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Analog
03-17-2007, 11:50 PM
12th Division Contest #3
Theme: TV Shows
Note: Animes do not count as TV shows for this contest.
Due Date: Last day to enter is Saturday, March 31st, 2007 @ 11:59:59 PM PST

You must make something on your own thats related to the theme. It can be a sig, drawing, video, amv, poem, short story, any piece of art you create yourself. As long as you make it yourself and it can be viewed on the net, its acceptable, if you have any questions on if something is acceptable PM or MSN me.
Prizes: 200pts from Alienor and Analog(thats all together 400pts!), +rep from both of us

Rules:
1. Must have been created during the contest time frame, not before.
2. Must have been made by yourself.
3. No porn/racism. Minor Ecchi allowed.
4. You are ALLOWED to change your entry, but just edit your post.
5. Only post your entry in this thread, no other posts will be tolerated, any questions can be PMed to me.
6. All other CB rules apply.
7. Have FUN.

- This thread is for serious entries only, no joke entries. Such posts, and all posts without an entry will be deleted.
- No Reserving, post with finished product.
- Please disable your personal signature for this topic.
- Please keep the thread neat by posting only your entry and no comments: don't comment on other entries or your own.
- Along with your entry, post which theme and/or contest type(what contestants must do) you would like to see in the next 12th Division Contest. Whoever wins the contest will get his/her selection the following contest.

I would ideally like everyone in the division to enter this contest but I understand some people are busy, but thats why I gave a pretty wide time frame so hopefully everyone has a chance to make something. It doesn't matter how "bad" you think it is, don't be embarrassed, if anyone makes fun of anyone's entry then they will have to deal with me! Its up to you really but I would be very pleased to have everyone enter. Personally I won't enter because I want it to be a contest between all of the members of the division(plus alienor and I are the judges)! Alienor can enter if she wishes, it is up to her.


For all questions PM me or Alienor, if you want to ask everyone, ask in the 12th Division Contest Discussion and leave this thread for entries only.

EnzJon
03-18-2007, 04:32 AM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v433/Forte9933/sig3_2.png

TV Show: MacGyver

EDIT: I read the post in the lounge about no animes being allowed... so I'll come up with something else. I'm lucky I looked in that thread, huh?

Kazmiz
03-18-2007, 03:58 PM
Battlestar Galactica. :)

http://i116.photobucket.com/albums/o13/sarz_kze/cylonzcopy.png

blackfox
03-19-2007, 03:26 AM
LOST
p.s.-i'm still really bad with making sigs lol
http://i133.photobucket.com/albums/q70/pocman3/Contest3-2.jpg

Ethanol
03-31-2007, 04:49 AM
Show: Deadwood
http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c74/Bastaldo/deadwood.png

ghey b
04-01-2007, 05:53 AM
Chappelle's Show XD

http://img142.imageshack.us/img142/8119/chappellesigcopyht0.png

Askand
04-01-2007, 07:19 AM
*sighs and yawns* Seems I wont win this time either LOL. I just wrote a story based on the TV program CSI: Crime INvestigation Scene. Unfortunately the daughter of a friend managed to erase my story so I had to work on it again. I hope you like it and have fun. Good luck on the contest poeple. I'm beat and I have to work in 2 hours.lol

[/spolier]CSI: Crime Investigation Scene Soul Society

The night was calm and quiet. Although the soft breeze was the only sound or movement of the place still a sense of tension was found in the air. The sudden interruption of the silence by the erratic steps gave the night a new level of activeness not shown before. The man was looking from time to time to see if his pursuer was still behind him. Not caring for where he was running he soon finds himself inside the maze of the city’s streets. After a while he stopped to see that he was lost. The looks of the streets were the same all of them identical on shape, decoration and environment. Looking for a way to escape the man felt the presence of something behind him. Before he could react half of his arm was on the ground while a gash of blood sprayed against the wall. The second blow was as fast as the first one making it the final blow. The man couldn’t saw his enemy only he felt is death.
At the top of Sereitei the surveillance stations detected the act. Undying was on a friendly visit when the alarm went off.

“What’s going on?” asked with authority.
“Taichou we got reading Hollow type on the Karakura City suburbs. It look like is a high level hollow, said one of the low rank level shinigamis.

Undying went to check the level and was amazed by the amount of energy this one displayed. It looks like he was hunting down a kyoka and succeeds. As for the tiny amount of level energy that was disappearing from the radar. By the looks of it the 6th will be on charge of the events tonight. And if that ryoka had just died maybe they could get a chance of catching the bastard sooner than later. Turning around he headed for the exit while he imparted some orders.

“Call the first seat of the 6th I want them ready before I arrive to my headquarters. ALso call Dualshock we need his squad now. This time he wont get away.” And left the place.

