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Anarchy
02-15-2007, 08:55 PM
Byakusoft
The Story of How Kuchiki Byakuya Took Over Microsoft

Chapter 1
The Arrival

On a slow day in Seireitei, Byakuya got bored with the weaklings in Soul Society and decided to go to human world. He had heard that there was a man greater than the rest of the humans named Bill Gates. It is said that this Bill Gates had as much power as Byakuya. So Byakuya searched high and low but could not find him anywhere in Japan. So he set out to China where he found something called “Hacked Windows”. Byakuya unaware that Windows is computer software thought he would buy some and install them in his mansion back at Seireitei.

“Where can find these hacked windows, I wish to purchase one hundred windows?” asked Byakuya.

“Right here,” replied a merchant, “on only full copies in Hong Kong.”

*Byakuya picks up a copy*

“What is this, it is just a box with a crappy coaster in it?!?!?!?!?” Byakuya asked in a rage “Chire, Senbonzakura”

*Senbonzakura cuts it into millions of pieces*

“It is a hacked version of Windows Vista created by Bill Gates,” answered the frightened merchant.

“Bill Gates you say,” Byakuya inquires “where might I find him.”

“They say he lives in America on top of the highest mountain in the world,” states the merchant.

(NOTE: Mt. Everest was the tallest mountain in the world but Bill got had a bigger one built just so he could but his mansion there *only in the FanFic not in real life*)

*Byakuya sets off for America to find Bill Gates and challenge him*

Chapter one Part one end

Chapter one Part two start


“Ah so this is the America that Bill Gates lives in. At first I went South America then this awful place in North America called Canada, but I see that the merchant was talking about the United States of America,” said Byakuya upon his arrival via shunpo.

“You wanna buy some Death Sticks mister?” asked the druggy.

“Perhaps, how much are the Sticks of Death?” Byakuya replied in a curios manner.

“Eighty bucks for one or eight hundred dollars for eleven,” the druggy answered while twitching.

“I’ll buy one for now,” Byakuya said with a tone of pure doubt “but if I find it useful I will be back for more.”

“Here is the Death Stick,” the druggy replied “do ya need any lessons?”

“What sort of weapon is this; I could crush it with my scarf?” Byakuya yelled. “How do you expect me to fight with this?”

“I don’t expect you to fight with is I expect you to smoke it.” the druggy back talked.

“Chire, Senbonzakura.” Byakuya said in a cool collected way. “Smoking is evil, and I destroy evil.”

“My Death Sticks, why would you do that?” the druggy asked and then ran away.

Byakuya travels around until he reached a place called San Francisco. He saw guys in scarves, short shorts and tank tops. Byakuya was pleased for he found a place where everyone dressed like him. He threw off his kimono and underneath was a tank top and short shorts. Byakuya began to ask around for Bill Gates whereabouts.

Chapter 1 End


Chapter 2
The Misunderstanding

“Where is Bill Gates I must find him!?!?!?” questioned Byakuya.

“Thhilly thailor, he liveth on that mountain,” the man with a lisp answered, “but why don’t you come with me to thith fabulouth party.”

“I don’t have time to go to this party. I am sorry but I must decline.” Byakuya replied.

“Oh come on thilly dilly, you look like a sthophithticated gentleman and it would be a pleasthure to have someone of your caliber to join uth,” the man (an obviously homosexual stereotype) said.

“Fine I mill go but I must make it quick.” Byakuya said giving into his demands.

Byakuya and the man traveled to downtown San Francisco to house next to the giant mountain. They entered the house and he saw that there were no women to be found.

“Where are all the women?” Byakuya questioned.

“Thilly goothe, there aren’t any women in Than Franthithco.” The man replied.

“Then what kind of party is this????” Byakuya asked angrily.

“Thith is my bestht friendth coming out party, you thilly man.” The man said.

“Where or what is he coming out of?” Byakuya asked with a confused look on his face.

“Thilly he ith coming out of the closet.” The man replied.

“You mean this man has been in his closet his entire life.” Byakuya confusedly stated.

