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Planeswalker
02-14-2007, 05:28 AM
Something written for Cheryle as a gift for valentines day.

I must stress that I made absolutly no attempt to make this into proper poetry, other than using stanzas. I think its easier to express myself directly, but it looks nicer as a poem than say a letter =p


Wo Ai Ni

Poetry is not my strong point,
Its purpose often lost on me.
But I can’t gfx or anything,
So here goes the expression of my feelings.

It all started with a painful dumping
By the one quite close to me.
I was thrown into a dark place,
With seemingly little hope.

Suddenly an angel
Smiled down upon me,
Saw my painful state
And blessed me with a Cheryle.

We were up and down
Ying and yang
Huggling and arguing,
But mostly huggling <3

You listen to my crap.
I listen to yours.
“DIEEEEEEEE MSN DIEEE”
Always makes me laugh.

I’m not allowed to marry you,
Due to my strong Non-Chinese-ism.
While I don’t think that’s fair,
Chances are Ill never see you anyway.

Despite that I want to stand by you,
The Mikuru of my brigade,
Try to help you through life
Via the ever annoying MSN.

I hope you will stand by me.
Internet or not,
Your one of my favourite people
And I hope to know you for years to come.

So for now I am you e-husband
And you’re my kinky (unusual) wife.
Let’s go together as far as we can
And live the CB life.

Cheryl
02-14-2007, 10:38 AM
*grins*

Kinky means unusual, yes! XDD MSN SHOULD DIEEEE. And you know it! x)

:glomp

<333 thanks soooo much for this poem Planesy!! :biggrinlo

Kimochi
02-14-2007, 11:06 AM
hmn ! so superb ! so romantic . altho it didn't rhyme but it's meaning is real nice !

Mighty Aramir
02-14-2007, 01:32 PM
OMFG i just saw Planes soft side!!!!
Never Mind man, its real good, and dont say poetry is not your strong point, poetry lives with you, breathes and feeds from your feelings, and if you write anything thats capable of delivering that same feeling to someone else, you're making, no, youre living true poetry!
Congrats man!

raisins
02-14-2007, 02:15 PM
lovely poem! with wo ai ni as a title, it's really romantic.... lucky girl cherye ^^
anyway, happy V's day to you two ^^