Dualshock was trying to survive the mountain of paperwork he got on his desk. His new position as Taichou of the 12th Division of Gotei 13 was not as glamourus as he thought it would be. At least his passion for solving crime scenes was still there and since the division was already involved he even got to participate on the scene collecting data. He took a pair of files from the Academy the arrived like more than a week ago but now it he had the time to revise them. Since Askand was the new principal and head of the staff on the Academy she would send him the info of new recruits for the division. Thankfully to her position they will be able to find good team members like Araharu and EnzJon. The two were experts on the crime scene on their former life so it was going to be a big help for them on the current circumstances. Dual took a look at the enormous wall in front of him a big map of Karakura city was hanging from the wall. Certain parts were painted with different colors representing certain crime scene with their dates. On the next wall a detail legend with the explanation of each crime was also posted. Askand and Amenokitarou took their time mounting the place so they could work better. Since the Hollow killings begins the amount of bodies increased. Each crime was more violent than the other and still the only link in common was the mode of killing but the murderer seemed to be different each time. Nothing else was in common. Dual was tired of looking at the wall the organization was perferct but still being more than 3 days without a decent night of sleep was taking a toll on him. Soon his eyelids got very heavy from analyzing all the date for the millionth time. But when he thought he was going to sleep a commotion was heard from the town hall. Frowning a bit irritated he approached the door only to jump back when it suddenly opened and Alienor entered like a storm.

“Taichou!! We got…uh why are you looking that terrible? Are you ok?” asked Alienor seeing how bad looked.
“Its almost 3 days since I took more than 6 hours of sleep Ali did something happened to make a commotion at this late hours?” said Dual with a sigh.
“The headquaters called we are going to earth, it looks like we got a fresh scene from Karakura.” Said Alieno with an excited almost cheerful voice.

Dualshock stood froze for a moment. This was the moment they were waiting for. Usually some of the crime scenes were one or two days old. Much of the data was erased by the elements of the human themselves. Maybe this time this scene will help they solve this new case they got on their hands. This opportunity was the one they were looking for. Doing a headshake Dual began the preparations.

“Call everyone I want every single member of this division in this crime scene. Also I need Ask for this one Ali maybe we can get lucky.” Finish Dual with a certain tone of hope in his voice.

Alienor didn’t hesitate to shunpo as soon as the orders were given. This was indeed the opportunity they were hoping for. And no one will let it waste not a bit.
The group arrived after the 6th division already divided the area. Since the 12th division was their experts on technology and scientific discoveries they also made the incursion on the crime scene investigations. Studying the ryoka;s methods and procedures the 12th division assembled a huge and amazing team of hollow forensic personnel. First was their leader Dualshock as their leader and a sharp mind for finding little details. Alienor, Godivine, and blackfox were in charge of the lab testing but also they were quick in data or evidence recollection. Buuhan1, Black Fox and Kaze were the experts on theory sampling and crime scene reenactment. As for Irritating Monkey and Amenokitarou their field of profiling was unique among the division members. J.B Killa their artist and graphics solver since he could perfectly make the same image a person describe no matter how hard this person makes the description, his companions Bak3don1hg and Taiyou no Kishi were also good artist at the time of recreating the scene. S.J. Shinigami was their contact on the underworld and also a gather information resource as well as a sharp nose to sense the different levels of hollow in the area near the crime scene. And last but not least there was Askand her ability although not as scientific as the rest it was useful especially if the scene was as fresh as this one. Her gift or curse was to be posses by the victim at least for a minute before the victim dies. IN the past times the possession might had been soft and without consequences. But not this crime scene, in this one the victim’s essence was still around and this will imply a most violent possession than the others.
On their way down to earth Dual made sure Askand would be aware of the situation. She was calm although by the look on her hands a little shake could be seen. The woman was still calm due to the nature of her gift. It was discover by accident when on one scene she began to act like one of the victims on that time her husband Syche had to shake her a bit to take her out of the trance she was once since she managed to behave like she was going to be killed. Since then she began her training on the spirits manipulation with the former 9th division captain Sanzora. The training was hard but she managed to control her gift in no time.
After the team arrived into the scene everyone except Askand got their hands busy recollecting evidence. Measures, bag with tag everything was used and since the team this time was a big team the job was done in no time. After they were done the turn for Askand came. The woman took her time to search the scene when she found the streak of blood on the wall she knew this was the place for the ceremony. Taking her zanpaktou from her belt she gave it to Alienor which was a bit apprehensive of the situation. Taking a look at everyone Askand noticed their concern.

“Don’t worry I will be alright.” With this she proceeds to touch one of the streaks of blood from the wall. The effects took place immediately, the strike of power and violence let Askand know she was not being possessed by the victim but by the killer himself. Invaded by darkness and evil her eyes turned into two big empty pools of black and her face seemed too looked a bit drained.

