my first fanfic, so...here goes nothin.
Note: Characters are made-up.
The sound of running feet echoes throughout the white marble hallways of the Seireitei, suddenly interrupted by a titanic burst of air and rocks, the explosion rocking the immediate vicinity around the epicenter. If one may look very hard within that cloud of dust that had just been abruptly kicked up, one may see a man flying through it, thrown around like paper in the wind. He gracefully lands, rolling and finally, using his face as brakes, coming to a very elegant stop!
"TIME OUT!" The piece of paper yells out, who turns out to be a shinigami, his hands trying, in futility, to emphasize his dire request with the "T" shape, his eyes wide with paranoia from that last blast.
A laughter roars out from within the cloud, opposite of the shinigami, and a figure can be seen projecting the laughter. "That's quite the landing, Ryo-chan!" The figure yells from a distance, still chuckling about. The smoke clears, revealing a shinigami with a white robe, most likely that of a captain, with the 7th squad insignia in the back.
"Had enough now, Ryo-chan?" the captain says with a smirk.
"STOP CALLING ME RYO-CHAN, DAMNIT!"
"Fine, fine, Ryoji-kun...you have no sense of fun," the 7th squad captain replies.
"Ganryu-taicho, with all due respect, how the heck are you supposed to have a sense of fun in a battle?!"
"You're the one trying to call a time out! For your information, there are none!" Ganryu-taicho replies, his right eyebrow raised.
"Keh."
Ryoji's grip on his zanpaku-to tightens, and right at that moment, he yells out, launching towards Ganryu-taicho in a desperate burst of speed, hoping this next attack will at least touch his captain's garment. Ganryu-taicho, in response, stands there, still playfully pouting, then closes his eyes, a calm expression still on his face. At the last second before Ryoji's blade reaches him, Ganryu-taicho opens his eyes...
"Ryo! Wait up, damnit! Not everyone's as energetic in the morning, ya know!"
"You're just friggin lazy, Jarell! This is nothing!"
The forest silence is broken by the two's strides from branch to branch, the morning sunlight trying to fight its way through the forest canopy onto the ground. The thin rays of light reveal Ryoji, still young, speeding through the forest understory, and a dark-skinned man with jet-black hair, trailing behind him, cavorting towards the forest clearing, the sunlight becoming more and more abundant...
The wind blows through the grass field, the endless sea of grass interrupted by a giant lone tree. Ryoji and Jarell are under the great tree , lying down upon the ground.
"I never would have been able to lie down in a field like this, Ryo...not in my past life," Jarell says with a sigh, playing with a leaf of grass between his lips.
"Hm? You never told me about your past life. Where were you from anyways?" Ryoji replies.
"Oh? I never thought you of one to dwell in such thoughts."
"Not many people do," Ryoji says, his eyes wandering off towards a few leaves snapping off the great branches, blowing off into the distance. "They start over in Soul Society. They can't find their families, and eventually give up, enter their own makeshift familes, and it's life as if nothing happened...sorta. Sorry, I'm rambling on again..."
"You always do, but I'm used to you explaining yourself all the friggin time!" Jarell says, chuckling.
"Shaddup!"
"Sheesh, fine." Jarell closes his eyes, his hands moving behind his head. "Well...I'm from the Philippines. Slums of Manila. Me and my mother made a living selling cigarretes by the local cemetary. My dad was killed by the Japanese during World War II, right in front of me. That was my last actual living memory."
Ryoji felt his heart sink into his stomach. "I'm sorry...I shouldn't have asked."
"No, no!" Jarell replied, looking at his companion with a warm smile. "Don't worry about it; you didn't know."
Jarell then stood up, picking up his sheathed zanpaku-to, faced the forest, and took a deep breath. At that moment, the wind changed direction and picked up a little.
"I want to become a shinigami, so maybe I'll have an easier time finding my parents. I want to make them proud of who I am, and what I've become, something that I could never have done in my old life..."
Back to reality.
"Why did you become a shinigami, Ryoji?" Ganryu-taicho asks, his zanpaku-to pointed down at Ryoji, who's pinned against the ground, unable to get up. "What's your resolve?"
A pause, awaiting an answer.
"I--"
Ganryu-taicho cut him off: "That's it. You'll never get anywhere like that."
The captain pulls his weapon away from his opponent and sheathes it. With a sigh, Ganryu-taicho turns around and starts walking away.
"If you ever want a chance of even getting close to my level, find your resolve!" Ganryu-taicho demands at Ryoji disappearing into the mist. "Until then, have fun rambling on."
All alone.
Ryoji looks to his zanpaku-to, which lay to his right. His hand is still holding it.
Wish you were here....Jarell.
Ryoji
07-07-2005, 05:54 AM
O_O well I'm having trouble finding the actual phrase name for my zanpaku-to, so I just tried using the dictionaries listed here.
kyubisan
07-07-2005, 05:29 PM
Here's my somewhat pathetic attempt at fanfic:
Blood poured down his body, it became harder to breathe. Aizen was still stronger. He could not go on for much longer, he had to end it. Ichigo didn't want to live, he wanted to win. Ichigo had to ask for his help.
"Hey partner you want my help huh? Well partner let me kill this guy." replied the demon.
Ichigo started the transformation again. His mask started to grow, and his eyes changed again. The earth shook from the power and Aizen had only a smirk on his face thinking only of his expectations for this creation. Soon the battle would end.
The demon only thought of tourture and pain for his father and could not hold in his pure excitement. He disappeared from sight. Aizen looked around and kept on his guard. A sudden burst from the ground knocked him down and the demon struck. The demon wanted to play with his victim a bit more, showing Aizen how many times he could of died at his blade. When the demon started to get bored, he ran up to Aizen for the last time stealing his blade. The demon attacked with three black Getsuga Tenshous. The first Aizen dodged, the second he endured, but the third did it. Aizen was no more.
sillymich
07-10-2005, 12:40 AM
nice to know
kinonai
07-10-2005, 02:51 AM
nice to know
What? :eek13:
Donkmue
07-10-2005, 03:17 AM
Ah, this sounds like an interesting concept, I don't really want to be a GM though, which works since I'm not good at writing, but all of these fan-fics are fun to read and it sounds like we will have some creative GMs for when the RPG is ready. Good luck everyone.
Ryoji
07-10-2005, 04:56 AM
We still need more people to write fanfics! It doesn't hurt to try! See my fanfic? That's technically my first fanfic I ever wrote! NOW WRITE PEOPLE! SHOW THE LOVE YA'LL!!!
Ballistics
07-10-2005, 05:50 AM
Hmm I used to write fan fics all the time and I think I would have the time...cept I think after a while i would forget what the word "Fair" would mean so I think I'll back away from this project as in trying to be a GM...but everybody keep there writing skills sharp- no body likes a dull story...well any ways...don't forget to remind me when this little RPG starts...lol don't wanna be left out...cool~
Well there you have it amigos, OH yeah Bleach RPG is sure gonna be awesome! Ballistics out...[B]
SheWr
07-10-2005, 11:02 PM
oke, just like ryoji said - we need some more fanfics!
btw - to all gm's who r still waiting for their portraits and zanpakutos to be made - dont worry, till now i totally didnt have ANY time, but now (after a week) il have it all free, and then il do ewerything - also then we will start.
adede
07-11-2005, 04:33 AM
id like to help but i cant be bothered writing a story. please wait. i'll give u one soon. patience please.
kinonai
07-11-2005, 05:21 AM
May I suggest you try to have BP post your request? Since it's Bleach related, it might work out ;). By the way, how many more GMs do you need?
SheWr
07-11-2005, 02:40 PM
hhhm......2 more gm's would be good...
Ryoji
07-11-2005, 03:04 PM
Kinonai's got somethin there! maybe BP can help us out SheWr.
kinonai
07-11-2005, 04:00 PM
Well, if it's only two, it probably wouldn't be too hard to work out. Because of that, we should probably wait until it's ready to play and then ask BP to tell everyone about it. If they do, we'll probably get a ton of people.
SheWr
07-11-2005, 05:41 PM
well...telling lunatic to put a message when it starts was thought allready when i started thinking of this RPG....
Ryoji
07-12-2005, 12:39 AM
I already asked a friend of mine IRL to write a fanfic for this too; He'll be submitting it soon.
Kuri_Shinigami
07-12-2005, 02:46 AM
[ I'll take a whack at it >>; ]
Everyday was the same routine getting awakened by his Captain at 8 in morning and if he was lucky he was requested to join the Kuchiki’s for breakfast. Even more lucky if Rukia was there, but she was pronounced missing just several days ago. At this point Byakuya noticed a little slump in Renji’s performance in purifying Hollows he kept missing the target, even at his training that same day he did better. Coming back after the purification of the Hollow the Kuchiki put a hand on his Vice-captain’s shoulder it wasn’t like a hand slapped on shoulder it was soft and gentle clearly his Captain wanted to talk.
