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Undying
10-20-2006, 09:55 PM
All right then, following a suggestion my Miyata, this thread is meant for us to discuss which character plays what role in our story, in each arc.

In the first, Interdimensional World arc (*note: we should refine the details of the plot in the Plot Discussion), 4 of the 6th divisioners go into the new world.

Who volunteers? And what role will each of them play? What roles will the other character play?

Discuss.

Hakuoro
10-20-2006, 10:02 PM
By "new world" which world do you exactly mean? Hueco? Or that world with all the cities fighting. I just wanna be where all the action is.

Miyata
10-20-2006, 10:09 PM
I think that Undying means the world in-between SS the real World and Hueaco Mundo. The world we have called the Calm land. And I volunteer for my character to be in the inter-dimensional arc. Since he does make one helluvan entrance XD.

Hattemaker
10-20-2006, 10:09 PM
yeah, the new world is the one with the cities. I can join, but I got to see who else might volunteer first. As I am no good/experienced writer. =P

And if we choose 1st person, the only thing I have written in first person is some lines in the club bleach rp, even though I never posted the best I could there. =P

So I join if we need more people, if we get all we need, then I wait to later so I have some chapters to look on, for inspiration. ^^

Undying
10-20-2006, 10:14 PM
Yeah, by new world I mean the Calm one we designed for the first arc.

As for volunteers... bleh. Most of the division seems so busy lately we can't really discuss about the fanfic :(.

I'll volunteer if there will be too little people.

Iro
10-20-2006, 11:40 PM
hmm... im thinking if joining the 4 man team is a good way to introduce my character, lol anyway, if you think i should be in the team then why not? id be glad. i'm not that good of a writer but i can still try and improve my skills :)

rOyKiA
10-20-2006, 11:42 PM
Can my character be there in the Calm world but not included with the 6th divisioners?...

...I was thinking of having my character's first appearance in the Calm world before joining tha gang, since my character's history have this thing about interdimensional thingie.

Decado
10-21-2006, 12:26 AM
I volunteer to go to the Calm World. It's in my character's nature.
*especially to get the hell away from the confines of the somewhat social nature of SS*

and being trained from an early age by a sensei and then the training in SS, Kaito knows about warfare, strategies and planning which could be the defining factor for the humans to survive.

Hakuoro
10-21-2006, 02:53 AM
So basically this it whats going on right? Afew of us are sent over into this "Calm" world thinking what is happening in SS is because of that when actually it is just a plan to lure us there to fight one villain so that we can help the other someone without knowing it, while a few of us stay behind is SS to solve the problems going around in there. Am I right?

Hattemaker
10-21-2006, 10:40 AM
I think you are right D_I, But wasnt more shinigami comming in the rescue party or was the Quincy the only rescuer? So my question is, will we introduce every characther in Calm?

So far Decado and Iro-Kun want there characthers to go to Calm.

rOyKiA wants his characther to go alone, so that would be a fifth characther.

Miyata is in the Quincy rescuer, and will appear later in the arc.

Me and Undying are volunteering if we need more people.

sherenetms
10-21-2006, 12:07 PM
I would love my character to be the one staying behind in SS figuring out the real mystery and then be one of the rescuers who went to the Calm World to help out. But if there are too little people volonteering to go to the Calm World, i dont mind if my character is one of the 4.

Miyata
10-21-2006, 12:08 PM
Just to clear things up, how many people actually are there going to be, staying behind and going into the Calm?

Neve
10-21-2006, 12:28 PM
I'll go into the interdimensional world =D. Seeing as my character's a healer/support type, I'd probably be best placed there.

sherenetms
10-21-2006, 12:33 PM
Miyata has a point there. We need to know how many of us will be placed at which of location. I think for the Calm World the number should be 5 now. It was originally at 4 but then roykia's character will be going there alone. So then....that leaves us with those staying behind in SS. How many are there?

Iro
10-21-2006, 12:38 PM
i volunteered earlier that my character should go to the interdimensional world :) but reading my character profile again from what we know that he is the traitor so i think its best if he is left in SS to spread chaos and havoc lol i dunno it depends if he is needed in the interdimesional world then he'd go.