“No you thilly thailor, he hith finally telling everyone that he is gay.” The man said trying to help Byakuya understand.

“WHAT HOMOSEXUALLITY IS WRONG!!!!!!!” screamed Byakuya “IT IS AGAINST THE RULES!!!!!!!!!!!”

*Byakuya threw his kimono back on unsheathed Senbonzakura and walk out the door*

“Chire, Senbonzakura” Byakuya said.
* Senbonzakura slaughtered everyone in the house*

Byakuya then used his shunpo to climb the mountain to get to Bill Gates’ house


Chapter 2 End

Chapter 3
The Intervention

Byakuya had been on a long journey but, what he didn’t know was that there were three others on a quest to kill Bill Gates. These three have been on the quest longer then Byakuya and there cause was much nobler. There was Nicholas JT Anasatsu the Fencer, Zack Jenkins the Gunslinger, and Guyklc (sorry guy I don’t know your name) the Cleric. They set off on their mission because Nick’s Xbox broke the very second the warranty expired.

“Zack, Guy” Nick said.

“Ya what is it?” they both replied.

“Uh who is that and why is he climbing the mountain?” Nick asked.

“He looks like a Shinigami but I can’t really tell.” said Guy.

“Well let’s kill him and then take down Gates.” Zack replied.

“Why do you always have to kill, why can’t you investigate first?” Guy asked.

“ ‘Cuz investigating is boring.” said Zack.

“Why don’t we just capture him and then question him.” suggested Nick.

“I like the sound of that.” replied Zack.

“Why are you two so barbaric?” Guy asked.

“I donno.” Nick and Zack replied

*The three of them speed up to capture the suspicious man*

“I-I-It’s Byakuya!” shouted Guy.

“Hey, Byakuya what are you doing out of Soul Society?!?!” questioned Zack.

“That is none of your concern Gunslinger.” replied Byakuya.

“Oh that son of a ...” Zack said but was interrupted by Nick.

“Zack cool down we need you to take down Gates.” said Nick.

*Zack tries bum rushing Byakuya but Nick and Guy knocked him out*

“Nick, what should we do?” asked Guy.
“Why the hell should I know? You’re the brains!” Nick replied.

“BYAKUYA, why are you here answer me!?!?” Nick shouted.

“I am here to slay Bill Gates.” Byakuya replied.

“Well I am afraid I can’t let you do that.” Nick said. “Therefore I challenge you!”

“Nick do not do it. He is said to be the strongest captain of all Soul Society.” warned Guy.

“I don’t care! You continue on and kill Bill, I will hold Byakuya off until you guys come back.” Nick said all brave and cool like (lol).

*Guy wakes Zack off explains the situation and they run off, Byakuya tries to stop them but Nick jumps in the way*

“Oh no you don’t your fighting me.” said Nick.

“I see you have a sword. What is it?” Byakuya asked

“The only zanpaktou that is shaped like a rapier.” replied Nick.

“WHAT A ZANPAKTOU!?!?!?!?!?” Byakuya screamed. “How could someone like you have a zanpaktou?”

“I am a Shinigami like my father before me. However unlike him I have tapped into the destructive powers of the Hollows by becoming a Vaizard.” Nick said tauntingly.

“Who are you?” Byakuya asked.

“I am Nicholas JT Anasatsu, Guardian of the Senate, the owner of the fencing Zanpaktoh and one that is going to kill you.” Nick answered.

“I see then I won’t go easy on you.” Byakuya said “Chire, Senbonzakura.”

“Kui Korosu (devour), Kijinakuma (pretty sure it mean fierce demon god)”

*While the two of them are fighting, Zack and Guy enter Bill’s house*

“Wow it is pretty big in here.” said Zack.

“Sure is, I wonder where he is though?” asked Guy.

“Who you looking for gentlemen?” Bill Gates asks.
“We’re looking for you!” Guy said…

To Be Continued

Chapter 3 End


Chapter 4
The Confrontation

“It seems that you have found me.” Bill Gates said.

“Prepare to die Gates!!!” Zack screamed.

As Zack began to charge, Byakuya fought with Nick. Their Zanpaktou clashed for hours until.

