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[Mighty Aramir]

Walking through a valley of darkness,
I found an angel to lead the way.
a light who defeated my lonelyness
and took the sorrow away.

Never tought it could be this simple,
to find someone to return the flame
to this frozen heart of mine
that without her dwelves in pain.

Give me the chance to be the man,
who comforts you at night,
who makes you smile and make you laugh.
The one who will endlessly stare,
for such beauty can't be believed,
much less for a fallen, lke me...

[Ai]

A somewhat biblical theme..It doesn't seem to have the flow that your last poem did, However the idea is still a nice one if rather overused and you've turned something ok out.

However i wouldn't mind seeing this once you've gone back over it and redone it a bit..^^

[Mighty Aramir]

biblical? O_o thats definetely not the idea, but thanx for the comment