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Pantera
10-24-2006, 06:11 PM
'The media always lie but vampires never die...'

'Our camera man Joseph Blantford has captured footage of these so called vampires. It is suggested that you do not step foot outside nor do you come in any contact with any of them. The most affective way to kill them is to pierce their heart or use a cross, the garlic method has not been tried but use holy water at all costs!' The group of five sat round the broken down black and white Television each holding a wepon not letting their guard down for one moment.

'Amazing how this stupid contamination started isn't it. Somebody actually believed a book and went working on bloody corpses...' Brandon grinned passing the blood encrusted Nail gun through his hands looking at the rest of the survivors who were trapped with him in the D.I.Y shop.

'I really couldn't give a damn, I want out of here untouched by one of them isn't that right Luke honey?' Yumi smiled looking at her husband who had been ill the past couple of days, his skin was becoming pale like the moon hanging in the sky watching the blood shed they were surprised that the moon itself hadn't became red.

'Y..yeah I guess...' He spat out holding a pitch fork tightly as they still went unnoticed by the blood soaked creature's outside.

'How about you kid? You keepin' good?' Brandon smirked looking over at a small teenage boy sharpening bamboo spears.

'I have name you ass, it's Vince' The boy grunted making sure his spears could pierce anything easily.

'What the hell is the matter with yo...wha?' Yumi's attention suddenly turned towards the back store room.

'Thats why, you seriously think they would ignore fresh meat?' No-one listened to Vince's *****ing instead all of them gripped their guns and make shift wepons tightly as they approached the back store room. The dim light flickered as they walked past tons upon tons of shelves full of paint and other accessories, to the survivors this was was to the vampires advantage they could easily pick them off one by one if there was any.

'Hahahaha god talk about nerves, it was just a stone...' Luke laughed letting go of Yumi's shoulder and staggering over to the stone.

'Oh thank god I thought it could have been one of them ' She laughed turning her back.

'Here's a question....who kicked or flng the stone?' Vince smirked before walking back into the room from once they once entered.

'That means....' Luke cried quietly about to choke on his tongue. A shelf came tumbling down as a bald headed man covered in blood hurled himself onto luke.

'GET HIM OFF ME PLEASE! GET HIM OFF!!!' He shrieked as the fangs entered into his throat the creature made it look easy as if he was simply biting into an apple and the only struggle with it was to take the skin with it.

'I think those guys say differently' Brandon whispered to Yumi as more and more crawled through the window joining into the feast.

Pantera
10-26-2006, 08:28 PM
'More to feed the feast of the night!' One of them growled. Yumi stared in shock at the blood stained features of the vampires. Brandon however was more shocked that they could speak.

'Yeah well I can give you some crunchy nails to satisfy that taste!' He grinned rasing the nail gun to the head of the vampire.

'Wrong place bastard...Try a little bit lower if your quick enough that is...' The other vampires slowly joined by what looked like the ring leader's side.

'Slosh them in the throat if they try anything.....' Brandon said through his teeth with that trigger happy feeling once more running through his fingers. One of the vampire's that had crawled through the window was the first to make his move as she crawled up the wall. Her meal was to be Yumi if she could get close to her that is. The top half of her head was cut clean off as she raised the shovel into the vampire's mouth, it was a massacre waiting to begin.

'Now does any other of you *****es wanna go?' She screamed raising her shovel like a mighty war hammer.

'Oh shit....' The ring leader whimpered, at first Brandon though it was them who he was scared of but infact two tall figures wearing Trench coats and both carrying bow and arrow.

'We thought we had told you to leave us alone!' One of them wearing the black trench coat yelled readying aim at one of them.

'Hahahahaha try it boyo!' They all yelled in unison dancing about like idiots.

'Why do we have to do this Kou? They're already gonna be dead...' His friend grinned raising his bow also.

'Because Saddler, it's our jobs and we show them who's boss tonight...' Kou grinned showing silver plated teeth.

'Jobs...?' Brandon thought to himself as an arrow whizzed past his cheek leaving a small cut. It entered through the ring leader's heart before crucifying him to a wall.

Evanesque
11-01-2006, 08:28 AM
Nice story...interesting with the vampires...I like the fact that you've added breaks between texts and not gone on and on with lines of words. I like it a lot but I think you should add a little more description to it. I feel the story starts way too fast and its a teeny bit confusing but anyway, it's cool, keep up the good work, keep writing! *thumbs up*