“I am sick of this Byakuya; let us finish this within the next five attacks, so I can at least see Bill Gates die.” Nick said.

“Fine, I will end this.” Byakuya said.

“Unfortunately, I will not see your demise.” Nick said in a sad voice.

“What do you mean? Byakuya questioned Nick. "There is only the two of us."

“I will show you. Um hold on for a second.” said Nick

Nick entered his mind and said “Tag.”

“Hehehehe, nice to meet you Byakuya, I am Exar Kunn and I will be the one to kill you,” Exar Kunn said as a hollow mask began to form around Nick’s face.

“What is this madness, I was to believe Vaizard controlled their inner hollow.” Byakuya said astounded.

“Well Byakuya, me and Nicky boy have made a truce. I fight the hard battles or the one he needs to end fast and he gives me a home. This also means that unlike the typical Vaizard I can keep the mask on for an exponential amount of time,” Exar explained. “Now may we end this?”

“Yes, I don’t see why not. However I must now kill you for you have become a threat to Soul Society...BANKAI,” Byakuya said in a cool and collected manner.

“Hehehe, Bankai.” Exar said.

Exar and Byakuya released all their reiatsu and charged at each other. An explosion occurred as their bankais clashed causing smoke to fill the air. From the smoke, Byakuya emerged while Exar was on the ground, slowly trying to get up.

“I see that you are stronger than me, however I have won the battle,” Exar said.

“Yes, you are correct,” Byakuya said looking at the gash in his side.

“My friend Guy, will heal your wounds when you get there. I am sure he wasn’t stupid enough to die yet.”

The hollow mask disappeared as Nick spoke.

“Why are you helping me?” Byakuya asked.

“Because you survived his bankai, and any man that can do that deserves my help.” Nick replied.

Nick helped Byakuya to Bill Gates’ manor. Upon entering, they found Zack and Guy on the floor.

Nick rushed to them but as he got to them, someone yelled, "It’s a trap get out of there!!!”

Nick turned around to see Guy running at him, and when he turned back Bill Gates grabbed his neck and threw him back.

Guy rushed to Nick while Zack rushed to help Byakuya stand.

“This guy is tuff. Don’t underestimate him.” Guy said.

“Right *cough* go help Byakuya.” Nick said. “Zack and I will hold him off until he is healed."

Zack and Nick began to battle Bill Gates while Guy healed Byakuya.

“So you are Bill Gates, I wonder what your Zanpaktou looks like?” Nick said.

“I don’t know. It all happened so fast. I was running at him with my guns a blazin when next I know Guy is healing me.” Zack said.

“Well you watch my back and I’ll watch yours, 'k?” Nick said.

“If you two are done talking I have more people to scam and a meeting at five o’ clock with the Bobs. So if we could wrap this up.” Gates said as he pulled out a keyboard shaped Zanpaktou.

“What the hell is that?!?!” Nick and Zack exclaimed.

“This is my Zanpaktou, Gateway.” Gates answered. “Open, Gateway”

“Kui Korosu, Kijinakuma.” Nick said.

“Sha Nuku (shoot through), Meidojuuhou (Hell’s Guns).” Zack said.

The three of them fought until Gates threw Zack and Nick back. Byakuya entered the fight.

“You truly are the strongest in the human world but now you will meet your match.” Byakuya said. “Chire, Senbonzakura.”

Byakuya charged at Gates and their Shikai’s clashed until...

“You’re pretty strong for a shinigami, what are you captain class?” Gates asked

“Yes I am the captain of the sixth division, but enough of this, it is about time for me to return, so BANKAI!!!” Byakuya exclaimed.

“What is that??? What did you do???” Gates said in a scared voice.

“This is bankai, and it seems that you have not encountered it before. So I will let you leave on one condition.” Byakuya said.

“Yes whatever it is I will do it, just please let me live.” Gates begged.

“You must become my servant and obey every word I say.” Byakuya said.

“Yes anything, my master.” Gates said.

“Now I want you to give these three what ever they want and I will return in three months to make sure you are doing everything I say.” Byakuya said.

