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benothebeno
02-04-2007, 05:57 AM
I found a poem on this site i don't remember how it went or where i found it so while on the same subject as it ill write my own version of it im not really emo >_> btw im as happy and jolly as santa


Sitting on couch with knife in hand
slashing away as fast as i can
Drops of blood flow down to the couch as i twitch
The cuts in my wrist hurt like a bi*tch

The steams of blood look like a red river
As it flows down my right arm.
You ask why i did this?
you ask why i hit my self with a 12 iron and putter
It is because i was out of peanut butter

Lust
02-04-2007, 09:47 AM
....hmm try not to imagine it..

_Ink
02-04-2007, 09:49 AM
The lol factor is unlimitedly strong...

benothebeno
02-06-2007, 06:13 PM
The lol factor!?!?!?!??!?! ITs an emo poem what are you talking about

Ai
02-07-2007, 03:16 PM
mhmm, Peanut butter.

A somewhat interesting poem and funny at the end..^^..Nice work and looking forward to seeing more of your ideas.

Kalashnikov
02-07-2007, 05:13 PM
wow.................do emo's really do that if they ran out of peanut butter..i wonder

its good - the end is cool lol =P