Hattemaker
10-21-2006, 01:24 PM
So to update this, now we have this:

(2/X) SS: Iro-Kun, sherenetms


(3/5) Calm: Neve, Decado and rOyKiA.
(If we need more: Undying, sherenetms, Hattemaker)


(2/X) Rescuers: sherenetms, Miyata

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If I got anything wrong please tell me.. =P Just thought that it would be better if we added a list, so we didnt have to look through all the post to see who is where.

sherenetms
10-21-2006, 02:15 PM
Good thing you did the list, hatte. At least now we know who is going where and what.

Iro
10-21-2006, 02:28 PM
what? im left in SS T_T anyway it will give more time for my character to gain access around SS and cause havoc, bwahahaha!

rOyKiA
10-21-2006, 02:31 PM
I'm not sure if my character should be counted among the 4 who'll be going to Calm, for me it's more like four from SS will go and will come back together with the rescuers + my character as a new friend

It's like your characters don't know mine yet and will only make my appearance in the middle of the fight almost at the same time when Miyata's and the other rescuers arrive..you know, like a stranger joining a bar fight.

BTW, I'm not saying that that's the way the story should go to introduce my character, it's just this idea that I have going for quite some time but an incomplete one. What do you guys/gals think?

Iro
10-21-2006, 02:35 PM
hmmm... im really confused? are all the characters here from the 6th div? because i heard that there are quincy char... i dunno. i thought this would revolve around 6th div members how can roy just appear in the middle of a battle without the others not recognizing him since he is a member of the 6th div if you are that is. somebody enlighten me...

question: are we all from the 6th div? the characters i mean.

sherenetms
10-21-2006, 02:50 PM
^ *ish confused* I thought we're all gonna make our characters from 6th div. I mean, that's the point, right? That's how is was suppose to be, right? A fanfic devoted to the 6h Divisioners only. Isnt that how it work?

Iro
10-21-2006, 03:19 PM
thats what i thought as well... :) im really confused, lol

Hattemaker
10-21-2006, 03:24 PM
basicly every characther was first thought to be from the 6th div. But I think Miyata got special permission to be a quincy, I dont really know the detais about it.

And btw, the list isnt how it should be, I wrote it after seeing your posts, so If you still wanna go to Calm Iro, just tell me. Or You can always join the "Rescuers".. =P

updated the list a little bit. As Roy didnt want to be on the Calm list, so I just put him alone.. =P

(2/X) SS: Iro-Kun, sherenetms


(2/4) Calm: Neve, Decado
(If we need more: Undying, sherenetms, Hattemaker)


(2/X) Rescuers: sherenetms, Miyata


(1/X) Other: rOyKiA

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And as Miyata is an Quincy, I dont have any problem with Roys char, If Roy want him to be an unknow shinigami, that becomes our friend.

rOyKiA
10-21-2006, 03:30 PM
Sorry for confusing you guys/gals....I too kinda forgot that our characters are already part of the 6th div..

..I kinda forgot it 'cause we have a Quincy member as well and I thought some character can start as not a 6th div member but eventually be one..

..but if it's not possible then I can withdraw the idea I posted previously, anyways, it's just an idea for c&c :winking56..

..I'll post my idea in the plot discussion thread to show you guys/gals why I started my character off as not a 6th div member and you can decide whether it's applicable to the story or not.

*runs off to the plot discussion thread

Decado
10-21-2006, 03:44 PM
yeah... just so its clear, even tho Miyata's char is a Quincy, he's still part of 6th Div ^^

Iro
10-21-2006, 04:01 PM
thanks for clearing things up :) theres no problem with miyata being a quincy and roy's character becoming our friend and ally in battle.

i would like to decide furthur as to which group i'll be joining.

