The Mercenary

[deto]

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shakehands, our contarct stands
with bold smile you show it to your friends
hired a killer without consciousness
i will turn your world into a mess

let my bullet redeem your pain
as it is working its way thru your brain
erasing all that was and will be
the light of tomorrow you wont see

i know neither wrong nor right
money a good enough reason to fight
i'm a mercenary, thats my life
the rifle on my side my faithful wife

senses dull and blunt from all the lies
humanity the thing i most despise
know no regret, call me sorrow
i've come - your life to borrow

devouring your soul as you lay dead
a trophy will be made from your head
just another name on a grave so to say
a coward for trying to get in my way

i'm a self made monster and my own worst enemy
you can't get away, you'll never be free
a shot through your chest, the first sin was trust
there is no rest, for blood now i lust

[Decado]

v. nice deto

btw, is this:
i know whether wrong nor right
sposed to be:
i know neither wrong nor right?

[deto]

prolly yezzzz, thanx for thy input, gonna change :redbiggri

[Lucki]

:O thats really amazing! very powerful!

the rifle on my side my faithful wife ~i love that line, i get such a clear depressing picture!
a shot through your chest, the first sin was trust ~another favored line, i find that line again quite powerful!

I love this poem, very emotive writing!..