He opened the gates to Soul Society and left.

“You heard him, now give us a new Xbox or a new Xbox 360.” Nick said.

“Yes, sir right away.” Gates said as he left to get three Xbox 360s and every game out. “I hope this pleases you.”

“Thank you Gates, I hope we never meet again.” Nick said as the three of them left.

Three months passed and true to his word Byakuya returned. He wanted the things he sent from Soul Society to be done immediately.

“BILL!!!!” Byakuya said.

“Yes master.” Gates replied.

“Did you schedule me for my "I am better than everyone" speech because I don’t see it on my planner” Byakuya asked.

“Umm... yes sir I'm pretty sure I did.” Gates answered.

“Well I don’t see it you know what that means right?” Byakuya asked.

“Oh god no not that!!!” Gates cried.

“Yes that.” Byakuya said.

“Stupid Byakuya cutting my pay again I oughta…” Gates said just under his breath.

“WHAT WAS THAT!?!?!?” Byakuya yelled.

“Oh nothing master.” Gates replied as he walked off crying.

THE END

Guy
02-19-2007, 04:43 AM
LMAO! So you post it here? I'll be waiting for the next chappy.

Anarchy
02-19-2007, 04:44 AM
I post it in both places

Guy
02-19-2007, 04:45 AM
Lol, ok, now please rate my fanfic, please. ^^

Lust
02-24-2007, 05:09 AM
“What is this, it is just a box with a crappy coaster in it?!?!?!?!?” Byakuya asked in a rage “Chire, Senbonzakura”
hmm...i dont think byakuya will say this but it is funny lol

Anarchy
02-24-2007, 06:39 AM
Chapter 2
The Misunderstanding

“Where is Bill Gates I must find him!?!?!?” questioned Byakuya.

“Thhilly thailor, he liveth on that mountain,” the man with a lisp answered, “but why don’t you come with me to thith fabulouth party.”

“I don’t have time to go to this party. I am sorry but I must decline.” Byakuya replied.

“Oh come on thilly dilly, you look like a sthophithticated gentleman and it would be a pleasthure to have someone of your caliber to join uth,” the man (an obviously homosexual stereotype) said.

“Fine I mill go but I must make it quick.” Byakuya said giving into his demands.

Byakuya and the man traveled to downtown San Francisco to house next to the giant mountain. They entered the house and he saw that there were no women to be found.

“Where are all the women?” Byakuya questioned.

“Thilly goothe, there aren’t any women in Than Franthithco.” The man replied.

“Then what kind of party is this????” Byakuya asked angrily.

“Thith is my bestht friendth coming out party, you thilly man.” The man said.

“Where or what is he coming out of?” Byakuya asked with a confused look on his face.

“Thilly he ith coming out of the closet.” The man replied.

“You mean this man has been in his closet his entire life.” Byakuya confusedly stated.

“No you thilly thailor, he hith finally telling everyone that he is gay.” The man said trying to help Byakuya understand.

“WHAT HOMOSEXUALLITY IS WRONG!!!!!!!” screamed Byakuya “IT IS AGAINST THE RULES!!!!!!!!!!!”

*Byakuya threw his kimono back on unsheathed Senbonzakura and walk out the door*

“Chire, Senbonzakura” Byakuya said.
* Senbonzakura slaughtered everyone in the house*

Byakuya then used his shunpo to climb the mountain to get to Bill Gates’ house


Chapter 2 End

Lust
02-24-2007, 06:46 AM
byakuya wouldnt kill anyone EXCEPT the person agaist the rule of soul society or agaisnt the rule of his clan

Anarchy
02-24-2007, 06:49 AM
I am pretty sure homosexuality is against the rules of his clan

Lust
02-24-2007, 06:51 AM
well yea...IF the person is in his clan...he wouldnt care other ppl except from his clan

Anarchy
02-24-2007, 07:00 AM
Oh well it's just a fanfic that is supposed to be funny

Guy
02-24-2007, 07:01 AM
Lol, well, just try not to get too carried away...

Anarchy
02-24-2007, 07:06 AM
that was the more drastic unByakuya thing Byakuya will do

Lust
02-25-2007, 05:47 AM
pardon me but who is unbyakuya is?