“Renji in my office at 7 in the morning sharp we need to discuss your performance lately” he said quietly
This was a surprise to Renji his Captain rarely spoke to him, scratch that he rarely spoke to anyone. Nodding along he failed to see his Captain had already left him, sighing he left to be back to Seireitei where he could relax since there were no new office papers for him to deal with. Grabbing a bite to eat from his house, he sat on his bed and wondered what he Captain wanted to tell him, he tried to sleep but it didn’t work until he read a book.
[ Renji doesn’t seem like the reading type =S ]
Meanwhile Byakuya was going through more documents that didn’t need to be signed but he took a look through them anyways as he flashbacked to that Captain’s meeting with the Commodore.
Commodore Yamamoto calmly dismissed all the Captain’s except for Kuchiki Byakuya silence mingled in the air for a second after the heavy oak doors closed.
”I heard she’s been gone for awhile we declared her as missing a few days ago as you already know, your job will be to her find at once to stop these rumors circulating about. I will not tolerate this foolishness anymore is that understood?” stated the Commodore calmly.
”Yes as you wish Commodore, I have no problems with this mission” said Byakuya in a equally smooth voice.
”Very well you and your vice-captain shall leave tomorrow in the morning that is all” said the Commodore and he left to retire to his room.
Shaking out of this flashback Byakuya returned to his paperwork and wondered how his vice-captain would respond to this mission. Shaking his head he looked over the documents carefully again satisfied he retired to his room within the Kuchiki household.
[ Kinda short...what do you think? =\ ]
Ryoji
07-12-2005, 03:17 AM
I never really thought Byakuya would be so...cordial to Renji, but besides that and a few run-on sentences, its not bad...sorry, I'm an anal butcher about grammar and punctuation.
SheWr
07-12-2005, 09:25 AM
okies - it is good, but has some minuses, like "Renji in my office at 7 in the morning sharp we need to discuss your performance lately" - that part to me sounds more like coming from a factory boss, not from Kuchiki Byakuya. And i think you made byakuya a little more.... soft... I remember Renji saying that Byakuya never cared for him... well but still it has something into it.
kinonai
07-12-2005, 06:27 PM
At one point, you said that this RPG would be held at a different forum. I was wondering if you already had it made...and if so, could I maybe see it? If not, I understand ;). I really can't wait :).
Ryoji
07-13-2005, 01:39 AM
OH, I'm sorry to announce it here, but please check this topic I made out...I want to improve my fanfic writing skills, so please just give me some feedback on it! ^^
http://forums.bleachportal.net/forum/showthread.php?t=2423
Kuri_Shinigami
07-15-2005, 12:43 AM
Hmm...oops? I'll edit that part...maybe..=/
Ryoji
07-15-2005, 01:12 AM
heh...is there anyone else who wants to take a shot?
Uzichida Cantameru
07-15-2005, 01:21 AM
i checked and still waiting for my many answers >< lol
kinonai
07-15-2005, 01:29 AM
Kill the sig. Now. Are all of those images even yours? For instance, did you draw that picture of InuYasha and Kagome? If not, you should either give credit to the artist or take it off. (And if you did draw it, then good job!) Anyway, we need more people to be GMs...so if you want to be a Captian in our little RPG, make sure you write a fanfic for us!
Ryoji
07-15-2005, 01:54 AM
Take it easy on Uzi man...but kinonai's right. It doesn't hurt to give it a shot! Please submit your fanfics if you want to apply for GM position.
SheWr
07-15-2005, 02:20 PM
hhhm...it seems like 2 more ppl will be joining the GM team. That means that the GM search will be over and we will just need to prepare the RPG forum. Also im right now drawing all the images for the GMs. (kinonai, ur zanpakuto is hard to draw >.> )
Ryoji
07-15-2005, 05:05 PM
lol...I hope I haven't been giving you a hard time SheWr. There are still openings for GMs, right, despite the search being over?
SheWr
07-15-2005, 09:18 PM
sure, sure - the more the better
kinonai
07-16-2005, 02:41 PM
I suspect that the captians being the only GMs is fine for now, but if this ever gets really popular, we will need a lot more. A lot of things in this rpg are based on the honor system, and we all know that no one follows that. (For instance, they have to add and subtract money from their account themselves. It would be very easy to cheat in some ways if we are not right on top of them...)
SheWr
07-16-2005, 03:28 PM
hhhhm....kinonai has a point........well we better discuss this at the game forums.
and if there come TOO many players then we can make leutnants also as GMs
NiteMist
07-17-2005, 07:33 PM
o_o Its closed? Im late i guess, and i was just about to write one.
Ryoji
07-17-2005, 07:35 PM
No, go ahead and write it! There's still some spots left.
SheWr: uuum! the link was a.....fake! >.> okies - the forum should only be seen when its ready, so only GMs should know the adress.....
NiteMist
07-20-2005, 02:00 PM
o_o Till when is this contest, because i was going to write the fanfic today.
SheWr
07-20-2005, 02:02 PM
well....since the two possible GMs havent replied for a long time, then i think i still can take some fanfics.
Ryoji
07-20-2005, 02:39 PM
No, go ahead and write it! There's still some spots left.
SheWr: uuum! the link was a.....fake! >.> okies - the forum should only be seen when its ready, so only GMs should know the adress.....
ohhh....oopsie.
kinonai
07-20-2005, 07:27 PM
o_o Till when is this contest, because i was going to write the fanfic today.
Go ahead, we still need more people. Only 6 have actually signed up at the forum too :eek13:
SheWr
07-20-2005, 08:52 PM
uuum, well only 6 are there since we shouldnt tell the adress for now. so that we GMs can make ewerything. Only when it all si ready, we will tell adress.
NiteMist
07-21-2005, 11:22 AM
(It sucks, but oh well, even if it doesnt get accepted i can be part of the rpg. I think..)
He ran through the busy streets of the city, panting heavily as the fatique of running for so long caught up with him. He looked back and saw his pursuer again, stopping to take a breath as he did so. It was huge, and it did not look of this world to him. It had a hole in its chest, that was big, but only a portion of the size that the creature had. As the thing spotted its target it uttered what it thought would be the last words Kyo would ever here. "Much..spirit energy..I will enjoy eating you". The thing stood up straight and stop crouching, to reveal its full size, and body. Kyo stared at its face in awe. it looked like a mask, but it completely covered the thing's head and showed no way of coming off. The hole in its chest stood out more now, as he could see it was bigger then he thought. "Its like it doesnt have a soul" he thought as he started to sprint again, "What is that thing.."? he said as he took a left turn into an alleyway hoping that he could elude the thing before it ate him for dinner. He ran down the alley only to be confronted with another obstacle. A dead end, he thought, as he realized the gravity of the situation. He was trapped with no escape. "I have two options", he thought as he looked around. "Fight or die", he said as he picked up a metal pipe that was on the floor next to him. "Here goes nothing." he thought as he started to grip the pipe tightly and prepare to charge at the thing. The thing was about 5 feet away from Kyo when Kyo made his move. He started to run straight at the thing, the thing smirked as Kyo got in its range, lifted his left hand in the air, and smacked Kyo to the wall like if he was a fly. Kyo coughed, and panted heavily as he once again grasped the pipe. "Your not going to get rid of me that easily" he said as he tried to stand once more. "You think you can defeat a hollow with a mere pipe? Foolist human"! The hollow said as it started to move closer to Kyo. Kyo attempted to stand up again, but his legs would not move. He had ran too much, and the impact of hitting the wall must have temporarily sent a surge of electricity through his body to tell him that he needed to rest his legs. The hollow, after seeing this, tried to take advantage of the situation. It paced twoards Kyo at a faster pace, and it had a great smirk on its face. It reached it's left arm out to grab Kyo when in a swift movement, the arm came off, and there was a person in front of Kyo (His back to Kyo), holding a sword. It was a person dressed in a black kimono with a white laced belt weilding a sword that was as tall as him, it was all black with a dragon etched on its side, which looked kind of like a crest of some sort. The person in the kimono looked about Kyo;s age, and had black hair. Before Kyo could say anything, the guy in the kimono said "Sorry im late Kyo" and ran to the hollow. The hollow attempted to grab the guy with his right arm, and in two movements the guy defeated it. First, as the hollow tried to grab him he slit his arm off, and jumped overhead to slick the hollow in two. The ollow discintegrated into the air, and was soon a thing of the past. The guy in the kimono turned around to face Kyo, as he shealthed his sword. Kyo immediately recognized him as his brother Kimishima. "What the--"?! Kyo started to say but was cut off by his brother who ran up to him, stopped, took something out of his kimono and flicked the switch. He used the memory replacer on his brother, and it knocked him out. Kyo fell fast asleep, only to dream of the reality in which he lived in, full of lies, deciet, and many more things.....
(I know it sucked.Heh, but atleast i got through it! Im proud of myself for just writing it, i have never written a fanfic before.I wont be home till 5pm but feel free to comment, even if it is a critisism.)
