Katen Kyoukotsu
01-31-2007, 06:24 AM
Its been a while since Ive written a poem. I took the time tonight. Please tell be what you think.
Quiet these notions my good gentle friend
We are in darkness but all does not end
My soul still drives, my mind still flies
Away to the end of the world it does send
Me, and the song still plays
You have seen the end of all days
But he’s still alive, and he still does strive
To follow the old ways
Call me a sinner or whatever you please
It really doesn’t matter I’m still on my knees
Trying to forget, trying to arrive
In a place where I have all the keys
To the doors in my mind
To those of my kind
And he’s still there, simply he stares
To my heart I bind
His image, a lad just becoming a man
So much better than me, as from a plan
And I can’t take this pain, my soul it does wane
Evil does work and I ran
Towards the light but not for its good
I just need its shadow to blanket my hood
To him I say, on this foul day
I truly believe that you should
Quiet these notions my good gentle friend
We are in darkness but all does not end
My soul still drives, my mind still flies
Away to the end of the world it does send
Me, and the song still plays
You have seen the end of all days
But he’s still alive, and he still does strive
To follow the old ways
And that pride it hurts me more, than the dying stroke
And human as I am, the life I need to choke
From his veins, for it stains, my sense of reality
And what can it be called, but the old foe we have fought,
She comes for her reprisal, Jealousy
Quiet these notions my good gentle friend
We are in darkness but all does not end
My soul still drives, my mind still flies
Away to the end of the world it does send
Me, and the song still plays
You have seen the end of all days
But he’s still alive, and he still does strive
To follow the old ways
Call me a sinner or whatever you please
It really doesn’t matter I’m still on my knees
Trying to forget, trying to arrive
In a place where I have all the keys
To the doors in my mind
To those of my kind
And he’s still there, simply he stares
To my heart I bind
His image, a lad just becoming a man
So much better than me, as from a plan
And I can’t take this pain, my soul it does wane
Evil does work and I ran
Towards the light but not for its good
I just need its shadow to blanket my hood
To him I say, on this foul day
I truly believe that you should
Quiet these notions my good gentle friend
We are in darkness but all does not end
My soul still drives, my mind still flies
Away to the end of the world it does send
Me, and the song still plays
You have seen the end of all days
But he’s still alive, and he still does strive
To follow the old ways
And that pride it hurts me more, than the dying stroke
And human as I am, the life I need to choke
From his veins, for it stains, my sense of reality
And what can it be called, but the old foe we have fought,
She comes for her reprisal, Jealousy