Undying
10-22-2006, 05:52 PM
I would say that Roy's character fits really well into going to Calm, as he was mentioned to be a wanderer - he could arrive at the scene where the two others go into Calm (there will be four (4) characters in Calm, one (1) for each country), chasing after a third who they believe to be a betrayer (Iro - since you've already named yourself traitor, wouldn't you mind playing the role of the "chased"? You arrive in Calm a bit earlier than the others).

The two others can be Decado's character, and any other who wants.

The rest of the division remain in the Seireitei trying to figure out where the hell are the others, eventually coming for the rescue.

How's that?

BeeCrest
10-22-2006, 06:04 PM
Due to the fact that I'm behind all of you in this, would it just be easier if I do whatever is easiest for the story so I don't hold you guys back even more? I'm happy to do anything really....

I can be evil :)

Miyata
10-22-2006, 06:12 PM
Just to clear things up will my character (the Quincy) be in SS trying to figure things out, or will he have been in the Calm the whole time just waiting for the perfect time to make a perfect entrance XD?

rOyKiA
10-23-2006, 02:02 AM
From what I know so far, Miyata you'll be part of the 'reinforcement' group...

..I think it'll be the 2nd group (unless you consider the person being chased and the pursuers as 2 different groups.)

Undying
10-23-2006, 03:14 PM
Bee is definitly one of the rescuers. The Quincy is also a rescuer.

BeeCrest
10-24-2006, 01:11 AM
Bee is definitly one of the rescuers.

I'm fine with that :)

Hehe, me....rescue.

sherenetms
10-24-2006, 06:08 AM
So then, who else havent got a role for his/her character?

V updated

(2/X) SS: Iro-Kun, BeeCrest, sherenetms


(2/4) Calm: Neve, Decado
(If we need more: Undying, sherenetms, Hattemaker)


(2/X) Rescuers: sherenetms, BeeCrest, Miyata


(1/X) Other: rOyKiA


P.s: I thought Iro's character will be the first to go to Calm? If not, just disregard this, i just thought i happen to read through the plot discussion thread something about his character going into Calm first.

Hakuoro
10-24-2006, 11:23 AM
Exactly what will each of these people be doing when they first go to each place?

Undying
10-24-2006, 03:25 PM
The Calm people will begin adapting to their new surroundings while trying to find any means of getting out.

The Soul Society people are analyzing Azn's death.

The rescuers... are made up from the Soul Society and "other" categories...

Hattemaker
10-24-2006, 04:30 PM
Okay, I try to get this right. If it is something that is wrong, tell me ^^

updated the list:

(2/X) SS: sherenetms, BeeCrest
(Everyone who dont have any other group goes here)


(3/4) Calm: Neve, Decado, Iro-Kun
(If we need more: Undying, sherenetms, Hattemaker)


(3/X) Rescuers: sherenetms, Miyata, BeeCrest


(1/X) Other: rOyKiA

I dont remember if Iro was going to be in the SS or Calm group, I take a look on the plot, I just put him at Calm for now..

Iro
10-24-2006, 04:32 PM
based on the plot, i would be at the calm world. hopefully the plot does not change :)

Hattemaker
10-24-2006, 04:35 PM
yeah, but btw should everyone from SS be in to "Rescuers". Or will some charachters stay in SS the whole arc?

Undying
10-24-2006, 06:29 PM
I think that anyone is Soul Society is a "rescuer"...

And don't forget that the 6th division consists of more than just the characters you've listed, we have Nos, RH-man, Icchy and Rah (the newbies :p)... remember to put them in it too...

Hattemaker
10-24-2006, 07:30 PM
yeah I know its lots of people not listed, but they havnt said anything about where they want to be.. ^^

I guess I take the SS group away, if everyone in SS is going to be a Rescuer. So here is the list again.

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(3/4) Calm: Neve, Decado, Iro-Kun
(If we need more: Undying, sherenetms, Hattemaker)


(4/X) Rescuers: sherenetms, Miyata, BeeCrest, Hattemaker
(Everyone else joins here, They be in SS or wathever until its time to rescue the people in Calm.)


(1/X) Other: rOyKiA (Wandring alone in Calm, joining the Calm group later.)


