Memento

[Askand]

Although is short is all I could muster to get out the day I wrote it. I hope you like it. As always I will be grafult for you input thanks
Askand
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Years went by and we never got a taste of our love again
Running to opposite sides we grew apart
Turning into strangers that no longer bear the mark of lovers
Your life is on the land of Giants, Power and Manhood
My life among the land of Women, Love and Magic
Still a little glimpse of what our past life was used to be remains
To let us know that although we haven’t see each other in years
Our magic is still our strength
Our courage the armor
And Love the weapon to conquer all.

[Lady Ushio]

wow...good poem you have there... ^_^

[A2k]

It kinda unrolled like a story. In the last 3 lines it almost transformed from what could have been an old man telling an old tale, (not that it seemed to be of course) into a fairy tale, with a young woman narrating the magical ending.

I liked it, a touching piece. =)

[Askand]

lol*blushes and bows* thanks. To be honest I just began to write then suddenly it stops. I dunnot why I couldnt keep it to make it long. Maybe it was the way it was supposed to be THanks again :)

[>BANKAI RIROU<]

hey that` nice poem,,,,,i like that>>>

[Lady Ushio]

The title reminds me of the movie I've watched years ago. The title is the same too, - but it's not a romantic movie...Still, good job on that short poem you got.

[boredomlover93]

i reckon it sounds better short. short and simple as they say