Evanesque
02-25-2007, 07:19 AM
WTF? :Haha

I like it so far...nice work Exar! Byakuya seeking out Bill Gates and using senbonzakura everytime he sees anything wrong. Lolz at the gay and death sticks thingy XD

Give us more!! The fic is silly and is supposed to make you laugh.

@Exar: Why don't you list the chappie titles in your original post? That way it'll be easier to find and read the chappies...

*cookies*

Anarchy
03-04-2007, 09:07 AM
chapter three has been added to first post

Lust
03-04-2007, 09:14 AM
this is getting silly yet hilarious:p btw...its zanpaktou not Zanpaktoh lol but i dont think it matter much :p

Anarchy
03-04-2007, 09:16 AM
o geez it *goes corrects* ok and thank you

Guy
03-05-2007, 02:39 AM
Lol, this is priceless. I'm in the fanfic! lmao. Well, keep up the good work.

Evanesque
03-05-2007, 06:15 AM
This fic's just too cute and silly! XD
Nice work Exarkunn....


The Intervention

Byakuya had been on a long journey but, what he didn’t know was that there were three others on a quest to kill Bill Gates. These three have been on the quest longer then Byakuya and their cause was much nobler.

There was Nicholas James Thaddeus Lambro the Fencer, Zack Jenkins the Gunslinger, and Guyklc (sorry guy I don’t know your name) the Cleric. They set off on their mission because Nick’s Xbox broke the very second the warranty expired.

“Zack, Guy” Nick said.

“Ya what is it?” they bother replied. (I didn't get what this line meant)

“Uh who is that and why is he climbing the mountain?” Nick asked.

“He looks like a Shinigami but I can’t really tell.” said Guy.

“Well let’s kill him and then take down Gates.” Zack replied.

“Why do you always have to kill the (I think the 'the' was put in by mistake) why can’t you investigate first?” Guy asked.

“ ‘Cuz investigating is boring.” said Zack.

“Why don’t we just capture him and then question him.” suggested Nick.

“I like the sound of that.” replied Zack.

“Why are you two so barbaric?” Guy asked.

“I donno.” Nick and Zack replied

*The three of them speed up to capture the suspicious man*

“I-I-It’s Byakuya!” shouted Guy.

“Hey, Byakuya what are you doing out of Soul Society?!?!” questioned Zack.

“That is none of your concern Gunslinger.” replied Byakuya.

“Oh that son of a ...” Zack said but was interrupted by Nick.

“Zack cool down we need you to take down Gates.” said Nick.

*Zack tries bum rushing Byakuya but Nick and Guy knocked him out*

“Nick, what should we do?” asked Guy.
“Why the hell should I know? You’re the brains!” Nick replied.

“BYAKUYA, why are you here answer me!?!?” Nick shouted.

“I am here to slay Bill Gates.” Byakuya replied.

“Well I am afraid I can’t let you do that.” Nick said. “Therefore I challenge you!”

“Nick do not do it. He is said to be the strongest captain of all Soul Society.” warned Guy.

“I don’t care! You continue on and kill Bill, I will hold Byakuya off until you guys come back.” Nick said all brave and cool like (lol).

*Guy wakes Zack off explains the situation and they run off, Byakuya tries to stop them but Nick jumps in the way*

“Oh no you don’t you're fighting me.” said Nick.

“I see you have a sword. What is it?” Byakuya asked

“The only zanpaktou that is shaped like a rapier (Did you mean anything related to rape? XD).” replied Nick.

“WHAT A ZANPAKTOU!?!?!?!?!?” Byakuya screamed. “How could someone like you have a zanpaktou?”

“I am a Shinigami like my father before me. However unlike him I have taped (tapped?) into the destructive powers of the Hollows by becoming a Vaizard.” Nick said tauntingly.

“Who are you?” Byakuya asked.

“I am Nicholas James Thaddeus Lambro, Guardian of the Senate, the owner of the fencing Zanpaktoh and one that is going to kill you.” Nick answered.

