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Isis
02-14-2007, 01:06 PM
The words you first spoke
Silenced by the dismal storm
Only your arresting movements
Entranced my mind

The bond we did not break
Where companions only lay
By chance we felt something else
Undoubting those feelings stayed

Yet we were young and foolish
Inexperienced to make a move
Until time had run out on us
To be replaced by distance

Through the years that came after
We grew stronger and mature
Our bond closer than ever
Even as those feelings went astray

Yet deep within this tangled heart
Those feelings still remain
Kept locked up this well kept secret
Bound by our life that has changed

What was and what is now
Through tears, smiles and laughter
I wait for you here even if we're not
the people we were back then.

Mighty Aramir
02-14-2007, 01:29 PM
T-T its very good sis, love it!!

Isis
02-14-2007, 02:16 PM
Arigato ^^ *hugs*

SoundWave
02-14-2007, 02:49 PM
Nice ending.. Good flow.. Though at some points and awkward composition of words. Rly good .. love it .. b^^

Isis
02-14-2007, 02:57 PM
Thanks syche :) Appreciate the input

Baby-Pie
02-14-2007, 05:21 PM
wow thats really nice baby sisiter *hugs and kisses* your good...dint know you had it in you and love the ending btw its great..