Itan Kagemaru

[Grimjaw_Bankai]

Name:Itan Kagemaru
Gender:Male
Age:looks about 18
Race:Shinigami
Reiatsu Color:Green
Division: Waiting
Rank: Unranked
Starting level:1
Hobbies:sleepinng, fighting, training
enemys: Renagade Shinigami
Dislikes:Getting up, doing troublesome things
Favorite Food: Ramen
Favorite Drink: Soda
Hight: 5"11
Weight:145
Apperance: Musceular but not to musceular
Hair:Short Spikey green
Eyes Color: red
Family: none:whatevah:
Alignment: somewhat good

Bio:I dont have much to tell not that i would tell you if I did. Well here i go.
I ended up dead some how someway but i was in Soul Society none the less and if I was here I would make something of my self and Become a Shinigami I think im prety good at kido but main strength is Zanjutsu. well you heard all i can tell so leave me to nap.

level: 1
Exp:0
Gold:0
Rpp:0

Strength: 3
Rei:5
Con:1
Dex:1

HP: 21
RP: 35

Techs

#1 Naraku
A simple slash at the enemy with your zanpakutou
Requires: None
Difficulty: Easy (str)
Damage: 4 HP
Special: None
Save: DC4 + user's (str) for half damage
Reiatsu cost: None


#13 Reiatsu Ball
The Shinigami focuses and produces a small ball of concentrated reiatsu, which the then direct towards their opponent.
Requires: None
Difficulty: Easy (Rei)
Damage: 4 HP
Save: DC4 + user's (str) for half damage
Special: None
Reiatsu Cost: 2 RP

#17 White Lightning
Concentrate reiatsu in the tips of your fingers to release strong bursts of energy at your opponent
Requires: None
Difficulty: Medium (rei)
Damage: 8 HP
Save: DC4 + user's (rei) for half damage
Special: None
Reiatsu Cost: 3 RP

#4 Takuchu-Ken
Slash at crucial nerves to paralyse your opponent
Requires: None
Difficulty: Medium (str)
Damage: 2 HP
Special: Opponent is paralysed for two actions
Save: DC4 + user's (str) to avoid paralysis
Reiatsu cost: None

[IceFlame]

Every normal player starts from being a normal (unranked) member I am afraid.

Also you made a few mistakes in your stats.

Each player starts with 10 points to spend on ability scores. You can distribute these in any way between the different characteristics.
You gain 1 point every tier (see below) with which to increase any one of your ability scores. There is no upper limit to ability scores.

Hit Points
The character receives a set amount of hit points based on race.

Shinigami
Shinigami start with (20 + CON) HP

Reiatsu Points

The character receives a set amount of Reiatsu points based on race.

Shinigami
Shinigami start with (30 + REI) RP


So, your Hp is 21 and Rp is 35. You might also want to redo your ability scores a little because you used only 9 points out of 10.

[Grimjaw_Bankai]

All right thanks i think its better now

[Hattemaker]

your stat is ok, but you still need techs, 4 techs. you can find them here:

general: http://forums.bleachportal.net/showthread.php?t=17665

Shinigami tier 1: http://forums.bleachportal.net/showthread.php?t=18121

(or here: http://forums.bleachportal.net/forumdisplay.php?f=125)

Have fun. ^^

[I fail at life]

Yup;just 4 techs and you can start :p

Oh and Hatte,have 2 RPP for helping :p

[Grimjaw_Bankai]

Right i think its good unless u ment 4 for each

[Cloud]

Nope, he meant 4 total. Very nice work.

[Jaran]

Character approved, thread locked.