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We still need some more members to post, so if you really want your characther to do something, please post.

And if you want your characther to do something else then the rest, post with reason etc. like Roy.

Neve
10-24-2006, 07:40 PM
I don't think N0s and RH are participating - at least, they haven't posted anything about the story yet.

Undying
10-24-2006, 07:46 PM
Then they get NPCs (Non-PLayer Characters) who get killed early.

Hakuoro
10-25-2006, 12:29 AM
Ill sign up for getting lost it Calm.

BeeCrest
10-25-2006, 12:43 AM
The Calm people will begin adapting to their new surroundings while trying to find any means of getting out.

The Soul Society people are analyzing Azn's death.

The rescuers... are made up from the Soul Society and "other" categories...

What does "other" categories imply again?

Undying
10-25-2006, 09:29 AM
^other categories are anyone who isn't in Calm.

sherenetms
10-25-2006, 01:47 PM
Then they get NPCs (Non-PLayer Characters) who get killed early.

OUCH!! Killed? *horrified*

Anyway, for those who have not decided where to go, there's only one spot left for the group heading to Calm. As for Icchy and Rahz, please do let us know asap on your choice. Once all the members who are interested in the fanfic has already submitted their choices, we can decide on those characters (like mine, Undying and Hattemaker) who can be substituted to fill in empty places.

Hattemaker
10-25-2006, 03:47 PM
Ill sign up for getting lost it Calm.

(4/4) Calm: Neve, Decado, Iro-Kun, Demonic_Ichigo
(If we need more: Undying, sherenetms, Hattemaker)


(4/X) Rescuers: sherenetms, Miyata, BeeCrest, Hattemaker
(Everyone else joins here, They be in SS or wathever until its time to rescue the people in Calm.)


(1/X) Other: rOyKiA (Wandring alone in Calm, joining the "Calm" group as the 5th member later.)

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well if D_I want to go to Calm, then Calm is full. And rest got to be Rescuers/SS, or "Other" if they want to do something else.

Icchy <3
10-25-2006, 04:24 PM
Ok, sorry I didn't come here ealier!

So, since I'm kinda new to the division, I don't have any idea whats going on with the whole writing thing.

Anyone wanna help me out? :P

Hattemaker
10-25-2006, 04:42 PM
ok, we are making a bleach fanfic. And we was hoping that most of the 6th division members would join and help us making this.

every member (or the members that want to help) have posted a characther. Most of the characthers is members of the 6th division. The only one who has something else then a shinigami is Miyata (a quincy). just take a quick look in this threads to understand this stuff:

http://forums.bleachportal.net/showthread.php?t=21421
and
http://forums.bleachportal.net/showthread.php?t=21423


We are currently working on the plot, and the first arc is a long way into the planing, we are soon ready to start writing. But I suggest that you take a look on the "Plot discussion" thread for more info. As I dont have the time to write more about this atm.

(plot: http://forums.bleachportal.net/showthread.php?t=21422)

Miyata
10-25-2006, 10:28 PM
Sorry I haven't been active lately but I've been ill :(. I'll help out as much as I can now because I'm much better now :D. After some well deserved sleep.

rOyKiA
10-26-2006, 05:54 AM
@Adam and Michael >> When Hatte said....

Originally posted by Hattemaker
every member (or the members that want to help) have posted a character. Most of the characters is members of the 6th division.

..it means that we post a fictional character that we created and this fictional character will be/eventually will be a member of the 6th div in the story.

So if you have a fictional character at the back of your mind or stored somewhere, post them in the appropriate thread (w/ shikais and bankai abilities) so we can include you (your character) in the story.:winking56

Hattemaker
10-26-2006, 01:23 PM
Update, added Icchymaru. (I guess he post his Characther soon.. :face82:)

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(4/4) Calm: Neve, Decado, Iro-Kun, Demonic_Ichigo
(If we need more: Undying, sherenetms, Hattemaker)


(5/X) Rescuers: sherenetms, Miyata, BeeCrest, Hattemaker, Icchymaru
(Everyone else joins here, They be in SS or wathever until its time to rescue the people in Calm.)