SheWr
07-21-2005, 11:37 AM
Okies. There are too much "as he" in the story.... also - u repeat names many times. But...when these mistakes are removed its a good fanfic. Il contact u on PMs
Cirue
07-21-2005, 08:30 PM
It's kind of long, and it's my first fanfic entitled "The Captain"
Ichigo, Ishida, Inoue, Yoruichi, Sado, Hanatarou, and Ganju walk slowly towards the enormous Shadow Mountain. At the base of the mountain, the group gathers to stare at the mind numbingly tall mountain. The dark mountain surrounded by mist, reeks of death.
“What the hell? You can’t even see the top of the mountain. Are you serious about climbing this Yoruichi-san?” asks Ichigo in disbelief.
“Of course I'm serious. This is the final test of your abilities as a group. Every squad is required to reach the top of the mountain without sustaining a single casualty.
“Ah. So we just have to hike up the mountain and hope nobody falls off right? Ishida asks confidently.
“Not exactly.”
“What do you mean Yoruichi-san?” Inoue asks confused.
Before Yoruichi can answer, hundreds of shrieks let out as though a war were about to start.
“Ah…Hollows?” Sado asks.
“Yes, but not just any hollows. These hollows are the ones that have been killed by all shinigami on earth, but they are ten times stronger. While the spirits a hollow takes over move on to soul society, the hollow itself is sent here” explains Yoruichi.
“No way! Ten times stronger?” The group, trembling in fear, asks.
“Yes, 10 times. But we don’t have any time to waste here. Every minute we waste, another hollow takes form. Let’s go!”
The group starts their journey up Shadow Mountain, but 100 feet into the ascent, their first hollow appears.
“Group, remember the plans!” Ichigo shouts.
Sado transforms his right arm and uppercuts the hollow into the air. While in the air, Ishida fires the arrows from his bow, and Inoue fires Tsubaki. As the hollow falls to the ground, Ichigo uses all his might to slice upwards and cuts the hollow in two.
For two straight days, the group hikes up the mountain fighting countless numbers of hollows. With their teamwork, they manage to get to the top.
“Is there supposed to be something up here to show that we made it up here?” Ganju asks of Yoruichi.
“Yes there is. Give them time to arrive. It shouldn’t be too long of a wait.”
As hours go by, nothing shows up to the top of the mountain. Hanatarou is busy tending to the minor wounds the group received from the hollows, and Inoue cleanses the body of all poisons.
“Hey we’ve been here for nearly 5 hours. When is something going to show…”
Just then the mountain starts to rumble. The spirit force of the being approaching the mountain is enormous.
“What is this spirit force? It’s stronger than any captain I’ve ever felt.” Hanatarou, trembling, says.
Just then, a gigantic hollow appears. Ripping through the sky, a menos appears. Shocked by the power of the menos, the group stands still trembling. The mountain top on which they’re standing is not big enough to withstand the blast of the menos. The menos swipes at the group. Most manage to jump out just in time to avoid it, but Hanatarou and Inoue feel the full effect of the enormous spirit flowing within the menos.
“INOUE! HANATAROU! Yoruichi! Please save them!” Ichigo shouts.
As Yoruichi tends to Inoue and Hanatarou, Ichigo, Ishida, Sado, and Ganju attempt to fight the menos. Ganju throws the rest of his fireworks at the menos, but nothing happens. The menos stands strong and so Ishida attempts to defeat it with a barrage of arrows. With a single movement of the hand, thousands of arrows fly from Ishida’s bow and toward the menos. It raises its hand and blocks the barrage of arrows. Sado then uses his awesome strength to try and punch through the menos, but the menos deflects the punch. Ichigo uses Zangetsu and pours his spirit energy into it. The shockwave Ichigo emits nearly pushes his comrades off of the mountain. He fires at the menos with all his strength, but the menos dodges with its quick speed. Ichigo feels as though there is no hope fighting this monster, but then realizes what they have to do.
“Yoruichi, are Inoue and Hanatarou awake?”
“Yes, they are. They just woke up.”
“Okay then. Everybody listen closely. We have to give Ishida all of our spirit energy.”
“What?! Why me?!”
“You’re the only one with a ranged attack that I can trust! Everyone place your hand on my Zanpaku-to and transfer all of your energy into it.”
As the group gives up their energy, and a bolt the size of the group radiates. With the amount of power in the arrow, Ishida realizes that there’s not enough spirit energy to take down the menos.
“Yoruichi-san,” Ishida shouts “can you lend us a hand? With your spirit power the arrow should be big enough to destroy this thing once and for all.”
As Yoruichi stands on the Zanpaku-to, the arrow becomes engulfed in flames of energy.
“Now! Take this you bastard! AHHHHHH!!” Ishida releases the arrow and the group fly away from each other. As the arrow soars through the dark sky, it strikes the menos in the head and explodes. The energy destroys the menos and shoots out across the rest of the sky.
“Ah It’s so pretty!” Inoue exclaims.
As the group looks on at the fireworks, an emblem falls onto the ground. Ichigo picks it up and reads the inscription.
“Congratulations Kurosaki Ichigo. For your effort in defeating the menos, you have been chosen as the new captain of the 5th Squad.” As Ichigo reads it aloud, the rest of the group looks on in disappointment as they have been rewarded with nothing. Ichigo realizes their disappointment and throws the emblem off the mountain.
“I don’t need to be a squad captain. This groups is all I need.”
[I could shorten this down if need be but most of the lines are One line quotes.]
linkrulesx10
07-24-2005, 02:14 PM
OK well i am really interested in role playing games (I play DnD and 3 other forum RPG games) and think i could make a good GM. <Insert something similier to a school captains speech about why i will be good for the position> Here is an example of a the way I Role play (Take into account i am doing this by myself so i will have to control other charecters then my own):
" So he's gone into hiding" Says Aaron to himself while drawing his soul slayer *S***, can't sense his power, he has to be around here some where* thinks Aaron after a quick survailence of the area
He then detects a large source of spirit power around 3 Kilometers away "Better run" mumbles Aaron as he goes off towards the source of the power
On the horizon through the buildings he can start to see a large black mass forming, this only quickens his pace. When he catches up all he see's is a large hallow along with around 50 bodies all with their spirit chains removed and sign of the spirits.
*Better use stealth and archery for this* thinks Aaron since the hollow hasn't noticed him yet. He quickly finds a high spot "Carry me through the wind and take me to my destination" he chants as he casts demon magic of teleportation
"Pierce the heart Raitron" says Aaron as his soul slayer transform into what looks like a big long bow. He quickly pulls back the string, as he does this a arrow of lightning appears as he pulls it back to full position and aims the hollow notices. "Take this" he yells at it as he let's go of the string sending the lightning at his enemy.
So what you do think?
P.S: I signed up to these forums just for the RP
kinonai
07-24-2005, 04:03 PM
If it was up to me, I'd say "You're in!", but it's not. (Although I'm sure Shewr will let you ;).)
Ryoji
07-25-2005, 05:40 AM
Hm...there's alot of "as he's" in there...it's a very commonly used style of course in forum/chat RPGs...I'm not saying it's bad, I'm just saying maybe you can try to change it around, and maybe distinguish yourself from others, and even putting more emphasis...I try to write in novel style, taking inspiration from the styles of books that I've read...it's also easier for me to decipher, since the dialogue is isolated to separate paragraphs.
SheWr
07-25-2005, 06:03 AM
uuum...since i hav not slept for a longer time and i just got home, then il read the stories later ^.^ , but.... we need only 1 more mod, so il pick one of u.
linkrulesx10
07-25-2005, 08:02 AM
It is the only style iv'e seen so it is all I know although I would like to see the novel style.
SheWr
07-25-2005, 01:31 PM
okies.... i have noticed that normally, only kinonai shows up at the forums to help the preperations... this gives me a bad impression - possibly such ppl will also easily forget about their GM jobs. Il watch for those who are too passive, they may loose their privileges, because i need active GMs.
linkrulesx10
07-25-2005, 01:36 PM
How do you define active is around a minimum of 5 mins a day free time enough (This occurs on school days with lots of homework usually and these are rare) and around a max of 1 hour (Occurs on school days without homework, tripple these figures for weekends....)
kinonai
07-25-2005, 06:53 PM
I think that "active" means going to the site as much as you can. Obviously don't let it hurt work or school, but once you come home, you should be on the site some, you know? I think Shewr means that all the GMs need to check the site at least once a day. After all, the game will not run without us.
linkrulesx10
07-25-2005, 10:18 PM
Yeah, that doesn't sound to hard... In another RPG I am still waiting for my jutsu to be approved, it's been weeks... :'( It is reall annoying when the GM's get lazy...
SheWr
07-27-2005, 09:37 AM
see - thats why i need max. - 13 good working GM's ! (well i dont need all 13 right now...)
linkrulesx10
07-27-2005, 12:22 PM
what do you mean by you need max, is it a person or ammount of time put into the forum or what?
