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Isis
02-14-2007, 01:09 PM
Baby just fall, fall, fall
Their hearts just keep on falling
Into the greatest fever
That they've ever felt before

Unknown circumstance
Unreasonable love
Pure confusion
You interestingly portray

When you were younger
Did you ever love somebody that way
Your sensuous demeanour
Your men never saw the light of day

You send them into a fever
Yes a fever, they can't get away
A fever is all they ever feel
Until their hearts go into full decay

Oh a fever
Is something that you never want to feel
Oh that fever
It comes from the greatest sin

The kiss of that lady
Your soul is the price you pay
Oh the kiss of the Devil
You fall until you end up dead.

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It's not supposed to rhyme because I wrote this as a song in the Jazz/bar genre. The sort in hard-boiled detective stories.

Mighty Aramir
02-14-2007, 01:24 PM
O.O Very good dear!! Perfect for valentine's day!! XD

Isis
02-14-2007, 02:16 PM
Thank you darling, I rather like this one. Who knew I could sing the genre XD

SoundWave
02-14-2007, 02:52 PM
It has a quite comforting feeling, despite the not so comforting end :p.. Keep it up.. good piece!