(1/X) Other: rOyKiA (Wandring alone in Calm, joining the "Calm" group as the 5th member later.)

RahxephoN
11-05-2006, 05:12 PM
emmmm am i into the story yet or not?
i just wonder cause i have posted my bio some time now....
(if i cant enter just tell me....cause i think i should know that...!!!!:( )

Hattemaker
11-05-2006, 05:26 PM
Dont worry Rah, the first chapter is not finished yet. So we have lots of time to put you into the story.

I add you to Rescuers for now, If you want to be somewhere else just post it and we can see what we can do.. =P

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(4/4) Calm: Neve, Decado, Iro-Kun, Demonic_Ichigo
(If we need more: Undying, sherenetms, Hattemaker)


(6/X) Rescuers: sherenetms, Miyata, BeeCrest, Hattemaker, Icchymaru, RahxephoN


(1/X) Other: rOyKiA (Wandring alone in Calm, joining the "Calm" group as the 5th member later.)

RahxephoN
11-05-2006, 05:31 PM
thanks a lot hatte:D

PS:I thought that i was kinda left aside.....*slaps himself for thinking something like that*:D:p

Hattemaker
11-05-2006, 05:34 PM
Hahaa, nope Rah. Its just that you had not posted where you wanted your characther to be, so I didnt put you on the list. =P

RahxephoN
11-05-2006, 06:00 PM
sry i didnt know that i had to ask for a role....:p
anyway thanks for adding me:D

Decado
11-06-2006, 03:07 AM
hmm, ok. so Rah's in. but we haven't decided on wat Undying's gonna be doin.
ie/ rescuer or Calm traveller ??
the others seem to be set

Undying
11-06-2006, 06:41 AM
I think I'm gonna be other - I have my own schemes to start, and I'll join the division laterzors, surprisingly knowlegeable about what happened... (Urahara style: a tendency to know everything and to tell nothing).

Decado
11-06-2006, 07:18 AM
lolz ok. that does sound Urahara style.

so its:

(4/4) Calm: Neve, Decado, Iro-Kun, Demonic_Ichigo



(6/X) Rescuers: sherenetms, Miyata, BeeCrest, Hattemaker, Icchymaru, RahxephoN


(1/X) Other: rOyKiA (Wandring alone in Calm, joining the "Calm" group as the 5th member later.)
- Undying

Miyata
11-06-2006, 11:52 AM
About the rescuing bit, does that mean that we are going to write about what is happening in SS while the whole Calm thing is going on or not?

Undying
11-06-2006, 12:44 PM
Yes, but only in bits and pieces, to keep most of what's happening there.

I suggest that it'll be written from Undying's POV, since he's the most mystery dude there :).

School computer FTFL :p.

Miyata
11-06-2006, 12:47 PM
So Undying, what category is your character going to be in, Rescuers, others etc?

Decado
11-06-2006, 12:49 PM
i already made an update an placed him in others as he mentioned.
it's in the chapter summary thread if i recall correctly...

Miyata
11-06-2006, 12:50 PM
*Miyata zooms off to the Chapter Summary thread :p*

Thanks Decado.

Neve
11-06-2006, 12:55 PM
Sorry - I'm really ill today, so ima probably miss the deadline by a couple of days, because if I tried to write the last couple of paragraphs now they'd come out rubbish :(. So...yeah...sorry about that =(.

Miyata
11-06-2006, 12:58 PM
No worries Neve. As long as the chapter is of the best quality of your ability, I woudn't mind waiting a mont :p.

Decado
11-06-2006, 01:07 PM
same here Neve. as Miyata said

take it easy..

Hattemaker
11-06-2006, 02:45 PM
Take your time Neve. ^^

Undying
11-06-2006, 02:52 PM
We've waited that long, another couple of days will be nothing but a few drops in the ocean of our waiting.

Lolol. Meanwhile, we'll continue developing chapter two and where will this arc take us...