SheWr
07-27-2005, 01:29 PM
nonono...i said that i need a maximum of 13 hard working GM's
linkrulesx10
07-28-2005, 07:50 AM
Oh I get you lol, Am i in the running to be one of these (Un)Lucky GM's? (13 is an unlucky number)
SheWr
07-28-2005, 11:18 AM
yeah....but since there r 13 captains (and GMs are captains) then we use hat number...
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Also:
khem, khem....i allmoast havent seen any post from - Ryudell, Kuri_shinigami, NiteMist and dancingcrane.... Dont worry if u dont have ur pics ready, u still can post (althou some hav the pics ready). We need ALL admins to work on the forum right now, so it would be nice if u would come post the needed things in the forum....(read the games annoucments to GM's about what u hav to do)
linkrulesx10
07-28-2005, 12:35 PM
Oh ok, so who are the Caps at this moment and when will you be releasing the site to the public.
Byakuya7
07-28-2005, 06:18 PM
I would be a really hard working GM. I have 7 to 8 hours of free time a day. Could I post my fan fic of bleach on this topic and see if its worthy?
kinonai
07-28-2005, 06:22 PM
It will be quite awhile before it's released because we JUST started. As soon as we think it's as perfect as we want it, we'll ask a few people to "test drive it". If they say that there weren't any huge problems, then we'll start posting the links everywhere. Now, there are only 9 GMs signed up at the forum (including me and Shewr), and only about 5 of them have posted once. About one or two of them seem to be serious about it, and the others...well, we hardly know they're there. If you haven't yet, go ahead a post a fanfic...I'm sure we could use you....
SheWr
07-28-2005, 06:31 PM
yeah, if they continue ignoring the forum, then il sureley need other ones...
Byakuya7
07-28-2005, 07:31 PM
Just to warn you this takes place wayyyyyyyyyyy before bleach.
A gentle breeze soothed the midnight air as the tranquility was shattered by deaths inevitable hand. The hollows became
a problem that soul society could not resolve. Thus, a formation of truly elite warriors was born that swore to cleanse and regulate the souls of these evil beings.
The group consisted of 13 powerful shinigamis who would bring balance between the living world and Soul Society. All hope was said to be lost for the
people of Rukongai. If the hollows breached the gap between the two worlds they would certainly engulf existence. They would feed on the souls of the innocent to
satisfy their insatiably empty cravings. One man held the destiny to fulfill the impossible. Yamamoto Genryuusai, the most skilled death god, would form the gotei 13.
A young man with silky black hair entered the main square of soul society. His voice drew attention to the death gods surrounding him. It was obvious that
he had the eyes of a warrior who had seen the aftermath of many massacres. He spoke triumphantly even though the town was on the brink of a disaster. War was the
only option and chaos would erupt if the hollow problem could not be resolved. With a silent wave of his hand the death gods became quiet and surrounded Yamamoto,
eagerly awaiting words of encouragement. What they received instead was a declaration. "My fellow death gods! this dilemma has escalated far beyond what I had ever
imagined. We are but an army of shinigamis struggling with the evil that surrounds us. That is why I say to you that we must create an organization of elite warriors. 13 divisions
that will give their lives to protect souls from becoming consumed by hollows."
A distant voice in the crowd spoke up. "How will one man like yourself with barely exceptional talent, create something so powerful?" Yamamoto could sense the
arrogance in the mans voice and he grew angry. "Insolent fool! im doing this to protect you people. I dont want you to be the witness to the suffering I've seen with my own eyes."
The man spoke once again. "Yeah, right thats all fine and dandy but listen if your going to make a squad, why not make me the leader? We cant leave matters of such importance
to an unworthy scum like you." At this remark Yamamoto unsheathed his soul slayer and cut the mans arm off. "Do you now see why you cant be the leader? You are weak and brittle.
Your arrogance astounds me."
The crowd of death gods were now completely silent. The tension of the moment was only broken by the arrival of the specialized police squadron. They look angered as
they rushed through the town. Yamamoto knew he had to now escape but it was too late. They had finally seized him. The Police captain spoke. "Yamamoto Genryuusai you are
guilty of assault and more importantly, many heinous acts of trying to overthrow the authority of the police force. For these crimes you will be sent to the shrine of penitence and await
your trial." Yamamoto tried to resist and talk his way out of it but it was no use. "You fools dont know what your doing! This is the only chance we have against these hollows, please
let me go. We dont have much time, The hollows could have already attacked the souls of the living world!"
Yamamoto Genryuusai would spend the next fifty years in the shrine of penitence before his release. This time he would make sure he succeded in the creation of the Gotei 13.
Tennyo Hakumei
07-28-2005, 07:53 PM
I admit that the idea of a bleach Rpg game is interesting and I'll really like to help in some way, so if I want to help out I have to post a mini-fic?
kinonai
07-28-2005, 08:54 PM
Yes...that is, if you want to be a GM.
Shortly before the game is opened to the public, we will look for Lieutenants...although that may be a temporary position (When a player gets to a high enough level, they will be able to challenge them).
linkrulesx10
07-28-2005, 10:18 PM
Yeah I did post a short story earlier. I don't think that the GM's should ignore something if they have been chosen to help it grow.
Byakuya7
07-29-2005, 01:56 AM
Kinonai what did you think of my fan fic? Could I be a GM or is every spot filled?
Ryoji
07-29-2005, 02:20 AM
I'll help you out Byakuya. I'm a GM in the Forum RPG:
Okay...interesting setting -- not many people would try to speculate about the beginnings of the Gotei 13, or Commander Yamamoto himself, so good thinking. There are a few punctuation errors (I'm a big perfectionist when it comes to punctuation, sorry). Because of the subject of the story, I would recommend you go more in-depth, which will probably result in a change in its length.
To everyone: Remember that the GMs are not only the supervisors -- they are actively involved in the story and are the engineers of the storyline. You must be able to be creative and open, and equally eloquent in your writing. I'm not saying you're bad writers -- everyone has the potential to compose entire epics.
Byakuya7
07-29-2005, 02:28 AM
so I should probably expand upon the story right? I'd be willing to do that. Anything to be a GM. I know I can make my fan fic better and more creative. I just dont know if I should post it on here again and take up so much message space, or to send it to someone.
Tennyo Hakumei
07-31-2005, 12:27 AM
So how many GM have you chose already?
Ryoji
07-31-2005, 04:35 AM
hm...there's at least 6 that I know of.
linkrulesx10
07-31-2005, 12:44 PM
Could I please get a Yes or NO answer to whether I am in or not and If not could I please get the site so I can give suggestions (Even if i'm not a GM i would still like to be involved in the site's development)
Byakuya7
07-31-2005, 09:58 PM
yes, if its not too much trouble could you also tell me if Im a GM or not? I dont want to cause any trouble or anything and its not a big deal, but I'd rather know ahead of time.
Aruko
08-01-2005, 12:54 AM
I have helped create a Naruto RP and I just love the thought of a Bleach RP. I'll edit this post once my fic is done!
EDIT: Here's my fic. Hope it's good enough.
Approaching dusk Ichigo set out for his lovely meal and nice warm bed at home. He had just gone through a long summer day as a Shinigami. Ichigo luckily was just able, upon arriving home, to catch the beautiful scarlet sun as it set. Dazed by this glorious sight, Rukia, Kon, and Ichigo saw a nearby bench and sat for a rest before finishing their adventures for the day.
”It’s days like these that I would rather be out hanging with my friends and beating up regular people that be doing this Death-God stuff…” Ichigo let this out with a soft sigh as he laid back into his chair. “Well, Ichigo, at least you don’t get punishments for thinking that way, as I did in Soul Society. If you thought about anything but your Death-Go training you would be scolded or punished to lowly 4th squad chores…” Rukia said as she sat up and looked over at Ichigo with at quick glance at Kon inbetween them.
After a short silence Ichigo returned the look and this made them both turn away, fearing Kon might think of something that really wasn’t there (as he normally did). To their utter surprise Kon did catch on and quickly shook his head in disapproval and then sighed, leaning back against the bench hands behind his head with his legs crossed. “You two….Still the same no matter what happens in your life” said Kon who just sighed again. At this the trio started to hear some Giggling; “Kurosaki-kun is crazy Rukia, why do you even hang out with him?” and with this two little girls popped out and started running away, most likely to spread their gossip to fellow schoolmates.
At this Ichigo remembered the fact of him being in his Death-God form and quickly hurried to take his body over and put Kon back into his doll. “Come here Kon, I need my body back” after saying this Kon noticed he was back into a wall by Rukia and Ichigo. As seeing his chances were slim he prepared himself to jump but then Ichigo took out Zangetsu and was moving so quickly that before Kon noticed Ichigo was in front of him with the point of his sword at his face. “Kon…I’m tired, don’t mess with me” at this Kon obeyed to having Ichigo’s body re-inhabited by it’s rightful owner and to be put back into his doll-like body.
