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Katen Kyoukotsu
03-20-2007, 02:58 AM
(Comments pls)


Rage on, Rage on
Little infants
Fire in your eyes
What can we do
Save look towards the skies
For an answer
So long sought
Wrought of Iron
On we fought
For a day
When the boy
Lives in peace
Far away, a new day

On our dreary road
We left the path of gold
Nothing moves this way
Sacrifice for naught
Though we fought
Though we fought

Can you hear their cries
Orphans of a new age
Abandoned for a dream
That’s filled with death and lies
And somber scions wave
Watching as they pass
Why was death the answer
To death most imminent
We see it every day
Another wave’s goodbye
And though we stand confused
We never think to wonder why
Our loses are not mused

And on this cold, dark, heartless road
We’ve left that wonderful path of gold
And the night is quiet, all is still
We gave our lives for naught
Though we fought
Though we fought

>BANKAI RIROU<
03-30-2007, 12:29 PM
hey i don`t know what do you say

Mighty Aramir
03-31-2007, 02:02 AM
very good, nicely explained, yet the flow and rhyme is awkward...

>BANKAI RIROU<
03-31-2007, 05:18 AM
the rhyme

boredomlover93
04-01-2007, 07:40 AM
i can see some truth in it. i like that.