“I see then I won’t go easy on you.” Byakuya said “Chire, Senbonzakura.”

“Kui Korosu (devour), Kijinakuma (pretty sure it mean fierce demon god)”

*While the two of them are fighting, Zack and Guy enter Bill’s house*

“Wow it is pretty big in here.” said Zack.

“Sure is, I wonder where he is though?” asked Guy.

“Who you looking for gentlemen?” Bill Gates asks.
“We’re looking for you!” Guy said…

To Be Continued

Chapter 3 End

Guy
03-05-2007, 06:22 AM
Haha, do you go around correcting grammatical errors in other ppl's fanfic, evanesque?

Lust
03-05-2007, 08:39 AM
well thats a good job shes doin:)

Evanesque
03-05-2007, 10:52 AM
Only when I'm reeeeally bored...yesh :redbiggri

I'll stop if you want me to XD

Lust
03-05-2007, 12:35 PM
well it doesnt bother me at all if you do that....you gotta ask exarkun if he want you to cont or not ;)

Anarchy
03-05-2007, 11:47 PM
YA know I appreciate it I usually right these at night so my grammar and train of thought sometimes are not what they should be. So please continue, Evanesque.

Evanesque
03-06-2007, 08:29 AM
Well, if you want me to, then I'd be more than happy...:redbiggri

Call me Ev btw...and yeh I guess it's my dumb journalistic thing that kicks in every now and then that makes me want to edit stuff XD

Wow, if I ever get mod powers, I fear I'd start correcting everyone's grammatical errors XD

Guy
03-07-2007, 02:19 AM
When's the next chapter gonna be out? I'm waiting...

Anarchy
03-07-2007, 08:45 AM
soon probably Saturday

Lust
03-11-2007, 08:46 AM
its already sunday:(

Anarchy
03-11-2007, 09:37 AM
hmm you're right *goes off to finish and post*

Lust
03-11-2007, 09:50 AM
hopefully,you finnish by today:)

Guy
03-11-2007, 06:17 PM
We're all waiting for it... Nick.

Anarchy
03-13-2007, 11:34 PM
posted chapter 4 on the first page.

Lust
03-14-2007, 12:22 AM
this is getting ridiculous...but total rip off the scene nickhollow vs byakuya from bleach epi 59 if i correct lol its funny thou good job~

Guy
03-14-2007, 12:55 AM
Lol, what a hilarious fanfic! I don't think I've ever said "wtf" so many times while reading it...

Anarchy
03-14-2007, 01:28 AM
Well I am glad you all liked t and I don't think I riped off of episode 59 hell I don't even remember episode 59.

Ronin36
03-14-2007, 01:30 AM
1st (I gotta get this outta the way), The 1st division vice-captain has a rapier type of zanpuktoh, but I will admit you'd kick his ass.

And 2nd, I would give the fanfic an 8/10. It was well written, but I had a lot of good laughs ^_^

Anarchy
03-14-2007, 01:37 AM
No he uses a foil (military version of the rapier) I used a rapier which is a civilian weapon (but I prefer it to the foil cuz it is lighter and it just looks cooler XD) but Thanks for the kudos and I am glad you liked it. BTW what was your favorite part?

Guy
03-14-2007, 04:31 AM
Eh... the first chapter where he came to the world 'cuz he was bored. Lol.

Lust
03-14-2007, 05:48 AM
the last part where bill gate unleashes his keyboard zanpaktou!! nerd weapon XD

Evanesque
03-14-2007, 08:45 AM
Funny story! XD

That was a nice one...something completely out of the ordinary. Normally, I'd be pissed at a story that ends so suddenly but this is different XD

Nice silly work, Exar!

Here's the editing for this chappie =O

I was reeeeeeally bored this time :redbiggri


Chapter 4
The Confrontation

“It seems that you have found me.” Bill Gates said.

“Prepare to die Gates!!!” Zack screamed.

As Zack began to charge, Byakuya fought with Nick. Their Zanpaktou clashed for hours until.

“I am sick of this Byakuya; let us finish this within the next five attacks, so I can at least see Bill Gates die.” Nick said.