”Come you two…Let’s head home and get some rest, tomorrow will be much like this one. Only Kon won’t be giving us problems tomorrow, right?” at saying this Ichigo glared at Kon who winced and hugged Rukia tighter and tighter like he always did. Then they walked the last mile home and rested for the adventures the following day.
Ballistics
08-01-2005, 06:14 AM
Hmm I've been looking in here in case the rpg has started and I just thought of something...So your telling me that people can challenge some of the GM's to take there place? hmm Like taking a Lt. job from some one else? hmmm That is a nice offer at times...So Am I right or wrong about that?
Well there you have it amigos, Can't wait to make a Soul Slayer ( hehehe I don't know how to spell the zanpaktu thingy) Ballistics out...[B}
SheWr
08-01-2005, 11:07 AM
oke - im back from a 3-day punkrock/hc festival, il take a small rest and then il view all the fanfics and answer all the questions!
Ichigona
08-02-2005, 01:03 AM
oke - im back from a 3-day punkrock/hc festival, il take a small rest and then il view all the fanfics and answer all the questions!
Does your fict have to start from the last or can it be original? (if this was explained in the first post please hit me....very very hard)
I'm not in a writting mod at the moment (to be honest i never really am, i have about 3 fanfics in my head at the same time, al different....my brain hurts...i will write though, if people will take the time to look at my fict ^^) It IS 1am, so please forgive, once i know al info, i'll participate.......if i allowed that is *nervous laugh, sweatdrop*
Ryoji
08-02-2005, 07:47 AM
@Aruko: Not bad. It's a little short for my tastes, but I like it. It's up to SheWr now.
@Ballistics: Let me clear this up:
In the Gotei 13, there are three ways to become a Captain of a Division, and what you are talking about is taking the place of a captain by dueling. To be honest, we haven't gotten to that subject yet, but I will bring it up right away and get it resolved. Since this is a Bleach RPG, obviously we have to recreate the rules and regulations as maintained within the organizations in the actual storyline, in order to recreate such situations. In other words, we'll get to it ASAP.
@Ichigona: I'm not gonna slap you...I'm not evil like that. You are welcome to submit a fanfic to try for a GM position, and it can be original, as long as it's Bleach. Look at the first two pages; two of the fics -- one being mine -- include original characters.
Ichigona
08-02-2005, 10:56 AM
@Ichigona: I'm not gonna slap you...I'm not evil like that. You are welcome to submit a fanfic to try for a GM position, and it can be original, as long as it's Bleach. Look at the first two pages; two of the fics -- one being mine -- include original characters.
Thankies ^^ Whee!! ^^ I don't know about ranks or anything but there will be fighting, and death gods and blah....does it have to have characters from bleach? Well i really suppose it does huh? Meh ^^ I'll do my best! Whee! Thankies for not hitting me *nervous laugh*
Ryoji
08-02-2005, 11:50 AM
Thankies ^^ Whee!! ^^ I don't know about ranks or anything but there will be fighting, and death gods and blah....does it have to have characters from bleach? Well i really suppose it does huh? Meh ^^ I'll do my best! Whee! Thankies for not hitting me *nervous laugh*
You can make up the characters too -- the Forum RPG requires that you create your own original character.
linkrulesx10
08-02-2005, 12:19 PM
Even though i Didn't say so the charecter i created was a quincy death god that had learned how to turn his soul slayer into a Bow although i don't know if that is possible it sounded feasible to me
Ichigona
08-02-2005, 05:30 PM
Even though i Didn't say so the charecter i created was a quincy death god that had learned how to turn his soul slayer into a Bow although i don't know if that is possible it sounded feasible to me
Sounds pretty cool to me ^^....though...wouldn't they hate themself? Though a Quincy Death God does seem pretty cool....dun see ow it would work though...cause they stad for completely different things, although they both want to destory hollows, one has the intent to kill, yet the other had the intent to purify....how they go together.....Really it would just be a death god with a bow Soul Slayer, they might have Quincy thoughts or watever, but still it would really just be a death god with a bow shaped soul slayer....unless it was that the soul slayer infact killed the hollows instead of purifying them.....
oh dear haha ^^''
Aruko
08-02-2005, 07:22 PM
@Aruko: Not bad. It's a little short for my tastes, but I like it. It's up to SheWr now.
I normally do, do longer fics but Shewr said to not make it too long just for an entry piece, or something like that. If you want it longer I can make it longer.
linkrulesx10
08-02-2005, 09:52 PM
Well Quincy is just a family name, he doesn't think the same way other quincy's do thus he took a different path
Ryoji
08-02-2005, 11:15 PM
Let me clear that up...
The men of the Quincy line gather spiritrons (the matter that makes up souls and other supernatural entities) to compact and materialize their spirit bow and arrows. The more spiritrons a Quincy is able to gather, the more powerful the attack.
On the ther hand, Shinigami, a.k.a. Death Gods, use Zanpakutous, a.k.a. Soul Slayers, which are the physical manifestation of their own spiritual energy, as well as Kidoh, a.k.a. Demon Arts.
Now I'm sure you know that, but here's the difference....Quincy arrows do not purify hollows. They just blow them to oblivion. Zanpakutous purify hollows. A combination of Quincy and Shinigami powers, if someone tries to use them in the RPG, IMO, may bring more than a few doubts.
Ichigona
08-02-2005, 11:54 PM
See that what i said ^^ Only in a more confuzing kinda way haha
Um…I’m still not sure If I’m doing this right, if I’m not I’ll happily redo it or at least change some things if needed…I hope it not too long….
Okay here my fict, I hope you enjoy:
Noruka opened is eyes, squinting at the bright sunlight. Sitting up he realized it was well past dawn, he sighed. No-one ever woke him up for breakfast; no-one ever woke him up anytime. Stretching, he reached into a small bag and retrieved a rice cake. Thinking that it was certainly better than nothing he hurried to a meeting his squad was having, he ran faster as he thought how important it was and how utterly late he was. He hit a wall that, as far as he knew, shouldn’t have been in the middle of the passage way.
‘Sorry sorry!’ he said as he got up, not daring to even look at the man he had ran into.
‘Noru?’ said a kind voice, it was familiar to Noruka. He looked up reluctantly to find one of the watchers that had been assigned to his squad. Itsuki Kantarou, he was a very kind man that watched for everyone not really just for a certain squad. He was blind, yet he always knew where he was going. Some said he used the spirit force of other people to guide him.
‘Ah! Mister Kantarou! I’m so sorry for running into you like that.’ Noruka babbled. Itsuki placed his hand on the young man’s head and ruffled it gently.
‘Come now, we know each other, no need to be so formal. You’ve missed the meeting’ Noruka knew this, he’d known as soon as he woke up. When the line of the sun was past the line on the wall, which is 5ft high, he is too late. ‘But no worries, it wasn’t very important.’
‘All meetings are important, that’s what our captain said.’ Itsuki raised his cane in the air, the cane that supposedly beat weak members of squads. Noruka on the other hand thought differently, Itsuki was a nicely built man, with incomprehensible strength. Yes this was very true, but the man was also blind. He gave a snort of a laugh and smiled in Noruka’s direction.
‘Does he? Well just because he’s captain, and that’s what he's said as captain, doesn’t mean that he's correct.’ Noruka gasped, putting his hands to his mouth.
‘Oh that’s bad! You shouldn’t say that!’ he said muffled. Itsuki took Noruka’s hand, he stroked it frowning.
‘Have you been eating? You feel awfully thin.’ He bit his lip and nodded, waving goodbye to Itsuki he ran down to the square where his squad probably was. Itsuki shook his head sighing.
‘Poor boy, he has talent and no-one will recognise it.’ He looked up reflectively ‘Not even he will recognise it.’ Muttering to himself he walked steadily around the corner, making sure his cane hit the corner of the wall.
At the square, Noruka shuffled in between the other members, trying to blend in as much as possible. Unfortunately for him though, he was about a foot taller than everyone else in the squad.
‘There you are! You waste of space!’ Noruka turned to find Hora, one of the guys that made him want to become a Ryoka again. He bowed his head, his black shiny hair covering most of his face as he did so.
‘Yes?’
‘You were late for the meeting once again.’
‘You never woke me.’ He shot back. He surprised himself when he did this; he was feeling stronger since he woke up. But nevertheless, he bowed further.
‘I apologise.’
‘Yeah you’d better.’ Said Hora his tone was one that Noruka had heard so many times before, but now it irritated him. His eyes narrowed.
‘Why what’re you going to do about it?’ Hora stepped backwards, shocked by this sudden change in attitude.
‘I’ll…um….I’ll beat your ass up! That’s what I’ll you! You little worm!’ Noruka stood up, drawing himself to his full height. He usually slouched a little through habit, and now he discovered he was even taller than the other squad members, who were all roughly around 5ft10 to 6ft.
