I wanna play god with you

[SoundWave]

This is the beginning and the end of your time
It will blind your eyes and split your spine
You play with blades to release your fear
Be brave, use the pain and shed no tear

I know you will face the dark
I shall teach you about pure filth in the blink of an eye
Just drink your own blood once more
Then I can open the door

A rush from the red sweet taste
This life shall go to waste

The cry that you made was the cry of a dying child

So let's play a game tonight
I'll play dark and you'll play white

Just jump and leave it all behind
You're already out of your mind

This is the last ammunition, a fall to the ground
There is no one else around

You are not what you seem
I'm the trigger that can stop this dream

[Decado]

Man i love your poems......

reminds me/ very much of the type of stories I write about...

"You play with blades to release your fear
Be brave, use the pain and shed no tear"

"A rush from the red sweet taste
This life shall go to waste

The cry that you made was the cry of a dying child

So let's play a game tonight
I'll play dark and you'll play white"

"Just jump and leave it all behind
You're already out of your mind"


seriously it does...esp of my fic MoonBlade..... these type of parts i haven't yet reached with the character that is intended to potray the psychological darkness which seems to be potrayed here

as i've said before i'm not a poetry artist (not yet..i will learn a lot more about it the coming semester) so if i misintepret forgive me.

however I guess it's wat we draw from it too..


I'm goin to have to rep u for your poems. It'll be a real shame if more ppl dun see this.

I'm interested who else besides ppl of CB witness your poetry...?


thanks fer sharing..

[Isis]

...sugoi! Me loves this poem. I havent been here in ages and I missed your poems that I used to see ever so often, just like Ice's. It had a good flow and I was seriously looking at it like a nursery rhyme, cause it sounds so serious yet playful. Awesomeness ^^

[Mighty Aramir]

very good man... simple stated yet deeply rooted, love it! carry on my brother \m/

[SoundWave]

Thnx ppl! :D

...sugoi! Me loves this poem. I havent been here in ages and I missed your poems that I used to see ever so often, just like Ice's. It had a good flow and I was seriously looking at it like a nursery rhyme, cause it sounds so serious yet playful. Awesomeness ^^
I shall write more then ^^

I'm interested who else besides ppl of CB witness your poetry...?
I only post 'em on CB, no one else reads them.. hehe =]

Dec: I realised that it could actually be interpreted in more ways than one heh.. Initially it was supposed to be about a mentally disturbed person committing suicide..
But it could also be about a berserked warrior.. :p

Thnx again, now I really got my motivation back.. expect more:)

[Isis]

You're welcome ^_^ Yay, looking forward to it. You give me motivation to try my hand at more poetry, cause I havent in ages and I've lost it already -_-

[Decado]

Initially it was supposed to be about a mentally disturbed person committing suicide..
But it could also be about a berserked warrior.. :p
Thnx again, now I really got my motivation back.. expect more:)
Basically the same... if u know wat the character's actually about to do >.>

No prob, glad to see you write more. just read all/most of your old ones.

keep em coming.

[Askand]

Hey! *kiss and give you chocolate sticks* Cool one the flow is good and I loved it the way you face the parts. but instead of getting the feeling or losing hope for me is more like a feeling that althought everything seems lost the is still something left like a last oportunity to be saved. LOL, sorry but I like to look for the positive inside the madness.
Cool poem keep them coming.*hugs*

[Angel_shikigami]

That would make a good song.

[Evanesque]

=0 Awesome Sy!!!

You know what? Your poem could actually be turned into an awesome metal song \m/

Well done...very deep indeedly *nodsh*

[*kaname*]

It makes me feel, as if a cold hand is clutching my heart *shivering*. Great poem!

[benothebeno]

No offense to everyone else on this section but your my favorite poet ^^ :) i love your poems there so umm Meaningful?

[SoundWave]

Thnx hehe. . :)

Ev/A_S: Maybe..

[Baby-Pie]

omg so love this one....amazingly written..you motivate me..*goes to write in book*

[Lenne]

n0sy you've been showing off ur talent while i was away eh? =O waaaaa, you should think about publishing a collection! ^.^

*is a proud supporter of the awesome and poetic n0sy*

=]

[Lady Ushio]

nice poem...nice details.