“Taichou something is wrong that’s not victim’s possession.” Said Alienor alarm at the sight of Askand getting bent down like a hunchback and starting to look more like a Hollow.
“She got a minute before she begins to be absorbed by souls of this person Dualshock and she’s only been possessed by less than 10 seconds. What’s going on?” Asked Irritating Monkey slow reaching for her zanpaktou.
“Stop everyone, before we move I want you to remember what we planned in cases like this right, come on lets move around her.” said Dualshock while he was approaching Askand.

Askand saw the movement and restrict her body from moving the killer was a strong one and yet she couldn’t be able to tell who he was. His face was but just a blur but his reiatsu was so powerful that began to suffocate her. While gasping for breath the scenes began to pass before her eyes like a movie. The first victim, the pain, the agony, the brutality of the kill. Repulsed by it Askand tried not to watch but it was like she couldn’t take her eyes from images. Every kill made her cry even more until she bent on her knees and tried to get out of the possession.
On the outside of her body Askand was not reacting but the Hollow was trying to make more kills. Consuming her soul little by little was making difficult for the rest of the division to hard to broke the possession. Dual and the others surrounded Askand and began to exorcise her. The effect was immediate and soon after she was released she collapsed on the floor on a very bad condition. She tried to talk but her voice was gone. Alienor got closed to her and managed to get some of her words while the 4th divisions provide her some emergency treatment.
The 12th division went back to Soul Society and worked on their new evidence. Still at the end of the day there was another dead end. Frustrated the members of the division went to a general meeting to see how they could get the pieces together.

“Ok people we got 10 killings and the only common fact is the method of killing. Still we haven’t seen another detail that could help us solve the case. Askand was our hope but this thing went wrong…” Dualshock was interrupted by Alienor with concern on her voice.
“Is she alright Taichou?”
“Yes, Nomadic told me she will be fine. Syche is there with her and by the looks of it she wont be able to work with us a for a time. Now let’s see the records and see what we can get. Finished Dualshock not showing his concern for Askand and in part blaming himself for letting her do that stunt.
A couple of hours later everyone seemed to give up. The cases were going no where and no matter if they were examined one by one the result was the same. Nothing.
The group morale was down on the ground and not even the words Askand said were enough. “He changed “was the only thing she could muster before loosing consciousness.
At the end of the fourth day this was not moving anywhere. The pile of date was on the big round table where the group dines from time to time.

“Is useless no matter how we look at it. Everything looks the same but with different killers.” Complained Black Fox while throwing the papers on the table since he was already to the core with reading the same thing over and over.
“But the answer must be there.” Tried to say Irritating Monkey more confident than what she seemed to feel.
“Yeah but no matter what we do all the data is there. The only thing is that is the same shit with a different size.” Said Godivine take another look at his food.

It was this last sentence that caught Dualshock on his tracks.

“What did you said GD?” asked Dualshock.
“Same shit different sizes why?” answered GoDivine a bit confuse.

IN a fraction of a Second Dualshock saw everything clear.

“Ali get me all the info you got on the crimes I want every detail now. Kaze bring me the laser I think I have an idea of who might be the killer.” Said Dualshock while taking out some ancient books from the library.

The time went by and the night came a woman was jogging until she heard a thud behind her. Horrified by what she saw she began to run until she found herself trapped into the maze of streets on Karakura City. Once she stops near the wall where the dead man was killed. The woman felt on her knees when the presence life-force took her over by surprised. With a winner’s smile the hollow took some steps until he found himself in front of her.

“Dunno worry woman you would not feel a thing.”
“Thanks but I guess is your turned to be on the spotlight don’t you?” said the female voice of Alienor.

From all directions the 12th division members appeared and plant exorcism tags on the hollow paralyzing him in an instant. The lack of movement provides time to the rest of the division to kill the hollow. As the thing went down Undying approaches Dualshock and shaked his hand.

“Congratulations, you manage to get one of the killers….”
“In fact Undying he was the only one who was making the killing on Karakura City. The thing is he was a type of Hollow that no one had encounter yet. According to the results of all the crime scenes all the MO were the same but they didn’t were the same on the size of the slashes. Still when we run a sample of blood found on the last scene we proved it was only one killer. According to these old archives I found there is a type of Hollow than can evolve by draining certain amount of souls. This one we were killed was on the verge to enter the stage of Vasto Lorde before becoming an Arrancar. Said Dualshock while Undying stood silent for a minute.
“I don’t care as long as I get rid of him the better.” Said Undying while wrapping up the scene and leaving.

Dualshock took a look at the place although it was the same please as the last crime scene he knew that if this race was coming back it was another battle his division was already to take.

The End?




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