‘Little you say? I can assure you that I am far from little.’ He backed Hora into a wall. ‘I may not be stronger than you, or smarter. But my dear friend, I am most certainly taller than you.’ Hora took a deep breath, puffing out his chest as much as possible, before punching Noruka hard on the nose. There were cheers from the other squad members, as Noruka staggered backwards, blood running from his nose and down his face. Hora was cheering and laughing at his victory, that was, until he heard soft growling. He straightened his face, trying desperately to see Noruka’s face through his hair.
‘Oh so ya want some more do ya?!’ he said as he saw Noruka’s face. The cheers from the other squad members died as they also saw his face. He wasn’t scowling, he wasn’t frowning and he certainly wasn’t crying. Red eyes flaring under his delicate black hair glowed; he opened his mouth to speak.
‘Wrong move…..my friend…’ He rushed to Hora; he felt that air didn’t exist as he glided to his target, moving so swiftly that the dust from the earth didn’t even stir. He punched Hora square on the jaw, knocking him cleanly threw the wall. The other squad members murmured a little before one of them jumped onto Noruka, who was squatting. He threw him off effortlessly and turned towards the squad.
‘Who else wants this?’ he said raising his arms. They looked at each other and then rushed to him all at once. Behind the hair that shielded his face, Noruka grinned.
Itsuki turned his head to the battle cries. He sighed and turned round. It was bound to happen; they made him suffer; now they suffer. Now, 3rd courtyard where are you? He walked steadily towards the tremendous spirit force he could feel, he knew for a fact that is was Noruka. Noruka now breathing heavily, raced towards a squad member that had not given up or hidden from him. The member dodged, a piece of clothing was torn.
‘Are you trying to wear me out?’ he asked rushing at him again. ‘That is not going to happen!’ he missed, but only by a fraction. The other member struck him hard on the back of the head; this however, didn’t affect him. He got in another quick blow and got him in the face. Some of the other members regained some confidence and cheered. Blood spattered at Noruka’s feet, he wiped his face and lurched towards the member, this time he hit. The member screamed as he felt his ribs breaking under the force, Noruka was still running, his fist deep into the member’s ribcage. He smashed him against a wall and looked deep into his eyes.
‘Do you give up?’ He was stubborn and didn’t answer. ‘I see. That’s a no is it?’ he said bring his knee up swiftly into the member’s groin. He laughed menacingly.
‘Noru! Stop this foolery.’ Noruka turned to find his watcher, Itsuki. He let the member drop heavily to the ground.
‘What are you going to do? Old man! You cannot harm me! I am invincible!’ Itsuki shook his head.
‘No, you are simply in the wrong squad.’ Noruka frowned, then without warning dived for Itsuki, so fast that his feet didn’t appear to touch the ground. To everyone’s surprise, Itsuki was quite a distance from Noruka when the dust settled. Even Noruka was surprised. Itsuki sighed.
‘Give up boy.’ taking a deep breath, Noruka lurched once again in the direction of Itsuki, unaware of the vast amount of blood he was losing. When the dust had cleared, it showed that Itsuki was at the other side of the square. Noruka blinked, aware now of a slight tingling in his side and shoulder.
‘Bastard! I’ll kill you!’ he roared and he sprinted across the square, much slower than previously, and which each step becoming slower and slower. Gasping for breath and coughing blood, Noruka found that he had become only a foot away from Itsuki as he fell. The light died from his eyes and he slept. Itsuki bent down and stroked the boy’s head.
‘Send for the 4th squad.’
Noruka woke to Itsuki smiling over him.
‘I’m alive?’
‘Whatever did you do boy? You caused quite a ruckus.’
‘I….I think I ate a magic rice cake.’ Itsuki smiled at patted the boy’s head. You’ll go far my boy, very far….just try not to go bonkers again. He smiled to himself and left the boy to rest, it was going to be difficult to get him out of the trouble he was in, but, he would do it for him. His future student, Noruka.
linkrulesx10
08-03-2005, 06:14 AM
Yeah I did know that but i didn't really think to use it in the RP that was just the charecter I used for the fanficbut I still think it would be possible for a deathgod with a Quincy heritage to have a soul slayer that shapes out to be a Bow and draws power from both sources, Wouldn't it be possible to convert the spirit energy into a more passive form so that it purrifies hollows instead but meh maybe I just think differently.
Ryoji
08-03-2005, 08:12 AM
How bout this...I'm not sure if you have a choice, but why don't you just make the Shikai form of your Zanpakutou a bow? That's so much more straightforward. You can't draw power from both. IMO, that's kind of cheap, because that would equal a nearly perpetual source.
SheWr
08-03-2005, 10:38 AM
Pheeew....now its reading time....
by the way...there is a small problem - my pc crashed yesterday and i cant enter it, so probably il hav to reinstall it... That would mean that all stuff on my pc (including bleach rpg forum stuff) will be lost. BUT... since many of it has allready been uploaded, then we dont hav to worry mutch - only things il loose will be the over 100 zanpakutos wich i made for players... =.= and the simple female shinigami body.... all other stuff is uploaded and even so, il redraw all the lost things... This shouldnt slow down the RPG.
Now, really much hav made new fanfics, but since for now we only need 1 more GM, then il hav to choose the most original one...
And the place goes to.... : Aruko
All stories had their pluses and minuses, but most of them had only battles, thats the point that made me choose Aruko, his/her fanfic had normal day life. Aruko - it would be good if u would contact me, telling me theese facts: your characters visual, your zanpakuto (effect and visual - ban-kai included) and wich division u want to lead.
Others dont worry, you will be able to play the RPG soon enough.
linkrulesx10
08-03-2005, 12:39 PM
Could you give an estimate on how long?
Ichigona
08-03-2005, 12:53 PM
Aww *cries* haha ^^ I did that one in like an hour, if id known it was just for normals i would have put in a section from my original bleach fanfic.....but nobody like that so i woulda failed either way *sweatdrop*
Oh well.....when it gunna start?
Aruko
08-03-2005, 01:41 PM
Domo, SheWr.
And I'm sorry for taking the last GM position Ichigona, I thought there was at least one more if I got it.
SheWr
08-03-2005, 05:21 PM
Oke...now the searching has ended. Next messages from me will probably be when it has begun. First i need ALL GM's to put all their mind into the Forum so we can start as soon as possible.
Tennyo Hakumei
08-03-2005, 06:24 PM
May I know who are the GM's?
Ichigona
08-03-2005, 06:53 PM
Domo, SheWr.
And I'm sorry for taking the last GM position Ichigona, I thought there was at least one more if I got it.
Hah it okay ya know, you deserve it, yours was very good, i kept reading back to it ^^ Mines wasn't all that special it just was like everyone elses ^^ I didn't want to be a GM.....i dun even know what a GM is LOL I'd prolly be to lazy about it anyway :winking56
Yeh who the GM's? Part from Aruko?
i dun even know what a GM is LOL I'd prolly be to lazy about it anyway :winking56
GM is short for Game Master (I believe), usually they act as moderators and players at the same time, though since I'm not involved in this project I shouldn't say for certain what their role would be.
Ballistics
08-04-2005, 02:39 AM
Hmm I would be nice to know who is on board with this RPG...I hope to enjoy this RPG more then the others i've been in before...I hope my work doesn't suck to much...hehehe Its not a mecha rpg so i have hope that I will be okay...is there any elements in this rpg? like with demon arts...or something...maybe my Soul Slayer could weld it...hmm I hope there is A Hammer Soul Slayer...Cause I've got an idea in the fernice and i hope to smith out a nice character...
Well there you have it amigos, I might have to cook up diffrent ideas just in case. Ballistics out...[B]
SheWr
08-04-2005, 03:30 PM
Well, basically all the start of the game you will spend as a academy student or a rookie shinigami. Once you reach a certain lvl, you will recieve a zanpakuto (in a RPish way) with shikai. BUT - you will recieve from me, you wont choose it (althou if u really wont like it, then u can request for a different)
Ballistics
08-04-2005, 09:25 PM
hmm naw that cool too...I wouldn't be so picky really...I just hope I can get a nice zanpakuto...
Well there you have it amigos, ( who ever does get a hammer styled Zanpakuto I'm sure I'll become friends with them! lol ) Ballistics out...[B]
Lunar
08-05-2005, 03:46 AM
sounds neat! i cant wait, lol, and ur own zanpakuto, nice, but shwer, how u gonna figure out names and pictures and crap?
SheWr
08-05-2005, 11:26 AM
pictures? Muwahahaha! im teh artist! i made all the pictures! And the names.... from a dictionairy....
Ryoji
08-05-2005, 05:32 PM
RAWR....so Aruko's the new GM? Congrats!
I'll repeat what SheWr said...all GMs must be on now to help create the RPG.
Ballistics
08-06-2005, 09:46 AM
Hmm I was thinking if its cool to post my Character's Bio or whatever its called...( I still have to make it ^_^;) But I was thinking maybe I should start making it and have people help me edit stuff that maybe sounds a little off or outta place...I'm just wondering something...In Bleach When you die you go to soul society right? Well in the anime/manga its all Japanese culture up in there...So Do you think if say a Mexican died in Mexico he would still end up in the same place? If not then where would that Character go? Another thing that I’m wondering if a character knew some unique skills ( cooking, craftsmanship, ect.) would they keep it? I know that the age of the person that dies goes over in that world doesn’t it?