“Fine, I will end this.” Byakuya said.

“Unfortunately, I will not see your demise.” Nick said in a sad voice.

“What do you mean? Byakuya questioned Nick. "There is only the two of us."

“I will show you. Um hold on for a second.” said Nick

Nick entered his mind and said “Tag.”

“Hehehehe, nice to meet you Byakuya, I am Exar Kunn and I will be the one to kill you,” Exar Kunn said as a hollow mask began to form around Nick’s face.

“What is this madness, I was to believe Vaizard controlled their inner hollow.” Byakuya said astounded.

“Well Byakuya, me and Nicky boy have made a truce. I fight the hard battles or the one he needs to end fast and he gives me a home. This also means that unlike the typical Vaizard I can keep the mask on for an exponential amount of time,” Exar explained. “Now may we end this?”

“Yes, I don’t see why not. However I must now kill you for you have become a threat to Soul Society...BANKAI,” Byakuya said in a cool and collected manner.

“Hehehe, Bankai.” Exar said.

Exar and Byakuya released all their reiatsu and charged at each other. An explosion occurred as their bankais (*there's no need for an apostrophe since the word is in plural*) clashed causing smoke to fill the air. From the smoke, Byakuya emerged while Exar was on the ground, slowly trying to get up.

“I see that you are stronger than me, however I have won the battle,” Exar said.

“Yes, you are correct,” Byakuya said looking at the gash in his side.

“My friend Guy, (*omit 'he'*)will heal your wounds when you get there. I am sure he wasn’t stupid enough to die yet.”

(*Next line*)The hollow mask disappeared as Nick spoke.

“Why are you helping me?” Byakuya asked.

“Because you survived his bankai, and any man that can do that deserves my help.” Nick replied.

Nick helped Byakuya to Bill Gates’ manor. Upon entering, they found Zack and Guy on the floor.

Nick rushed to them but as he got to them, someone yelled, "It’s a trap get out of there!!!”

Nick turned around to see Guy running at him, and when he turned back Bill Gates grabbed his neck and threw him back.

Guy rushed to Nick while Zack rushed to help Byakuya stand.

“This guy is tuff. Don’t underestimate him.” Guy said.

“Right *cough* (*No comma*) go help Byakuya.” Nick said. “Zack and I will hold him off until he is healed."

Zack and Nick began to battle Bill Gates while Guy healed Byakuya.

“So you are Bill Gates, I wonder what your Zanpaktou looks like?” Nick said.

“I don’t know. It all happened so fast. I was running at him with my guns a blazin when next I know Guy is healing me.” Zack said.

“Well you watch my back and I’ll watch yours, 'k?” Nick said.

“If you two are done talking I have more people to scam and a meeting at five o’ clock with the Bobs. So if we could wrap this up.” Gates said as he pulled out a keyboard shaped Zanpaktou.

“What the hell is that?!?!” Nick and Zack exclaimed.

“This is my Zanpaktou, Gateway.” Gates answered. “Open, Gateway”

“Kui Korosu, Kijinakuma.” Nick said.

“Sha Nuku (shoot through), Meidojuuhou (Hell’s Guns).” Zack said.

The three of them fought until Gates threw Zack and Nick back. Byakuya entered the fight.

“You truly are the strongest in the human world but now you will meet your match.” Byakuya said. “Chire, Senbonzakura.”

Byakuya charged at Gates and their Shikai’s clashed (*what's the 'until' for? o_O*)

“You’re pretty strong for a shinigami, what are you captain class?” Gates asked

“Yes I am the captain of the sixth division, but enough of this, it is about time for me to return, so BANKAI!!!” Byakuya exclaimed.

“What is that??? What did you do???” Gates said in a scared voice.

“This is bankai, and it seems that you have not encountered it before. So I will let you leave on one condition.” Byakuya said.

“Yes whatever it is I will do it, just please let me live.” Gates begged.

“You must become my servant and obey every word I say.” Byakuya said.

“Yes anything, my master.” Gates said.

“Now I want you to give these three what ever they want and I will return in three months to make sure you are doing everything I say.” Byakuya said.