My character role will remain hidden for a while - I choose to remain Urahara for now :).

Miyata
11-06-2006, 02:57 PM
Just to get things cleared up, whose POV is chapter 2 to be written from, and what will the focus be, the battle against the psycho?

Also, at what part will this chapter end? Will the characters just about have entered the Calm?

@Undying: I think I'll be the Ishida of the group then (Not caring about Shinigami business lol) :D

Undying
11-06-2006, 03:01 PM
Chapter two I think will be written from... well, since we'll be writing several scenes, I suggest writing it from a POV that observes both groups (i.e. 3rd person past).

Undying's POV fiits perfectly to his role.

Miyata
11-06-2006, 03:02 PM
Undying has the role of...

Sorry if I keep asking questions, its just I'm a bit unclear about these minor details :p.

Decado
11-06-2006, 03:07 PM
i answered a question similar to this in the other thread where u asked a similar question. I guess we'll wait to c where Neve finished with the chapter
ie/ just entering Calm probably, or seeing the portal is where we should be

POV = person either going into Calm or as Undying said 3rd person past

Miyata
11-06-2006, 03:12 PM
Sorry if repeat myself in other threads, I have a terrible memory :(.

Decado
11-06-2006, 03:25 PM
lol, that's ok

Miyata
11-23-2006, 10:36 PM
OK, I think we need to start discussing what is going to happen with the other characters. Which are; my character, sherenetms' and Rah's. The story seems to based quite solely at the moment on Kaito, Kumiko and Iro's character (Sorry I've forgeeton his name again :p), and we don't want to leave characters out, so we should either change the course of what is going to happen in the Taizen arc, add something to the Betrayer arc, or make a competely new arc =O.

Undying
11-23-2006, 10:39 PM
Indeed.

What role would you like your character to play? For now, I do know he's included in mine's schemes (apparently to open a door to Taizen without a Shifting Shard you need a Quincy - Bounto Arc rip-off XD).

Miyata
11-23-2006, 10:44 PM
Talk about canon XD.

Anyways, I wouldn't mind if there was some sort of dispute with my character, since he was a Quincy with Shinigami he was unaccpeted in the Shinigami community or something, and since everyone hated him he left the Gotei 13, left Seireitei and went into the deepest districts of Rukongai. Then when somebody's character is about to die *plays cavalry music* my character to the rescue.

Okay, I had to get that off of my chest. I'm not too sure about that idea but that's for it to be discussed. Any other ideas? Of how my character could be implemented into the current 2 arcs (Taizen and Betrayer)?

Undying
11-23-2006, 10:58 PM
Well, we have already mentioned that he gets to be the cavaliery in the battle inside Taizen, but meanwhile, he didn't get any action.

My suggestion is as follows: since I do wish to make it so our heroes return to open war, he will be very angry because of our comrades' vanishing, and it will result ina brawl or two (as Shinigami realy do dislike Quincy, you know). After that he gets frustrated and distances himself from Seireitei for a short while before my cahr recalls him.

The Quincy's link to the mysterious vanishing of several Shinigami, and his apparent anger then vanishing will rouse suspicion in the laready suspicios Shinigami, and after the rest of the 6th elite leaves for Taizen, war breaks.

How is that? In other words the Quincy's role is to be the spark to the war.

Hakuoro
11-23-2006, 10:59 PM
"pushes in my character"

Undying
11-23-2006, 11:21 PM
Ok DI push it in. But where to?

Miyata
11-24-2006, 04:17 PM
I quite like the idea Undying, and I think its a ppropriate for there to be a bit of a Shinigami Quincy brawl. So where do we implememnt this into the chapters/arcs?

sherenetms
11-24-2006, 04:42 PM
Hmmm....i like the idea as well. The shinigami-quincy dispute will help make the story even more interesting and exciting. Btw, if no one minds, i would like to have my character to be the one investigating taicho's death...u know, like how i suspected something's wrong etc.