Well there you have it amigos, Please Clear up my questions friends! Ballistics out…[B}
SheWr
08-06-2005, 12:03 PM
well...even if there are other soul societies, the RPG will concentrate on the one we all know and love... ^.^
about the bio - in the RPG forum is a special section for player bios...
Ok! Now we hav to get ALL of the GM's together !
I will need eweryones help. There are some missing GM's and i need them to the forum right now! If all come, then we can finish this really fast. So.... please - eweryone, i would really appreciate that you would help me find some ppl - if you know how to contact any of them, then PLEASE do so and tell them to report to the Forum RPG, or atleast here!
Heres a list of missing GM's :
Dancingcrane
Kuri_shinigami
Ryudell
and here r some who show up too less!
Ryoji
NiteMist
And Aruko, you should go there too !
Seeing how others work "not so good" i would like to give a special thanks to Kinonai! She probably works more then i do for the forum.... btw - she made us a great site with a perfect guide. So - big thanx to kinonai !
Ballistics
08-08-2005, 11:41 AM
SO um...how is that going? umm just asking...
Well there you have it amigos, :doindadom I'll just dance here until its finished. Ballistics out...[B]
SheWr
08-08-2005, 12:45 PM
most showed up, except dancingcrane... we hav to get him....
Ichigona
08-08-2005, 12:53 PM
I not know any of those people *sweatdrop* hehehe what kind of RPG game is it? Is it like....proper game game? Or like just people posting in a thread?
SheWr
08-08-2005, 01:16 PM
text based rpg !
Ichigona
08-08-2005, 09:59 PM
Huzzah!! I got one of those, it going well ^^ Yay!! When it start?!
NiteMist
08-09-2005, 01:13 AM
(I don't know if this is against any of the rules, if it is i will edit the message.) Anyone can contact me on these Sn's when i'm not logged inot the forums.
Slicknick162
MuramashiScythe
XxNiteMistxX
GiveMeACoolSn
ScytheMuramashi
Those are all AIM/AOL SN's, I mostly use the top two. Well if you need to contact me then theres the info =D
Edit: Msn: XvNiteMistvX
Yahoo: XxNiteMistxX
Ichigona
08-10-2005, 11:05 PM
What about like....msn?
SheWr
08-11-2005, 07:55 AM
Oke, this basically will mean anything only to the Gm's
I got all the files back ! so now i can resend all the imagies !
Ballistics
08-12-2005, 01:18 AM
So the RPG is still gonna happen? I was thinking it might've fallen threw...I'm having a hard time waiting for the RPG...*picks up a D&D Book* Maybe I should get into this game...
[B]
Ichigona
08-12-2005, 01:32 AM
Mine is going well.....what separates this one from a mini rp??
Ballistics
08-12-2005, 02:22 AM
I donno...a lot of things are in the dark...can't wait...*rolls 1d20 and makes his saving throw*
odd...I'm getting used it...
[B]
Ichigona
08-12-2005, 03:43 AM
What is that Game B?
Ballistics
08-12-2005, 09:47 AM
Its D&D a totaly geeky game...and I'm getting the hang of it...(gamefreak)
[B]
Ichigona
08-12-2005, 11:33 AM
Oh Dungens and Dragons! I totally hate that game -_-'' It's so boring lol well ya like what ya like i guess uh?
Ballistics
08-13-2005, 01:02 AM
lol I'm a gameing freak so I'll try almost any game at least once...yeah its so geeky but I'll try D&D this once...and the Bleach RPG? I wanna try that out soon...*sigh*
[B]
Ichigona
08-13-2005, 02:26 AM
Hahaha I have bad patence...so i start my own ^^;;;
I do that alot LOL
I played D&D once, my friends were UBER freaky in Primary....and they UBER freaky in seconary too...jus glad they dun like it anymore yup yup ^^
Flame2Flames
08-19-2005, 12:54 AM
i would back away slowly and run like hell if my friends sounded creepy in primary and secondary
Ballistics
08-21-2005, 03:38 AM
lol Ballistics is going to try to sense motive...*rolls a dice* lol still looking into the game...its a lot of reading...
so then whatever happend to this thing?
linkrulesx10
08-21-2005, 01:30 PM
hmm well this topic kinda mutated into something about my most favorite game of all time. GO DnD :redbiggri
Ichigona
08-21-2005, 01:45 PM
I don't know whether the rp is running somwhere else or somthing....but it seems to have died a bit
strike015
08-22-2005, 12:06 PM
yea i wonder wats happening to the rpg
Aruko
08-22-2005, 04:20 PM
Well currently....I have no idea what to do at the RPG forum. I have all of my own stuff set-up, or just about, but it doesn't seem like anything else is going anywhere...
cavignone
08-22-2005, 09:21 PM
i'm new to this forum. a bleach rpg? i'm starting to read past post to catch up and get a idea whats going on lol. a quick run donw help alot thought e-mail bases? messager run or posts? a site with info and rules and the like ? post and i check daily or send info to my e-mail cavignone@hotmail or demon_cav@yahoo.com (both my sn for those messagers)
(if this rpg kicks off and not to much trouble could i get a sword clsoed to the one i posted on the fourms here in genral talk ? it no broken or insanely pwoerful i just like the idea of it lol)
Ballistics
08-22-2005, 10:00 PM
lol um I donno but I think the higher upps pick a zanpacky sword for you...I really don't mind much but come on! Some one can at least post about how its going! If this thing Died then just say so! *sigh*
[B]
cavignone
08-22-2005, 10:05 PM
that true but also said they would redd the sword if you really hated it. so thought i show them the sword i made and if they say ok you can have it later then great, if not that cool too. after all it there game lol. i'm just a player :-)
used ot that cuase i play(still do) Ad&d 1st,2nd,3rd and 3.5, shadow run, rifts,all white wolf games and countless other rpgs games(i got alot of books lol) card games too(a few office boxes worth)
Ballistics
08-22-2005, 10:21 PM
lol we're game freaks huh? yeah I'm getting into D&D 3.5 (just started) and well...more reading and I got my first game this thursday...I hope I'm not to much of a bother...lol MORE RPGS DANG IT!
cavignone
08-23-2005, 07:13 PM
if this rpg dead i be toying with a system for one this week cuase i'm bored at work lol. it a mix of systems some ad&d and white wolf stuff mixed together. working on the game balance and making on excle so if i get GMs can send them a format and jsut add in numbers :-) it calc everything else for you :-) dice for the few combat rolls be weapon damage 1d4,1d6 and 1d8 for starts and a d10 to see to hit %
if this one alive i join in a heart beat :-)
this system i'm working on might not work i post pending on this one replies. e-amil or message me if like to know/help :-) like i said i'm at work and bored right now lol
Ryoji
08-23-2005, 09:28 PM
*sighs* Seriously? The admin's virtually gone...I honestly think...if we really wanna kick this thing off, we start our own rpg IN THE CLUB BLEACH FORUMS!!!
Ballistics
08-23-2005, 11:16 PM
Shall we then? Rise up against this would be-RPG and make our own? Sounds good right now...cept who will head the project? hmm...got any ideas Ryoji?
[B]
cavignone
08-24-2005, 12:44 AM
well since i was bored i'm about 90% done wiht my exel char sheet and game mechcanics lol. just need to check balancing and run a few test runs to make sure poeple/mobs of similar lvls to hight around 50% give and take per char lol. once done i'll post it ona web page and allow char sheet to be dl for GMs and chars, as well upload updated stats and the like. i going to keep it simpel so min dice rolling needed aiming for 2 per attack(to hit and damage for weapon) going to need a few GMs(they can have 2 chars a captain lvl one and a normal chars for off days)
and will i help with charsheets and all that but i do not want to be a over god lol.
SheWr
08-24-2005, 07:41 AM
Goddamit ! Believe or not, but for the last month i did not hav a internet connection, and due to some other happenings, i was not able to reastablish it for so goddamn long ! (it was ment to be off only for a week....). But fear not! Because, if someone is still interesnted to continue this, then we could finish it really fast. I just hav to know wich of the GMs are still active and willing to be GMs...
Again - im really sorry for all this... now i am back and i can go see all the missed bleach episodes ^.^
Ichigona
08-24-2005, 07:48 AM
Hehe ^^ I only not seen 1
How many members does this RP have?? Is it members based? Or anyone that can be bothered posting??
Ballistics
08-24-2005, 07:51 AM
I'm still in if its still alive...I'll be looking forword to good news and a awesome RPG Shewr...
SheWr
08-24-2005, 07:52 AM
? if u were talking about my RPG, then - We didnt start it before ewerything was completley finished. Also - yes its member-based, but all you have to do is register 1 account to the forum and post that u want to play. Nothing hard - u will recieve all the needed stuff, and then u can begin your own journey.
