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Mighty Aramir
03-19-2007, 11:25 PM
This is a hard poem, a sad episode of my life, and now i'm glad to help anyone who feels or does the same thing...
Note: I dont do this anymore, its long forgotten!
This old forest is my prison
memories of sorrow it holds.
There has to be a reason,
and it might have been my fault.

Steadily the blade runs,
a crimson river begins to flow.
The hate, the pain, the love
its all worthless, there is no more.

My heart is frozen,
my soul turned black.
I cant seem to find an exit
to this flesh and bones sack.

The carpet is stained,
the cut is done,
the hate released
but the pain is never gone.

Isis
03-20-2007, 04:20 AM
Omg, Aramir this is a sad one. The imagery is beautiful and portrays the emotion bittersweetly.

Evanesque
03-20-2007, 09:52 AM
OMG, this means something happened. Didn't I tell you some time ago not to play around with blades? It's not going to help take away pain...it nly brings more[color="black"]cutter -.-
j/k

It's a beautiful poem but of course there's a reason behind it. Won't you tell your metalhead sis what happened? Pwease?

>BANKAI RIROU<
03-30-2007, 12:19 PM
from now don`t play with blade except if that so needed................<<<<<<<<>>>>>>>>>