Undying
11-24-2006, 05:42 PM
Well. About the Shinigami brawl, Miyata you can input it in your chapter (next one?), easily, by being told by my char that taicho is dead, and being angry and so on. For argument's sake we can assume that our cahracters are good friends (feel free not to make it so, I'm just suggesting here). With this in mind, if my char seems to be hiding something from your, he will get annoyed and this will open a path to the brawl.

Just a suggestion, feel free to do anything else :).

Sherene, I was thinking on making your character be our "cover up", making sure nobody knwos about our captain's death. If you have another role in mind please share with us. Investigating the taicho's death... well, since it seems my character already knows a lot about it, maybe it's not very relevant.

Miyata
11-24-2006, 05:45 PM
I like the idea, but why would my character br mad if he found out that Taichou was dead, I mean, friends hiding something from eachother wouldn't be a big enough matter for my character to leave Seireitei, I think we need to think up of something bigger.

As for me writing the next chapter, HUH?!

Undying
11-24-2006, 05:55 PM
By order...

1. Hm. What your cahracter can be annoyed at may be the fact that he will be blamed for the 6th Captain's "vanishing" (since Shere's cahr covered his death) along with other 6th divisioners. It can also be that your character has his own plans and he does it because of reason X or something.

2. Why not? Won't you write it? After all, who knows Akira Sendo better than you, the one who made him?

Miyata
11-24-2006, 05:58 PM
Okay, I see your point, just one thing, his name is Sendo Akira, not Akira Sendo, I accidently put his first name first :p.

If you meant to put his last name first then sorry for the misunderstanding.

Undying
11-24-2006, 06:32 PM
lol Nah, I prefer using the Japanese version for Japanese names, so thanks for the correction :).

Sendo Akira it is, then :).

Miyata
11-24-2006, 06:39 PM
Just to clear things up:

Akira - Family name.

Sendo - First name.

Glad I got that out of the way :p.

Undying
11-24-2006, 07:39 PM
ROTFL man I'm stupid :p

Akira Sendoi :).

sherenetms
11-24-2006, 09:34 PM
^ LOL.

Anyway, i dont mind Amane doing just that. Doesnt really matter. But it would be nice if she would be the one suspecting something was wrong with the captain's death and all. If i'm not mistaken, the captain isnt exactly dead, is he? Or is he? But i thought i read somewhere that he left some 'plans' behind, right? Erm....i think i'm lost again. Sigh....

Decado
11-25-2006, 02:13 AM
nah, we decided that he would die but his previous actions have started the chain of events

Undying
11-25-2006, 01:43 PM
Yeah indeed, the captain's schemes caused a chain reaction that has caused war.

sherenetms
11-26-2006, 07:48 AM
And i would love it if Amane is the one who figured out those 'schemes'.

Also, this is just an idea that suddenly popped out of my wacko brain. Since the captain does indeed have some evil plans in mind that caused the whole war thingie, why not make Amane suspicious of him all along, even before he died? She knew the captain has something stored for them, but because the captain is her captain and the captain is also Kumiko's lover (kumiko and amane are supposed to be good friends, right?), she just pushes the feeling aside. But when the captain got killed, amane was entrusted with the responsibilty to cover up his death. While doing so, she decided to investigate a little further and founded out that she was right all the while.. Then things get real complicated as she attempts to explain to the division members, especially Kumiko, who has all this time looked up upon the captain, that he is actually the cause behind all the sequence of unfortunate events.

So? Tell me what u guys think. It's just an idea....*hides and waits for the 'BOO'*

Decado
11-26-2006, 08:29 AM
the captain is also Kumiko's lover
that makes it sounds like they're sleeping together

were they.......?

anyway, the idea sounds really good Sher. It's ur char, so go for it. The only hard thing there is that now u have to decide WHAT actually the captain did, what u were suspicious of, and how those actions led to wat's currently happening.

sherenetms
11-26-2006, 12:55 PM
that makes it sounds like they're sleeping together

were they.......?

But judging from the first chap, it does sound like they were lovers, werent it? Hmm....i think i'm lost again. Where's Neve? It's best to get a confirmation from him. NEVE!!! Where r u?