Ballistics
08-24-2005, 08:10 AM
well like I said my commrade...I can't wait...So then do you have a expected date to begin? lol well anyways I'm glad THIS IS GONNA HAPPEN...lol ( for a while I thought it just fell threw...-_-;;)
Well there you have it amigos, I wonder if having a lot of members can muck things up? Ballistics out...[B]
SheWr
08-24-2005, 08:31 AM
We could finish this even this week, if i could get all GMs back...
Ryoji
08-24-2005, 10:26 AM
I'm still in, but in general, the GMs are non-existent...I think we need to pick new ones. And also, I seriously think we should do the RPG here -- this forum already has a huge pool of potential players and fanatics. Is that possible SheWr?
NiteMist
08-24-2005, 11:43 AM
*Waves hands* Still here... I check the site everyday, and there seems to be no new posts or anything, and im still waiting for my pic so yeah...Still here and still interested in the job.
Hat_And_Clogs
08-24-2005, 01:22 PM
Whats this Bleach RPG forum?!
cavignone
08-24-2005, 02:07 PM
cool, so how do i join ? jsut post a char profile and starting story somewhere? or send it to you ? soon as i know i'll join :-)
Ishida_killa
08-24-2005, 02:14 PM
what sort of chara info must we include can we have soul slayers with special abilitys or do we gain those ltr and start with plain old swords?
Ballistics
08-24-2005, 10:24 PM
hmm at least a link from here to the rpg at least...there are so many things to consider too...to much space and stuff...but if it can be done here that would be awesome...dang most of the gms that are never around...if they apply for the spot they should at least be around!
Well there you have it amigos, *sigh* I might have to try to sign up if things don't get better. Ballistics out...[B]
I agree with B, being a GM isn't just playing around, it's a important administrative role.
I'm not involved in this project, but if I was to give a bit of outside feedback then I think you should consider lowering the amount of gamemasters at the beginning. Finding dedicated, active and nice people to fill those roles are hard enough when you're only looking for numbers like three or four, thirteen seems a bit over the top.
So my suggestion is basically this; do the minimum necessary preparations, fire it up (at wherever), and have a go. If the system is done so there actually needs to be 13 Gm's, then tweak it for now. Almost all projects needs to start out small and build up as they go, and when people start roleplaying you can see which people fill the requirements for a GM position and promote them from there.
When people enjoy the RP and earn their GM role, they'll hopefully grow attatched to it. ^.^
So take the loyal GMs you have, and do the best with what you have. If you keep waiting, there's always the danger of it never taking that last leap, and I think anyone who's been visiting this thread is dying to see what the RPG is like. ^^
Please note that the above is simply a suggestion from a outsider's eyes, in no way am I trying to complain or point fingers, in case anyone got that feeling.
I'd try to apply for a GM position to help out, but honestly, I can't say for sure if I'd play or not if I were to be accepted. It all depends on what the system used is like, if it's too complex chances are I'd fade away and I don't want to be someone who bails on you and your hard work to get this going.
But I'd really like to see how this turns out, overall it sounds like a very promising idea.
To quote Adam Sandler: You can do it!~
Ballistics
08-25-2005, 02:40 AM
hmm well she does make some good points there...lol and plus she agrees with me so that another plus~ lol Thanx Tesh
13 does sound like alot...but thats how many captains there are...Chaos would be everywhere if there wern't 13...right? lol i donno but maybe its not quite that dire...but hey if 13 are around its always good to have the line up full but finding them has been hard huh Shewr? Maybe we should get the ball rolling...then let it pick up speed...but then again we don't want it to crash...well its up to you Shewr...
cavignone
08-25-2005, 04:38 AM
hmm i agree should at lest get the poeple here that been asking to play and alpha test this sucker and see how it goes. if it goes well poeple tell others and some i'm sure would want to be a GM. but not me lol my life choas most days so i can never be 100% sure if i could be around thought i used to elp GM in other games get there plots rolling and get poeple focused on it when they wander abit :-) nothing like a man carring 2 swords telling which way to move to grab you attention lol ;-)
hmm well she does make some good points there...lol and plus she agrees with me so that another plus~ lol Thanx Tesh
Don't freak out, but it's he (the name is confusing, I know x_x).
13 does sound like alot...but thats how many captains there are...Chaos would be everywhere if there wern't 13...right? lol i donno but maybe its not quite that dire...
Yeah, it's hard to say when we don't really know how the system works.. but Shewr has worked on this for quite some time so I think he/she will be able to make it work well in the end. ^_^
Lunar
08-25-2005, 02:18 PM
hm. im still in, but is there ANY way to become a GM instead of writing out fanfics? im not really that great writing those..
cavignone
08-25-2005, 03:03 PM
i agree wiht tesh we see how it goes shewr made the ssytem and know if it can use wiht less poepel or need them.
lunar i think the fanfic thing to showcase you skill at making a story for the chars to live in. like showcasing you story telling skills.
SheWr
08-25-2005, 05:12 PM
oke...u sure ask many questions....
well, but currently il answer to one - about making the RPG here.... Well, since i made lots of specializations, then you would need to adjust your profile totally to the game... since most bleach fans here would like to play it, then allmoast eweryone here would have to change their sigs for the RPG, and still, it would jsut take too much place in this forum....
ooooh, and btw - those admins who still needed their pics, please resend the requests to the RPG forum ^.^
also - could someone please help find Kinonai - if we could get her back, then it would be great...
kinonai
08-26-2005, 03:43 AM
I'm back! Check your PM on the RPG site 0.0
cavignone
08-26-2005, 05:06 AM
no link for the rpg yet? well while i wait i'll keep writing my fanfic and the link on my sig :-) but i'm not aiming for a Gm position yet just making back ground story for my char :-)
SheWr
08-26-2005, 07:26 AM
u have a great chance of getting the place cavignone ^.^
Oke, for now... 3 GMs have replied?
Currently im sending emails to all GMs i can reach... i hope they will answer...
cavignone
08-26-2005, 02:27 PM
really? cool but i would have to decline. my hours are abit crasy alot of them time so i could not swear i could get on everday at set times. but thanks for saying i could get teh job :-)
i think i jsut be a palyer for now till my hours lvl out abit. just sent me a message with the link or info i need to give to play and i do so asap
kinonai
08-27-2005, 04:51 AM
I would like to make a note that the site probably won't open to the public for awhile...a long while. We still have a lot to do, so please bare with us ;). Once we get things together, we'll open it for a closed beta test type thing (aka. we'll probably only let a certain amount join). If it seems to go well, then we'll open it...if we find holes, then we'll fix them and then open it...
cavignone
08-27-2005, 04:54 AM
ah ok well after my 4 pages of fanfic i have to wait till the rpg start so i can write more. i'm making the fanfic a journal of my char journy lol. that why i lefta few things kind of open. liek the sex and name of the death god that helped me. so once i get a captain i could say it was them or any captain or vice captain that want the job lol:-)
Ichigona
08-27-2005, 11:00 AM
Ah so it a different site, super-di-dooper ^^
Love your fict cavignone ^^ It's super ja!
I like saying super ^.^
raive
08-30-2005, 02:43 PM
are there any positions left?
cavignone
08-30-2005, 05:05 PM
i think there likley afew of open spots if you wanted to be a GM. and i do not think that got that many players either. but will not know till they tell us the site up and running.
Aruko
08-30-2005, 06:34 PM
There aren't any positions but there might be shortly. Most of the chosen people haven't been on in a while so we might do a purge of people. Make sure to check back though.
linkrulesx10
08-31-2005, 01:07 PM
Maybe there could be some Beta version testers, or people who look at the site and provide tips?
SheWr
09-05-2005, 03:40 PM
well...seems like 4th and 6th division captains wont be leading this rpg... in that case we are searching for any 2 ppl who could replace them (u dont have to obligatly be 4th or 6th division)
Ichigona
09-05-2005, 07:51 PM
I still dun get how this works, do the captains like monitor?
Aruko
09-06-2005, 12:20 AM
I still dun get how this works, do the captains like monitor?
The captains basically run the whole thing. More will be released as we finish everything up but one thing I can say is if you're a captain you better be active cause you'll be needed a lot.
cavignone
09-06-2005, 12:48 AM
well i give my options if asked. :-) i like to think i'ma fair minded kind of guy. the main thing i would be worry about the math/system of how fights work or the like. website can be cahnged pretty easily one info gathered. but game rules can be alot harder to change later :-)
mistified
09-06-2005, 01:55 AM
Hmm, I came in quite late but better late than never right? I'd love to join in, as far as my writing skills go I'd have to post a fantasy I'm working on but since it has to be Bleach I guess I'll just go wherever I can get a spot!
Thank you! I'm looking forward to this!
Ballistics
09-06-2005, 06:56 AM
wait...so your telling me that that link is good? wha? well can i join or what? lol maybe i should apply for a spot...*sigh* just make sure to keep me in line cause i tend to god-mod or make it one sided...well i used to...hmm i might have go