Rayster
03-05-2007, 01:45 PM
I wrote this quite a while ago...when i thought i would continue... but it seems with less time available i scrapped it. Here it is anyway, the starting........
since i have the entire thing planned out, (which will allow the title to make much more sense) i may continue it....... tho i've said that before in regard to this fic....
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He held her hand, and watched her ever-vibrant eyes close slowly.
‘Hisana…’ he whispered as he saw his own reflection within them…and beyond he
saw the fall of a cherry blossom petal over his shoulder.
A gust of wind blew past them, the nearby tree of blossoms whistled among his
jacket, floating gently around on Hisana’s frail figure.
His eyes shut tight; Byakuya could no longer hold back the shuddered breath
building within for so long. The cries escaped his throat in stuttered breaths, his
breathing ragged.
He was sure there was no one to witness the event, but he no longer cared.
Tears streamed down his face as he felt his chest tighten. And for the first time in
his life he knew what it meant to be broken hearted. He could feel the pain in his
chest; the splitting of the heart...and he felt for sure it was really breaking.
For all his power, and all his prominence, there was nothing he could do to save
her…he felt helpless, alone and afraid once more.
No more, he decided. He would never allow himself to be hurt again, and he
gazed at her loveliness through teary eyes, her hollowed eyes and sunken
features lost on the Nobleman of Kuchiki. He whispered her name once more and
held her hand tighter, knowing he would never let go…
Her eyes closed when the wind died, as the last of the cherry blossom petals
touched the earth.
since i have the entire thing planned out, (which will allow the title to make much more sense) i may continue it....... tho i've said that before in regard to this fic....
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Release
He held her hand, and watched her ever-vibrant eyes close slowly.
‘Hisana…’ he whispered as he saw his own reflection within them…and beyond he
saw the fall of a cherry blossom petal over his shoulder.
A gust of wind blew past them, the nearby tree of blossoms whistled among his
jacket, floating gently around on Hisana’s frail figure.
His eyes shut tight; Byakuya could no longer hold back the shuddered breath
building within for so long. The cries escaped his throat in stuttered breaths, his
breathing ragged.
He was sure there was no one to witness the event, but he no longer cared.
Tears streamed down his face as he felt his chest tighten. And for the first time in
his life he knew what it meant to be broken hearted. He could feel the pain in his
chest; the splitting of the heart...and he felt for sure it was really breaking.
For all his power, and all his prominence, there was nothing he could do to save
her…he felt helpless, alone and afraid once more.
No more, he decided. He would never allow himself to be hurt again, and he
gazed at her loveliness through teary eyes, her hollowed eyes and sunken
features lost on the Nobleman of Kuchiki. He whispered her name once more and
held her hand tighter, knowing he would never let go…
Her eyes closed when the wind died, as the last of the cherry blossom petals
touched the earth.