He opened the gates to Soul Society and left.

“You heard him, now give us a new Xbox or a new Xbox 360.” Nick said.

“Yes, sir right away.” Gates said as he left to get three Xbox 360s and every game out. “I hope this pleases you.”

“Thank you Gates, I hope we never meet again.” Nick said as the three of them left.

Three months passed and true to his word Byakuya returned. He wanted the things he sent from Soul Society to be done immediately.

“BILL!!!!” Byakuya said.

“Yes master.” Gates replied.

“Did you schedule me for my "I am better than everyone" speech because I don’t see it on my planner” Byakuya asked.

“Umm... yes sir I'm pretty sure I did.” Gates (*double gates XD*) answered.

“Well I don’t see it you know what that means right?” Byakuya asked.

“Oh god no not that!!!” Gates cried.

“Yes that.” Byakuya said.

“Stupid Byakuya cutting my pay again I oughta…” Gates said just under his breath(*no 'e' for breath*).

“WHAT WAS THAT!?!?!?” Byakuya yelled.

“Oh nothing master.” Gates replied as he walked off crying.

THE END

Anarchy
03-14-2007, 11:03 AM
Well thank you and I am glad you liked it . Um the second installment should be out as soon as I come up with an idea XD. I added the edits and I hope I didn't leave any of your side notes XD. Welp I off to take the ACTs.

Guy
03-15-2007, 01:33 AM
Good luck, Nick!

The keyboard zanpakutou was the ownage!

Lust
03-15-2007, 04:50 PM
“This is my Zanpaktou, Gateway.” Gates answered. “Open, Gateway”
if this it the shikai that mean he cant bankai with his keyboard?

Anarchy
03-18-2007, 04:41 AM
nope he didn't even know that such power existed.

Lust
03-18-2007, 01:56 PM
so basically,he dont know bankai but he know shikai?

Anarchy
03-18-2007, 11:11 PM
Ya, not bad for figuring out on your own Ae.

Guy
03-18-2007, 11:18 PM
Are you gonna write any more fanfics?

Anarchy
03-19-2007, 11:32 PM
Um probably but write now things at home are kinda hectic. So with the next month I will have posted a second one but I think this one will deal with us three primarily but with guest stars such as Byakuya, Kenpachi, Hitsugaya, and many more!!!

Guy
03-20-2007, 06:00 AM
Woot! I'm looking forward to it!

Anarchy
03-20-2007, 07:58 PM
*clears through* someone wanna give me a random topic?

Guy
03-21-2007, 01:34 AM
Um... a random topic for ur next fanfic?

Evanesque
03-21-2007, 12:59 PM
If it is for the next fic then I dunno, I don't have anything specific in mind but it's got to be as silly as this one XD

Anarchy
03-21-2007, 08:47 PM
Began writing the new one it is starting off serious and will goes funny. Also this one will be longer about 8 chapters (maybe depends how demanding you guys are lol)

Guy
03-22-2007, 12:58 AM
OK, give us a basic outline, please?

Anarchy
03-22-2007, 08:47 PM
There is a unit of shinigami (surpasing captain and some captain-commander lvl) called the Guardians. After a while they were disbanded and regrouped into Guardians of the Royal family and Guardian Knights. The Knight were assigned the job of destroying Vasto Lordes. Well when they had thought they completed their mission they sealed them selves away until needed again. Now since Aizen betrayed SS it is our job and several captains job to reawaken them and repel Aizen. I got some Ideas after that but that is the summary of the Intro. I mean if ya want to read the Intro after I post it for a more in depth description that would be cool but ya don't have to.

Guy
03-25-2007, 01:15 AM
Wow, that's cool! I'm looking forward to it. Tell me when you decided to write this fanfic.

Evanesque
03-25-2007, 09:57 AM
Yep looking forward to that myself. Reading the small description you've provided, it seems like it's going to be a bit serious compared to this silly lil fic.

Anyway, good luck with that. Are you going to post the chappies in here or are you going to make a seperate thread?

Anarchy
03-25-2007, 05:45 PM
probably a separate thread and @ guy will do