Neve
11-26-2006, 01:40 PM
that makes it sounds like they're sleeping together

were they.......?

They were =D.

Decado
11-26-2006, 02:11 PM
Kaito's extremely pissed off










if he finds out...unless he already knew..

Undying
11-26-2006, 04:06 PM
He knew? Or has he... that'd be an interesting thing to think about...

Anyway Sher, yeah I think I'm going to add Daisetsu telling Amane that she should cover up and investigate or something like that.

Iro
11-27-2006, 01:06 PM
hey guys please fill me in... i'm completely lost :p where are we now exactly in the story collab?

Undying
11-27-2006, 01:44 PM
Chapter 3 - right after Captain's death the 6th loses half it's members (since they are all sucked into a portal).

sherenetms
11-28-2006, 03:21 AM
@Undying: yay!! At last, Amane playing detective. ^^

@Decado: LOL. I forgot, your char is actually in love with kumiko, right? Hmm.....this is going to be so interesting....hehehehe. *wicked grin*

Decado
11-28-2006, 04:09 AM
lol......

ok.. Kaito likes Kumi yeh..they're characters. :P

sherenetms
11-29-2006, 04:47 PM
ok.. Kaito likes Kumi yeh..they're characters. :P

Obviously they are characters. They cant be real because if it is, ehem! I dont wanna discuss this issue. :p

Decado
11-29-2006, 10:37 PM
>.<
*back to story/char roles*

yeah tho remember, (esp for others who need to involve Kaito) due to his "history" there's no way he's going to be evident about any sort of 'romantic' feelings towards Kumiko...so it's most prob not gonna - if ever...there would just be tension, esp within Kaito, for eg he has to push away the feelings for fear of getting too close (basically to anyone, even friends - that's y he needs a solid friend = atm Undying's char) in case his past is re-lived.
Reader would have already seem glimpses of his psychological frailty in the second, his first, chapter.

sherenetms
12-06-2006, 01:24 PM
I see....what a twist. That would certainly leave some readers romantically disappointed. LOL.

Decado
12-06-2006, 01:26 PM
lol, not a twist. it was in his profile ^^;

sherenetms
12-06-2006, 01:34 PM
LOL. I meant in the storyline. How many readers will actually read the profile of the characters before they read the story? Some (one of them would be me, hehe!!) might actually hope there would be a chance for another romance to develop. Well, guess no more. ROFL. *pats Decado*

Decado
12-06-2006, 01:42 PM
haha.....

tho if they're perceptive, they can tell something's not right with him... dun really need to be too perceptive to figure that one out tho, i mean, when his headaches start...and his need to hack flesh arises... ppl prob wouldn't want him to be with Kumiko.
That's where my character becomes the guy that deserves to be with her (possible, *shrug*) but he can't........
audience: "aww.... ;_;"

r o f l

sherenetms
12-06-2006, 01:47 PM
*cries*

That's s-so...s-so......S-SA-DDD-D!!!!!! *blows nose with a large hanky*

Undying
12-06-2006, 01:52 PM
>.>

Err, I think I just set it into my life's goal to make Kaito and Kumiko stay together. Just for fun :p.

sherenetms
12-06-2006, 01:56 PM
\o/

*cheers*

Happy endings are so sweet!!!
(okok....maybe that's a little too cheesy, but who doesnt enjoy happy endings?)

Decado
12-06-2006, 02:05 PM
moi
it doesn't depict real life >.>

*cries*

That's s-so...s-so......S-SA-DDD-D!!!!!! *blows nose with a large hanky*
haha, kawaii..

@Undy: in the end maybe...but not during......

Undying
12-11-2006, 07:45 PM
Hehe, that's up to you De, cause, well, my char won't be able to affect yours for a long time, different dimensions, see...

Anyway, currently sher's character, B's, and mine are investigating what happened with the captain and what are his schemes.

Miyata's can try to find a way to get into Taizen to rescue our friends. Is that agreed upon?

Miyata
12-11-2006, 08:33 PM
That's cool with me :D.