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Poison Ivy
12-16-2006, 07:50 AM
well this ish exactly wat the title says the story of a girl named Rayne

please read character list b4 reading story

Rayne-main; Rayvne-Raynes mom;Dr. Datenshi-Raynes dad(not to important);Ashrah-vamp queen;Ben-vamp king blinking is a power it transports you in the blink of an eye hince it being called blinking
well to start this story off lets go back to were it all began. she was born 4/10/81(to her knowledge). she was a happy healthy cheerful baby. all of Rayven's friends and neighbors were jealous with how good a baby she was. she had a very good child life and had every thing she could ever want. well when she started school thas when it all changed. first her mom dissapears. then she starts noticing that she is very different than all the other kids. the differances were unnoticable at first but then she started outrunning everyone in her class including her teacher. her scences were very hightened as if she had been turned into a wolf or sumthin. but she overlooked the differances and tried her hardest to it in. but two years later (she was 8) her dad, Dr. Datenshi, took her to his lab on a saturday. he was showing Rayne around when he took her into a room that had a surgery table and a six foot coffin in it. then, out of nowhere, two nurses grabed Rayne and held her to the table. then one of the nurses got a needle full of a weird looking fluid. the nurse then injected the fluid into Rayne's arm. she then started feeling drowsy but she fought the feeling as hard as possible. the nurses then put her into the coffin, all the while Rayne struggling for her freedom wishing her mom was there to protect her. once the nurses got her into the coffin the slid the lid over it and nailed it shut.as Rayne was drifting off ino the longest sleep she would ever endure she heard her dad saying "this is for your own safety", which filled her with anger that he would keep held up in her for the next seventeen yearsEight months after Rayne was put in the coffin a very tragic event happened.the town had become fed up with the way Dr. Datenshi was handling Rayne's dissapearancethey were angry so they surrounded the lab one day and burnt it to the ground. just about everything was destroyed. The only thing left standingwas the room Rayne was in, but noone dare go near it for the walls were covered in demonic symbols and spells that were glowing a bright blood red. After the mob set fire to the lab they went and set fire to Rayne's house which only had one room left standing and guess wat it was Rayne's old room. the total death toll for that day was 150 researchers in the field of genetics,this number included Rayne's dad, and 50 maids/butlers. (APRIL 10, 2006)(SEVENTEEN YEARS LATER) the king and queen of vampires were flying the town when Ashrah sencedthe great power coming from the little demonic room she swooped down immediatly. Ben followed her but had no idea why she had stopped. As Ashrah approached the room the symbols and spells started glowing a bright blood red. They got brighter and brighter as she got closer. the spell on the door was glowing baby blue and it was the brightest one of all. when Ashrah got close enough to it she started reading it. When she got done the door gave a loud hiss and opened. Theroom looked as if nothing had happened. As she walked in the room lit up an she saw the coffin in the corner. She walked up to it and saw that something was engraved in it she couldnt quite make out wat all it said but from wat she could see it said "Rayne Datenshi Age: unknown". Ashrah then called Ben,who was still outside wondering around in the ruble, into the roomand told him "We need to get this back to the base asap." Ben looks at her confused "Why?" "dont you remeber he legend not to mention wat the seer said." "I remember all to well wat the seer said" he tries to mimic the seer's voice "when you find the only child of the fallen angel approach with cation for she may look sweet but in her state she is very detructive. she is very vulnerable and not in her right mind but work with her and your kind with rule for all eternity." he stops mimicing. "so wat does this have to do with his" he points to the coffin. Ashrah shakes her head "don't you get it? Datenshi means fallen angel and from the records i've read she's the only one left." ben runs his hand over the engraving and feels a great surge of power. he then pulls his hand back almost immediatly as if he had been shocked. "wel wat are we waiting for?" They then each put a hand on the coffin, feeling the power surge through their bodies, and blinked Appearing in the main lab of the base with the coffin the king and queen both scurried around trying to find something to pry the coffin open. The queen found a crowbar. She started to pry open the coffinand the wood hissed as it cracked apart. As the rest of the lid splintered Ashrah gasped finding a girl lieing in the coffin, stiff as death, she looked about fifthteen. All of a sudden the girl sat up straight her blood red eyes turning black as night.she turned her head and as soon as she saw Ben she screamed "YOU!!!". He froze and dropped the crowbar that he had taken from Ashrah. Rayne leaped out of the coffin and onto Ben screaming "YOU WILL DIE FOR WAT YOU DID TO ME!!!!!". The queens eyes instantly turned catlike as she grabbed Rayne and pulled her off of Ben just in time 'cause if she would have waited another minute Rayne would have sunk her teeth into Ben's neck. Rayne, after being flung through the air by the queen, hits her head on the wall and her eyes turn back to their natural blood red beauty. Rayne instantly curled up into a ball and started crying. Ashrah got up, eyes still catlike, grabbed Rayne by the arm and yelled "WHATS YOUR PROBLEM? WE JUST GOT YOU OUT OF THAT BOX AND YOU GO AND ATTACK THE KING OF ALL VAMPIRES!!". Rayne's eyes turned an even darker red it looked almost like a bloody black. And she said in a very demonic voice "you mean they made my dad a vampire and then made him king?". Ashrah looked very confused because the entire time that she had been with Ben he never mentioned a daughter. Ben got up but stayed were he was with fear that Rayne mite attack again. "You must be misstaking me with someone else because one i dont you and two i don't have a daughter." Rayne looked confused." Wait that scent tha scent is soo natural. you don't smell like a lab. im so sorry." her eyes turned a soft blue." you just look so much like my dad. and my dad was the one that put me in there". she points to the coffin. "and i was just trying to stop him from doing any more experiments on me." Rayne looks down, trying to hold back tears as she remembers the numerous tests that he had performed on her, and noticed that she has boobs. " holy h*** how long have i been in there?". Rayne grabs the piece of the lid that had "Age unknown." written on it. Ashrah looks over at Rayne and says "thats what we were gonna ask u. when was your birthday?" "april tenth,1981, why? what year is it now?" Ben looked at Asrah. "april tenth 2006." "you mean to tell me that im 25 years old!?!?!" "yea but you only look 15." Ben looked a litle nervous. "well happy birthday." Rayne goes over to Ben to try to help him up, butBen scoots up against the wall afraid that she might attack him again. "get away from me!" Ben had fear in his voice "dont worry your scent is tottaly different than my dads now that i actually stop to smell it and i have ur scent memorized. But maybe you two can help me find him?" Rayne looks over at Asrah. "maybe. whats his name?" "Dr. Daniel Datenshi, the slim ball." Ashrah and Ben look at each other. "you mean THE Dr. Datenshi, the one that was researching the vampire gene?" "yea that slim ball." "sorry to tell you but he's dead." "dead! wait, wat? who killed him?" "the townspeople. they all rioted and burned down the labe and his home about 8 months after you dissapeared

ProtoFunc
12-16-2006, 06:38 PM
Please don't post a thread in this section if there is nothing in it pertaining to this section. If you really want people to read your story, you could wait till you're ready to put it up as opposed to reserving a place for you to do so later.

I'll let this thread stay up for now unless you don't post that story in a timey manner. Until then however, i have reason to consider this thread spam. =/

Poison Ivy
12-17-2006, 01:56 AM
sorry it not spam i just have to figure out how to make spoilers and be allowed on the puter and the story will be up most likely including the third chapter